Monday, September 3, 2018

Golden Gash!!: Demon Revolution Army (remake) [Chapter 8b Alternate]

Golden Gash!!: Demon Revolution Army (remake) [Ch. 8b Alternate]

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Golden Gash!!: Demon Revolution Army (remake)


Golden Gash!!: Demon Revolution Army, also known as "Konjiki no Gash!!: Mamono no Kakumei-gun (金色のガッシュ! !：魔物の革命軍)" and "Zatch Bell!: Mamodo Revolution Army" is a Zatch Bell! / Konjiki no Gash (Bell)!! fan fiction that I created. This fan fiction takes place directly after the manga, more specifically after the one-shot Konjiki no Gash!! Gaiden manga. It takes place a whole year after the Demon Battle of the third millennium (200X A.D.) has started. 27 years later, an evil organization called the Demon Revolution Army is formed. This Revolution Army plans on overthrowing the kind King Zatch (Gash) Bell and put Demon World into chaos. Heroes, including Raiden Bell and Rain Bell, who are the (theoretical) sons of King Zatch (Gash) Bell and Queen Patie (Penny) Bell, as well as Zeon Bell (now a good demon) and his Demon World Military, are trying to put a stop to them. Can these heroes stop this revolution army from overthrowing King Zatch (Gash) Bell and prevent chaos from occurring in the Demon World?

This is a remade version of the original Golden Gash!!: Demon Revolution Army fan fiction. The remake's storyline is similar to the original but written differently with some major changes to the story but still flows along with the original storyline. In this fan fiction remake, I will be using Japanese names and Japanese terms instead of their English counterparts.

Chapter 8b Alternate: Protection from a Brother


NOTE: This is an alternate version of the second half of Chapter 8 of the remade version of the Golden Gash!!: Demon Revolution Army fan fiction series. Be sure to read at least Chapter 8a before reading this.

WARNING: This spin-off chapter will also be taking place after the series so there may be SPOILERS for Remakes: Chapter 9–16.

Recap


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Demon World is now under attack by demonic sorcerers of the Demon Revolution Army: Death General #3 Zeil and Death General #4 Zophise. Adult Demon King Gash Bell did not let the children to fight this time and decided to take on Zophise while his brother, Demon World Military Commander Zeon Bell, took on Zeil. In the midst of the battle, Brago interfered the fight and took on Zophise for himself but got too cocky and became out of commission out for a while. Zeil, with his mastery of swordsmanship, sorcery, gain the upper advantage against the Military Commander and immobilized him to the ground with ice and electricity. Zeil then decided to go after the young children and humans used his most powerful combination attack: Shin Sorudo on his Fusion Greatsword, enchanted with both light and darkness, and launching an enormous aerial blade of twilight at the gang. Everyone put out their defensive spells but this powerful attack was bashing through each shield. In a desperate attempt, King Gash ran towards them, willing to sacrifice himself to save everyone else. Will the King save everyone by sacrificing his life, or...
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Scene: A battlefield outside the Capital City of Demon World (evening)


Everyone reacted in surprise as adult Demon King Gash Bell appeared in-front of them. Commander Zeon was still held to the ground, struggling to break free, yelling, "Gash-sama?!," with Raiden reacting, "Dad?!" Commander Zeon, who's been willing to protect his kingly brother ever since he redeemed himself after the Demon Battle, used all of his might and strength to regain control of his nerves from the paralysis of Zeil's electricity and broke out the ice that ensnared him to the ground as quickly as possible, and quickly teleported in front of His Majesty, instantly taking the hit of Zeil's aerial blade of light and darkness. Adult King Gash was shocked and said as he dropped to the ground, "Zeon-nīsan!" Commander Zeon was sliced in half but the twilight blade went off direction afterward, hitting a boulder. Princess Koruru cried out, "Noooo!!!," seeing her husband sliced in half with blood all over, but quickly incanted, "Shin Raifojio," creating a magical aura around his upper torso to keep him alive. The main group was worried and adult King Gash, "Zeon-nīsan!" But Nurse Tio deactivated her shield and they ran towards the King's torso with Raiden yelling, "Zeon-ojisan!!!" Princess Koruru said while crying, "Tio, please save him!" From a distance, Death General #3 Zeil said in disappointment but got over it, "Ahh, darn! So close! For a second, I thought I the King was going to suicide into my attack! I thought I pinned down Zeon good but, oh well!"

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Head Nurse Tio responded to Princess Koruru, "I'm on it. Shin Saifojio! Someone, grab his lower half for—" Nurse Tio summoned four giant, healing swords that can be used to completely restore someone or a group in the area, however... "Oh no, you don't! Gigano Radomu!" Zophise shot a large explosive ball and destroyed the Military Commander's lower body with Nurse Tio yelling in high pitch, "Nooo!!!" Commander Zeon said with blood coming out of his mouth, "Forget me! I'm practically dead." Princess Koruru cried out, "Nooo! I... I don't want to lose you!" Adult Demon King Gash said in tears, "Darn it! It was supposed to be me. Brother, why?! I don't want to lose another family member!" Prince Raiden and Prince Rain ran towards their dying uncle, "Zeon-ojisan!" Nurse Tio was crying out, "Why isn't my spell working?!" Commander Zeon said, "I said... forget about—Kawh!" The military commander coughed out blood. Princess Koruru cried out, "Zeon-anata!," while maintaining her spell. Commander Zeon said, "Koruru... I'm sorry that... I've been a horrible husband. Live on... as brother's new queen... Release your spells!" Raiden yelled out, "But Uncle...!," with Prince Rain crying out, "Zeon-ojisan! I don't want to lose you too!" Young Prince Zeon stated, then yelled in anger, "This is pathetic... Why are you giving up your life?! Is this what I have become?!" Commander Zeon said, "Ever since... Gash-sama became King... you promised... you'll always protect him... for now on. Now, Koruru... Tio... just... end my suffering already." Princess Koruru and Nurse Tio cried out as they ended their ineffective spells. With Koruru's Shin Raifojio ended, Commander Zeon died and his corpse was extracted by Death General #2 Zecross from a distance as everyone, even Demon World Military (after defeating all Zeil's dark clones and Zophise's minions), cried out, "Zeon-sama!/Commander!/Your Highness!"

From the far distance, as Death General #2 Zecross extracted the military commander's corpse, he said, "Well, it is not the Demon King but Demon World's Military Commander will be good enough. I'll come back later when he dies." Zecross then disappeared. Back on the main grounds, adult King Gash cried out in agony, "This isn't right... I was the one who's supposed to die!" Young King Gash's paranoia lessened but was depressed from his brother's older self's death and said, "So... so... my bad dream... was false?" Apparently, the precognition that the young King had was false this time. Or did Commander Zeon cheated the elder King Gash's death by creating a miracle and sacrificing himself? Anyways, the dark aura that surrounded the young Demon King transferred to the adult Demon King, increasing his grief and sorrow, and Pancho reacted as he saw just a glimpse of it, what was that? Kiyomaro asked the elder King Gash, "Are you okay, older Gash?" Adult King Gash cried in a high pitch tone, "Eh... No... First my parents... then my beloved wife... and now... my dear brother... Why does everyone die on me?! Why is it my family?" Raiden was worried and yelled, "Dad?!"
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Zeil and Zophise were getting impatient and Zophise said impatiently, "Are you done over there?!" Zeil said, "Now's my chance to kill the King while his guard's down!" Zophise interfered, yelling, "Oh no, you don't! I will be the one to kill the King!" Zeil got annoyed and argued back, "Heh?! Says who?" Zophise stated, "You are not fit of being King." Zeil said, "Oh yeah, I will show you how kingly I can become!" Zophise said, "Oh please, you never participated in the Demon Battle in the Human World many years ago, unlike me!" Zeil argued, "It doesn't matter! You don't need to participate some stupid Demon Battle to become Demon King! Anyways, we cannot sit here and argue! Let's kill the King while we have the chance!"

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Prince Raiden was getting annoyed and yelled at them in anger, "Enough! Neither of you will be King!" The others reacted, "Raiden?!" Raiden's anger started increasing even more and Raiden yelled, "How dare you kill my uncle?! Zeil, for killing my uncle... and using him to kill my mom, you'll be the first to die! Zaruku! Ginisu Zaruku! Rai'oh Zaruku!" Prince Raiden activated the two spell requirements for Rai'oh Zaruku and transformed into Thunder King Rai'oh (雷王, Raiō), the thunder dragon sealed within him (and his clothing). Adult King Gash's tears slowed down as he reacted in shock and worrisome, "Raiden? Rai'oh?!" Suddenly, an invisible black smoke that was surrounding the elder Demon King moved towards the transformed Raiden. Pancho—who was able to see it—reacted, thinking to himself, wait, I know I'm not just seeing things. What was that? The invisible dark gas gathered around the transformed Raiden, which then intensified Raiden's emotions even more. The transformed Raiden flew towards Zeil at high speed with a lot of anger and hatred in his mind. Paralyzed in fear from reading Raiden's burning mind while hearing evil laughter coming from Raiden's dark aura, Zeil was unable to dodge it and got himself in the same situation as Dark Zeon: Inside Raiden's dragon mouth, pushing against Raiden's teeth.

Zophise was worried and wondered, "What the heck—? Zeil!!!" Suddenly and surprisingly, Brago returned back to the field with some injury and his fur coat destroyed with burning anger and hatred into his eyes, "Zophise!" Zophise reacted in fear, "B-B-Brago?! I thought I killed you!" It would take a lot more than Digan Teoradomu to take out the mighty Brago. Brago put out his hands and casted his ultimate gravity spell, "Shin Baberuga Gurabidon!," creating a massive gravitational field that literally crushed Zophise into the ground as the ground quaked. Zophise was literally being crushed to death but suddenly, "Brago, stop!" Ninja Vice Captain Byonko slowly walked up to Brago, injured from fighting Zophise's army but his army was already finished and Byonko continued, "I said a long time ago that I wanted to be the one to crush Zophise. You're not even a warrior of our military, so stay out of our way or we'll deal with you too." The same invisible-dark gas also spread towards the Ninja Vice Captain, giving him the black aura that Raiden has too, but almost no one could notice it. Brago stopped his attack and said, "Whatever," walking away from the battlegrounds. As the enraged Vice Captain Byonko walks towards the immobilized Zophise, he incants, "Nyusorudo!," summoning a green-slime sword in his right webbed hand. Vice Captain Byonko, with full of hatred towards Zophise, said to him, "Out of all these years-gero, I've been wanting to get revenge on you for killing mine and the former queen's families. And now your friend took out my master's life." Zophise was shaking in fear, unable to move due to all of his bones broken, and Vice Captain Byonko said, "Your punishment will be an execution! Die Zophise! GERO!!!" and prepares to execute Zophise on the ground with his slime sword in hand.

During the time when Zophise was worried for Zeil before Brago attacked him, the transformed Demon Prince Raiden had Zeil in his dragon mouth, held by his dragon teeth. Suddenly, while in his transformed state, Raiden's anger and hatred grew even further. Raiden yelled without moving his dragon mouth in a deep, angry voice, "Zeil... you killed my uncle... and you killed my mother by using my uncle... I'll never forgive you and you'll die the same way I destroyed Dark Zeon. Gigano..." Before Raiden was charging up with a Gigano Zakeruga in his dragon mouth, Zeil said, holding onto Raiden's dragon teeth, "No way am I going to die the same way Dark Zeon did," and took one of hands-off with his Fusion Greatsword in hand and stabbed the roof of Raiden's dragon mouth. As Prince Raiden reacted in pain, he shook off Zeil and Zeil fell out of his mouth. Raiden reacted, "Raaah! Why you! Zarōku!" Raiden charged electricity into his dragon claws and slashed Zeil into the ground, then incants, "Ganzu Zakeru!," shooting multiple large spheres of electricity from his draconic mouth at Zeil. Some missed while some hit him without Zeil having any time to react to defend himself. Raiden's lightning attacks were appearing more darker every second. Zeil's body was paralyzed from all the electrical attacks done to him and couldn't move. After Brago left the battlefield, Raiden dropped back onto the ground, reverting himself back to normal as he wanted to settle it face-to-face. The amount of anger and hatred in Raiden's eyes and mind right now are beyond insane and his eyes are even black. An evil dark aura is surrounding Raiden but almost no one notices. The super-enraged Raiden walked towards Zeil with that evil aura surrounding him as Zeil was struggling to move, "Ehh... ehh..." When Raiden got close, as soon as Zeil was able to slowly turn his head, he agonized in fear as he looked into Prince Raiden's terrifying mind and could feel an evil, sentient dark aura laughing at Zeil. Prince Raiden said in a dark, deep voice, "For all that you've done to us, you deserve a slow, painful death. Zakeru!" Instead of a single lightning blast, Raiden continuously held his Zakeru with his right hand, electrocuting Zeil over time for five seconds. Not only that but Raiden's Zakeru was dark gold rather than light yellow. Zeil reacted in pain, "Zaarrarrgh!" After the first long strike, Raiden yelled with evil hatred in his eyes, "I'm not through with you! Zakeru!" Raiden continues to torture Zeil with a continuous discharge of dark-golden electricity from his right hand. Zeil was nearly dead. Raiden's rage caused his friends and especially his brother Rain, very worried and Rain and their father yelled, crying in sadness and worrisome, "Raiden-(onīsan), STOOP!!!," with the now-calm young King Gash yelling in worrisome, "Raiden! Don't!" But as apoplectic as Raiden was, he didn't hear his family's voices. King Gash's party went after Raiden.

Meanwhile, back on the opposite side, Ninja Captain Kyanchome yelled, "Stop!" and pulled his vice captain back below his shoulders. Vice Captain Byonko reacted in anger, "What are you doing Captain-gero? Zophise deserves the death sentence-gero!" Captain Kyanchome explained, "If you kill Zophise, you will be playing right into the Demon Revolution Army's hands. Right now, they have been collecting dead bodies. We cannot let them collect anymore for what they might do with them. You're doing what the Revolution Army wants to do." Byonko yelled in anger, struggling to break free to finish Zophise, "I don't care! Let me go-gero!" Captain Kyanchome said while Byonko was struggling, "Do you want that guy to add more bodies to his collection? For all we know, that one guy could be a legit necromancer and if so, we may be doomed if any more die! Please, control yourself! Don't do this or you'll be no different than him! His Royal Majesty and Brago already avenged your family and Her Former Majesty wouldn't want to see you like this. All we need to do now is to get someone, probably young Zeon-sama, to erase their memories and we're done!" Byonko calmed down and cried in despair, not knowing what he should do and said, "Then what have I been training for?! GERO!!!" A black, invisible aura that surrounded the vice captain disappeared as he deactivated his Nyusorudo spell. As Captain Kyanchome pat his vice captain's shoulder, the Ninja Captain felt something, got the goosebumps and reacted, heh? What was that? Never mind, then yelled behind him to the left, "Other Zeon, we need you over—! What the heck is going on over there?!" Captain Kyanchome reacted in surprise when he saw the transformed Raiden brutally attacking Zeil. Young Prince Zeon teleported towards Captain Kyanchome and said with no emotion, "You called?" Captain Kyanchome said, "Sorry to ask you this but since your older self is gone—" Young Prince Zeon understood and said, "Yeah, I get it. You want me to erase his memories? That's something my older self would do, right?" Captain Kyanchome was surprised and said, "Y-yeah..." Commander Zeon said to himself with an attitude, "Tch, I can't believe how weak I've became that I died that easily," as he walked towards Zophise.

Zophise, unable to move, said, "W-w-what? N-no, p-please don't erase my m-mem—" Prince Zeon knocks Zophise out unconscious with his fist to Zophise' head, yelling, "Shut up and go to sleep!," and puts his hand over his head, proceeds to erase his memory. While Prince Zeon was erasing Zophise memories, Captain Kyanchome said, "Will you hurry? Raiden-sama is about to kill Zeil and we cannot let the enemy have any more dead bodies." Prince Zeon said, "Give me a few seconds. I'm sure my brother will stop him in time."

The nearly dead Zeil, said, crying in fear for his life, "P-please... n-no more..." The ultra-angry Raiden was preparing for his third dark Zakeru to finish Zeil off, "This is the end. Die Zeil! Zake—" Adult King Gash appeared and stopped his enraged son in time. Adult King Gash said, holding him back, "Raiden, stop! T-this isn't like you!" Raiden yelled in extreme anger, "Dad! Let go of me! Zeil deserves to die!" Adult King Gash cried in worrisome and yelled, "Control yourself! Don't become what my brother became a long time ago. I don't want to lose you in that darkness too!" Raiden yelled in anger, "Zeil killed mom and uncle! Plus, he was going to kill you. Are you not going to do anything to stop this madman?! Let go! He deserves a death sentence!" Everyone was worried about Raiden but his dad tried holding him back. Adult King Gash said, crying, "Please... don't do such a horrible thing! Don't ruin my reputation any further. We vowed to keep Demon World peaceful, not to ruin lives." As angry as Raiden is, he didn't listen and yelled, "I said, let me go! Zaruku! Thunder Punch!," The berserking Raiden created a dark-electrical aura, which shocked his father off of him, then uncontrollably punching his father in his left cheek with black electricity, knocking him back." Everyone, including the Demon World Military, yelled in worrisome, "Gash!/Bell-sama!/Your (Royal) Majesty!/Your Excellency!" Among the knights, Knight Infantry Hyde was angry and said, "How dare he attack the King? Prince or not, that was assault on royalty; treason!" Knight Infantry Reycom said, "We mustn't interfere with family business unless the King says." Everyone was shocked and Kiyomaro yelled, "Raiden, how could you do that to your dad?" Young King Gash yelled, "Raiden, what's wrong with you?! Why did you hit my older self?," while Patie next to him said, "Yeah! That... that was awful!"

The Demon King was upset and cried in despair while holding his injured cheek. Prince Rain was crying, yelling, "Raiden-onīsan, stop! Why did you hit daddy?! Daddy did nothing wrong?! Why did you change? Please... please go back to the Raiden I knew: The Raiden that was always happy and smiling and..." Raiden uncontrollably yelled in anger, "Shut up! Everyone... just... leave me alone!," while going into despair. He then ended Zaruku while not knowing what to do. Pancho was able to identify the invisible dark aura around him and said, "Now I know I'm not crazy. That isn't Raiden that's doing that." The others are wondering, "What?" Pancho, being an invisibility user, has the ability to see invisible objects, and said, "I don't know if you guys were able to see it, but there is an evil, black aura surrounding Raiden and I can hear its evil laughter. H-he's been possessed. I first noticed it when those dark fakes were destroyed. And I noticed His Majesty and Byonko-senpai being possessed by it too not too long ago but they all apparently moved to Raiden." Adult King Gash wondered, "I was possessed?," then he realized that he agonized over his brother's death more than he should and guessed, "It's probably those clones Zeil made." Pancho said, "I thought as much. And earlier this morning, I briefly saw it around your younger royal self." Young King Gash wondered, "Me?" The young king then realized that he is no longer fearing over the nightmare he had. Adult King Gash said as he got back up, "Who would have thought these clones could take over us to amplify our emotions." They guessed right. When Zeil's dark clones were destroyed, an invisible black vapor from the clones were spreading across the battlefield, possessing anyone with a lot of dark emotions like anger, hatred, loneliness, fear, sadness, etc., forcefully increased their dark emotions even further, which forced Prince Raiden and Vice Captain Byonko to go berserk and demented without them knowing, while making young King Gash's fear to go into paranoia and adult King Gash to grieve over his family's death way too much.

Prince Rain wondered, "Will Raiden-nīsan go back to normal?" Pancho said and yelled, "I'll try. Hey, you evil-looking spirits, leave my buddy alone!" Dark-purplish spirits turned themselves visible with many spiritual heads laughing wickedly, "Hehehehe!" Prince Raiden, who was still agonizing in confusion and hatred, suddenly became unconscious when these devilish, clone spirits came out of his body and gathered together. As Raiden fell towards the ground unconscious, his father held him up. They then decided to possess the nearly-dead Zeil, summoning Zeil's trademarked Magic Twin Swords and rushed towards the main group, yelling with evil red-eyes, "I hate this world! I hate all of you! You don't like my pranks, you don't like my existence, then you'll die! Shidosorudo!" Apparently, Zeil's true darkness is his hatred for the Demon World after being outcasted by villagers from trying to have fun doing impish pranks. Anyways, the possessed Zeil turned his Demon Twin Swords into shadow swords. The possessed Zeil said, "And I'll start off with those kiddies!," while targeting Prince Rain and Tioga. Rain got scared but everyone was prepared to defend him until Raiden suddenly woke up in his father's arms and said with his consciousness back, "Za-uruku!" Adult King Gash reacted, "R-Raiden?!," as Raiden electrically teleported in front of the possessed Zeil and yelled, "Don't you dare lay a finger on my brother. Zaruku! Thunder Punch!" Raiden summoned an aura of light-yellow electricity and gave Zeil a powerful, electrical punch with his right fist to the Zeil's left cheek, knocking the bewitched Zeil down as Zeil's Magic Twin Swords deactivated. Suddenly, the dark evil spirits exited out of Zeil's body with a burst of evil laughter. Everyone reacted in shock again and Raiden wondered, "What the heck is that?!" The evil spirits were coming after Raiden to re-possess him. As Raiden put his guard up, Pancho incanted, "Giga Ra Inbishiru!," summoning an invisible box to contain the spirits of the dark clones. As the spirits were bouncing back and forth, trying to find an exit, Raiden wondered, "What's going on?" Pancho then chanted, "Oru Inbishirudo! Invisible Wall Technique: Invisible Compactor!," reducing the size of his invisible box to squish the dark-purplish evil spirits into nothing. Everyone sighed in relief.
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Still in confusion, Pancho explained to Raiden, "You were possessed by those apparitions that came from those dark clones. How are you feeling buddy?" After Raiden deactivated his Zaruku, he said while placing his right hand to the right side of his head, "I'm not sure, but I do have a really bad headache. Ouch!" He then said to his brother, "Rain, are you okay? You're not hurt are you?" Rain cried in joy, yelling, "Raiden-onīsan?! You're back to normal! I thought I lost you to that darkness." Raiden said, crying in joy, "Don't worry. I'm always here for you! I'll always protect you as I promised. Now then..." Raiden looks at the main group and sees a red mark on his father's left cheek and reacted, "Dad?! You're hurt. Who did that to you?" Adult King Gash stated, "You mean you don't remember punching your old man?" Raiden wondered, "I did what?!" He then remembered everything that happened when he went berserk and started agonizing for the horrible things he did. Adult King Gash reacted, "Raiden? Are you okay?!" Raiden said in agony, "I can't believe... what I just did..... I'm sorry... dad..." Raiden's expression then immediately changes to relief and said, "At least Rain is safe! That's the one thing that matters the most!" Everyone was shocked and dropped from Raiden's sudden change in emotion. He really is just like his mother and adult King Gash said, "Heh! I'm glad you're back to normal," while Rain hugged his brother as Raiden smiled.

By now, everyone got over former Demon Queen Patie Bell's and Demon World Military Commander Zeon Bell's deaths (well, the elder Koruru was still sad losing her husband, but she's looking forward to being Gash's new wife and queen). While everyone was enjoying this moment, Zeil was started to wake up, "Ughhhh... what happened? T-t-ouch!" Zeil was struggling in pain trying to get up but everyone reacted by putting their guard up with anger in Raiden's eyes, "Zeil!" Zeil wondered, "What's going—?" After Young Prince Zeon came by after erasing Zophise memories, he yelled, "Go back to sleep!," knocking Zeil unconscious with a punch to the back of his head, then proceeded to erase Zeil's memories. Raiden said to his younger uncle, "Lil' Zeon, after what that guy has done, shouldn't he be executed?" Young Zeon stated, "As much as I would like to kill this guy, especially after embarrassing me, your old man is against it. Memory deletion is the only punishment I can give to criminals, unfortunately." From the crowd, young Kyanchome despised young Zeon's attitude and said, "Teh! And he's going to be our trainer?," while young Byonko followed it up with a serious "Gero!"

Prince Zeon successfully erased all of Zeil's memories. He wasn't sure on how much he should have erased Zeil's and Zophise's memories but he's making sure they will be completely amnesiac by the time they wake up. By the time they do wake up with none of their memories, their evil hearts should theoretically change to a neutral heart but their personalities will still be the same. Captain Kyanchome said, "I got him," and grabbed the unconscious, amnesiac Zeil over his shoulder while Vice Captain Byonko, who still hates Zophise, carried Zophise over his shoulder in disgust and said, "Gero... They should have been executed." They will not leave them out in the middle of nowhere since Zecross could use his Shidona Reaper to instantly kill them and to add them to his collection but Zecross isn't around anymore by this time but knows that Zeil and Zophise has been defeated and seeing as Zeil and Zophise now have amnesia, the revolution army leaders Zega and Zecross no longer considers them their generals. Now it's just Zega and Zecross left unless if Dr. Zulu recovers from his injuries.

Kiyomaro wondered, "What are you going to do with them?" Ninja Captain Kyanchome said, "I got a few ideas. We are in need of reinforcements, so with your permission Your Majesty, can we initiate them into the military?" Everyone was shocked and Raiden yelled, "Are you crazy?!" Adult King Gash was thinking and said, "I supposed so—" Vice Captain Byonko, carrying Zophise, was upset and yelled, "No! Kyanchome-senpai! After everything these two done to us-gero, I don't want them in our crew-gero!" Captain Kyanchome thought an arrangement and said, "Then the Knight Division can watch over them," then yelled at the knights, "Hey! Hyde, Reycom! Since you two are substituting Captain Black Knight and Vice Captain Earth, you two are held responsible for these dorks!" Among the knights, Knight Hyde reacted in shock, "Say what?!," while Knight Reycom reacted in disgust, "Oh, come on!"

Adult King Gash said, "Actually, I'll hold responsible for them. With my brother gone, I'll be in charge of leading our soldiers. And Koruru, I'm sorry about your husband. I should have died. I would have been proud of sacrificing myself to protect you all." The elder Koruru, who isn't considered a princess anymore due to her princely wife's death, cried and said, holding him, "Please, don't say that. Gash... I don't want to lose anyone else too. Your wife was like a sister to me and Zeon... as strict as he was... I loved him so much. And I want to grow up as your wife's replacement." Adult King Gash said, slightly crying back, "I know. I apologize. Koruru, you helped me to become the King I am today. And if I'm still alive after this horrible battle, I promise I'll make you my second wife and queen. My Raiden and Rain will also be your kids." Everyone cried in sadness and joy and Rain said, "Koruru-obasan, you'll make a great mother. And... I hope I don't lose you too!" Princess Koruru said, "Thank you! I'll be here for you and Raiden. And who knows, maybe you'll have another brother... or a sister... if your father would let me." Adult King Gash said, "Well, considering how my wife was, I don't want to make her jealous... but if little Patie-chan says it's alright." Young Patie said, crying in joy, "Go... go ahead! As much as... I wouldn't want anyone else to be with Gash, I'm sure... that older me would be alright with it." Adult King Gash said, "Well, a third child it is! Hehe!" The main group giggled in joy and a bit in sadness after losing some royal heroes. Anyways, everyone headed back to the Bell Family's palace.

Scene: For the rest of the time until the end of the revolution war...


WARNING/SPOILER ALERT: If you have not read Remakes: Chapters 9–16 (or even the original fan fiction, but this one is based on the remade storyline), this section WILL CONTAIN SPOILERS. Read at your own risk now or wait to read this later.  Although, Remakes: Chapter 17+ of this storyline will be completely omitted from this alternative's remake storyline as those last few remaining story arcs will lead into a "bad ending" [SPOILERS] if Gash Bell was still alive as his death was important to the original/first storyline of this fan fiction during its final story arc.

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After heading back to the palace, everyone mourned over the graves of Gash's and Zeon's ex-sovereign parents, Gash's deceased wife Patie Bell, and his brother Zeon, as well as friends that have died in the war. During midnight after that day, co-leader Death General #2 Zecross attacked Demon World with a legion of the undead. Zecross's army was filled with demons that were killed in this war including everyone's armies Gash's loved ones (his parents, his first wife, and his brother), which put him into deep agony. During the midst of battle, a lot of Demon World Military soldiers were killed, which were then added to Zecross' army. Demon World Military was desperately losing in Zecross' army of the undead but suddenly, the real spirits of Commander Zeon Bell and former Demon Queen Patie Bell. successfully sneaked out of the Spirit World (霊界, Reikai) into Demon World (魔界, Makai) for a brief amount of time to tell the grieving King to destroy their bodies and to keep living. Patie told her husband to keep living and she was happy for Koruru being her replacement. Out of grief, Adult King Gash and everyone used their strongest spells destroy the entire undead legion and Zecross himself. This time around, because there was no interference, Zecross was satisfied with the battle he had and he died happily. [In the main story, Spirit World's Supreme God Yama interfered the battle due to a disturbance in Spirit World and took Zecross' soul. Zecross was displeased and vowed to get revenge as his death was "unfair" in the main story. However, in this alternate version, Yama didn't interfere in time as Zecross would already be defeated quicker through Gash's Baō.]

Later during that day during the second twilight of that day (between dusk and night), Zega decided to attack with his own army of white clones and shadow clones. Zega utilizes the power of twilight, the combination of light and darkness. Demon World Military and the main party was also losing against the battle against the main co-leader of the revolution army. During the finale, Demon World Military managed to get a comeback. Zega, who was surprisingly losing, prepared to used his ultimate spell, the Unforgivable-Forbidden Spell called Shin Shirairadisu. It's similar to his Shin Shiraikeru except more powerful as this spell of light and darkness has the power to obliterate Demon World and anyone that touches this spell. King Gash didn't have enough energy to call forth Baō to protect Demon World, so he gave Ba#333; to his son Rain with his remaining energy. Everyone combined their powers to stop Zega's final attack and obliterated Zega using Zega's own most destructive attack. In the afterlife, Zega also accepted his defeated as he enjoyed that battle.
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Even though both co-leaders of the Demon Revolution Army were killed, the war was not over yet. The evil genius, Dr. Zulu, who was the 7th Death General of the Demon Revolution Army, finally recovered from his fatal injury after Zetta Faudo was destroyed, and plotted to do his "other project," which was taking over the Human World. The Demon Revolution Army also planned on taking over the Human World but since it's just Dr. Zulu left, Dr. Zulu created his own empire, the Zulu Empire, with his newest generation of robots, the Dembots (デムボット, Demubotto), which succeeded over his first gen Zulu Bots. Some of the main party, as well as humans from the past, entered the Human World to stop Emperor Dr. Zulu from taking over Human World. Prince Rain gained new powers to stop Emperor Zulu's imperial robotic army but Emperor Dr. Zulu managed to escape back into Demon World.

After everyone returned to Demon World, the future timeline was going to look for Emperor Dr. Zulu after returning the demons and humans of the past back to their timeline. As payment for helping out in the war in the future timeline, the heroes of the present timeline helped to prevent a war in the past timeline by searching and erasing the memories of the demons that would get involved in the Demon Revolution Army and they fought their way when they had to. Before heroes from the future returned back to their time, suddenly, Emperor Dr. Zulu made his way into the past timeline and recommitted his Zulu Empire in the past alongside his younger self. However, the heroes and the Royal Knights of the past successfully defeated Dr. Zulu's empire with some close calls. After saving the past timeline, everyone said their goodbyes and everyone from the present timeline went back to their timeline.
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Scene: After the revolutionary war...


WARNING/SPOILER ALERT: If you have not read Remakes: Chapters 17+ (or even the original fan fiction), this section will contain SPOILERS on ideas used in later chapters. Read at your own risk now or wait until later.

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Now that the Demon Revolutionary War was over, peace was brought back into Demon World. Koruru married Demon King Gash Bell, taking place as King Gash's new queen, substituting Queen Patie Bell. Queen Koruru Bell was no longer Prince Raiden's and Prince Rain's aunt, but rather their stepmother. As time passed, they eventually got a new child; King Gash's third child and Koruru's first child. Prince Raiden and Prince Rain were happy to have a half-sister. King Gash and Koruru named their daughter Patie [or Penny in an English dub version], after King Gash's first beloved wife, with her full name being Patie Bell the Second (Patie Bell II). Everyone lived happily until the next millennium when a new King will be chosen.

Sometime after a millennium passed by, former Demon King Gash Bell eventually died from natural death. His second wife Demon Queen Koruru Bell died before him though. Raiden, Rain, and their younger sister Patie mourned over their deaths but carried on. Former King Gash Bell was reunited with his beloveds in the realm of Paradise (天国, Tengoku) of the Spirit World, the afterlife world for demons. Paradise is a realm in the Spirit World where all good and kind demons go to after death. Not many living demons know the existence of Spirit World as the Spirit World is a secret world, but there has been myths and legends of the Spirit World in Demon World. Gash Bell was happy to be reunited with his two wives, Patie Bell and Koruru Bell, as well as his mother, father, and brother Zeon. Gash Bell slept peacefully in the afterlife with his two wives. But soon, Koruru would leave Gash as she wanted Gash to be with his first wife, who he missed so much for many generations. The three asked Paradise's Goddess of Love Venus to make an arrangement for Gash Bell's and Koruru Bell's divorce, Gash Bell's and Patie Bell's remarriage, and Zeon Bell's and Koruru Bell's remarriage. Of course, Zeon Bell refused to get remarried to Koruru but the others persuaded him. They even asked Paradise's God of Time Saturn to make them a child again so that they can play together as kids again, but they requested Saturn to change their ages from time-to-time. Venus and Saturn are archangels, Gods of Paradise, and they are two of Paradise's Four Great Angelic Saints of Paradise with Saturn being the former King of Paradise many eons ago.

When Patie Bell and Gash Bell decided to change their ages in their young adult forms, Patie Bell asked her husband Gash for another child. A fourth child for Gash and a third one for Patie? And it turns out that their new child turned out to be a girl and upon birth, their new demon child metamorphosed into an angel due to Paradise's atmospheric-holy properties. Angels are the inhabitants of Spirit World's Paradise. They can be born between two angels or two kindhearted demons. Gash and Patie named their angelic baby girl Hikari, which is Japanese for "light" (光).

Eventually, one day, when Rain Bell, Raiden Bell, and their half-sister Patie Bell II would meet the end of their time, they would be reunited with their parents. Patie II met her father's first wife Patie I, who is now her Patie II's stepmother. And they got to meet their new angelic sister Hikari. Hikari has her father's hair color, has light-yellow angelic wings, and has her mother's eyes like Rain does. And they got to meet their grandparents from all sides of the family that they never met. And they would laugh and play together in the Spirit World's Paradise for the rest of their eternity.
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List of Chapters (remake) on DeviantART

Volume 1: Demon Revolutionary War - The Revolution Begins
Volume 2: Demon Revolutionary War - Climax of Chaos
Volume 3: The Zulu Empire
Volume 4: Revolution from the Dead
Volume 5: The Fallen King - Reign of Chaos
Volume 6: The Fallen King - Battle of the Dead
Volume 7: The Fallen King - For the Nether

List of Chapters (original/obsolete) on DeviantART

Volume 1: The Revolution Begins
Volume 2: Climax of Chaos
Volume 3: The Zulu Empire
Volume 4: Pre-Revolution Army [Chapter 15 extension]
Volume 5: Revolution from the Dead [Chapter 15 extension]
Spin-off Chapters [non-canon chapters]
First written on July 13, 2015. Finished writing on July 18, 2015. Published at DeviantART on August 28, 2015.

List of updates in this chapter
  • Update #1 (January 3, 2016, 11:47 p.m. EST): Changing the spell Zarouku to Zarōku since I've been going with modified Hepburn romanization of Japanese.
  • Update #2 (January 9, 2016, 1:04 a.m. EST): MAJOR UPDATE!!! I forgot to fix the "Scene: For the rest of the time until the end of the revolution war..." section since I switched around my newer chapters, so I'm fixing that section to match with this remake's storyline rather than my original storyline (since I originally didn't think of switching a chapter around when I made this alternate chapter). Also fixing chapter numbers on where these chapters take place.

List of characters in this chapter
Ordered from first to last. If a character was mentioned before being seen, I will place that character where he/she was first seen instead of the first time that character was mentioned. I will also list their roles, whether they were a protagonist, supporter, or antagonist of the chapter (or for the entire fan fiction) unless if they were only mentioned (and italicize them). Characters with "†" symbol next to them are deceased/dead. I will also make two lists, a list of characters in the present time and a list of character in the past time. Characters with "‡" symbol next to them are native/born in Spirit World (霊界, Reikai), the afterlife world where all mamodos (demons) go to after death.
Character roles:
  • Protagonist: Heroes that will commonly appear in each chapter.
  • Protagonist/Supporter: Heroes that won't get much attention but will still appear or at least be mentioned in each chapter somehow.
  • Supporter: Hero/neutral characters that will only appear in a chapter or two.
  • Antagonist: Evil characters. The entire Demon Revolution Army are the antagonists of my fan fiction.
  • Mentioned only: Background characters that are only mentioned that don't have any role in my fan fiction.
  • Flashback: Characters that appeared or mentioned in a flashback.
Present characters
Past characters
Copyright
This fan fiction and original characters: ©NejiHyuga900/TDPNeji
Konjiki no Gash (Bell)!! / Zatch Bell!: ©Makoto Raiku
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