Tuesday, September 4, 2018

Golden Gash!!: Demon Revolution Army (remake) [Chapter 16b Alternate]

Golden Gash!!: Demon Revolution Army (remake) [Chapter 16b Alternate]

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Golden Gash!!: Demon Revolution Army (remake)


Golden Gash!!: Demon Revolution Army, also known as "Konjiki no Gash!!: Mamono no Kakumei-gun (金色のガッシュ! !：魔物の革命軍)" and "Zatch Bell!: Mamodo Revolution Army" is a Zatch Bell! / Konjiki no Gash (Bell)!! fan fiction that I created. This fan fiction takes place directly after the manga, more specifically after the one-shot Konjiki no Gash!! Gaiden manga. It takes place a whole year after the Demon Battle of the third millennium (200X A.D.) has started. 27 years later, an evil organization called the Demon Revolution Army is formed. This Revolution Army plans on overthrowing the kind King Zatch (Gash) Bell and put Demon World into chaos. Heroes, including Raiden Bell and Rain Bell, who are the (theoretical) sons of King Zatch (Gash) Bell and Queen Patie (Penny) Bell, as well as Zeon Bell (now a good demon) and his Demon World Military have successfully defeated the Demon Revolution Army but with some costs of good lives. However, Dr. Zulu, the lone survivor of the Demon Revolution Army and former seventh Death General, plans on conquering the Human World and Demon World as the emperor of both worlds. Can these heroes stop Emperor Dr. Zulu from conquering both worlds?

This is a remade version of the original Golden Gash!!: Demon Revolution Army fan fiction. The remake's storyline is similar to the original but written differently with some major changes to the story but still flows along with the original storyline. In this fan fiction remake, I will be using Japanese names and Japanese terms instead of their English counterparts.

Chapter 16b Alternate: Tragedy of a Beloved


NOTE: This is an alternate version of the second half of Chapter 16 of the remade version of the Golden Gash!!: Demon Revolution Army fan fiction series, as well as a remake of Chapter 15-3's Alternate version. Be sure to read both Chapter 16a and Chapter 16b (a.k.a. the full Chapter 16 on Blogger) before reading this.

Recap


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After preventing the Demon Revolution Army from being formed in the past timeline, the heroes of the future were about to return back to their time to search for Dr. Zulu. However, Dr. Zulu of the future timeline was in the past timeline and he, along with his younger self, committed war on Demon World in the past with his restored Zulu Empire. The heroes did not recover completely since the last battle and they were having a hard time dealing with Dr. Zulu's rebuilt army. During the imperial battle, Dr. Zulu attempted to assassinate the young Demon King with his Death Devil, Dembot Master of Death. The King's girlfriend Patie protected him from assassination but received a deadly poison from a Death Devil clone, a poison called Angry Devil's Toxin, which is one of Demon World's most deadliest poisons and is nearly incurable. Prince Raiden's left arm was also infected with this poison and he quickly sliced his own arm to prevent the lethal poison from spreading in his body. King Rain used his strongest draconic attack to destroy the Dembot Master of Death.

However, the rebuilt Dembot Guardians emerged and combined into the Dembot Master of Chaos, Chimerabot. The heroes were at a complete disadvantage and had no hope of defeating it. The blinded Wonrei used his strongest spell to deal massive damage to the Chimerabot, but it wasn't enough. The fight was completely one-sided with Dr. Zulu winning the battle, that is, until the Royal Knights interfered the battle and stopped the all-powerful Chimerabot themselves. Dr. Zulu absorbed Chimerabot's power for his strongest mechanical spell and used whatever he could do get the Royal Knights out of his way, but the battle ended in a draw. In a desperate attempt, Dr. Zulu attempted to escape Demon World with his younger self but King Rain and Prince Raiden used their strongest draconic spells that followed Emperor Dr. Zulu through the time stream, killing Dr. Zulu on the other side of the Time Gate in the present timeline. However, many infected civilians including Patie were on a brink of death from the deadly poisoned they received. Head Nurse Tio rushed Patie to the Royal Bell Family Palace's infirmary while Captain Kyanchome rescued survivors. Commander Zeon's wife, Princess Koruru, is using her Shin Raifojio to keep all infected demons alive as much as possible. If she were to release her spell, even for a split second, all the infected patients including the future queen Patie will die instantly, and Koruru's younger self is not around to back her up. Can Nurse Tio and the other medics cure every infected survivor from the nearly incurable Angry Devil's Toxin, or will they fail, killing all the survivors including the young Demon King's future queen?
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Scene: Royal Bell Family Palace's Living Room and Infirmary (night to midnight)


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While Captain Kyanchome was sending soldiers to a hospital, since the infirmary at the palace was packed with poisoned demon patients including Patie, everyone was waiting in a living room inside the palace. Commander Zeon and his group regrouped with everyone else in the living room past the throne room. King Gash was very worried about Patie, scared for her. After coming back, Kiyomaro asked, "How's Patie doing?" Megumi replied, "Not good." King Gash cried in sadness, "I... I don't want to lose her. Patie-chan... every since my parents died... she's been family to me. She took care of me when I was lonely, gave me love and yellowtail when I needed them. I don't... I don't want to lose anyone else." King Rain slightly cried, "Mom... please be okay..." Raiden got his left biceps bandaged up with white bandages for now. He said, "I'm sure mom will be okay, somehow. But what about my arm?" Byonko replied, "Tio-san is trying to fix it-gero. I'm out of energy-gero."

Inside the infirmary, both Tio, Princess Koruru, and several demon medics are trying their best to keep everyone alive. Patie's poison is still not cured. Right now, she and everyone else besides Wonrei were on life support via Princess Koruru's Shin Raifojio. Patie was in the middle back of the infirmary room with Wonrei in the back-left corner on white hospital beds covered with white sheets up to their shoulders. Young Koruru was sleeping at her house so the group couldn't contact her for the rest of the night and both Tio and Princess Koruru are getting low on energy for maintaining their spells for a long time, but Princess Koruru must keep her spell active at all times; if she releases her Shin Raifojio even for a split second, every ill patient in the infirmary besides Wonrei will die immediately and young Koruru isn't around to help.

While low on energy, Head Nurse Tio said in despair, "Darn! I don't... I don't know what to do. I tried everything." Young Tio said, "Don't give up now!" Princess Koruru said while maintaining her Shin Raifojio, "There must be a way to get rid of this poison." Head Nurse Tio said in hopelessness, "Darn, and that scientist knew a cure to this, but he's gone! There must... There must be some way to fix this... But how?" Head Nurse Tio was struggling to think of ideas, "I got to find a way to destroy this darn poison." Will they be able to cure the patients and Prince Raiden's severed arm in time? An hour has passed since the medics of Demon World tried curing the deadly poison from everyone. Have they been successfully cured... or...

In a living room in the palace past the throne room, everyone was waiting patiently for results with the exception of Prince Raiden, who was being impatient and complained, "Tch! How long has it been? Is mom okay? Will I get my arm back? Me and my stupidity..." Megumi said, "Relax, I'm sure they're okay." King Gash and King Rain were feeling really down. King Gash couldn't stop thinking about Patie, "Patie-chan...," holding a doll of her in his left hand. Byonko was feeling down too, "Geh, I hope Patie-sama's okay or I won't forgive myself-geroro." Kyanchome said to Byonko next to him, "Cheer up, pal. It's not your fault." Byonko felt guilty, "I promised to protect Gash's future queen, yet... gero..." Raiden couldn't wait any longer and said, "I'm going to see how they're doing," and got off the leather chair, holding his patched left biceps with his right hand. Megumi said, "But Tio told us to stay here." Raiden said, "I don't care. If anyone wants to come... Dad, I'm sure you're worried about mom, so let's go." King Gash said, "Unu...," and got up, accidentally dropping his Patie doll, leaving it behind. King Rain also followed them. Kiyomaro said, "Alright." Everyone else followed Raiden to the infirmary on the other side of the palace.

At the infirmary, Head Nurse Tio started agonizing, "No, NO! ..... This cannot be..." Princess Koruru said in exhaustion with a depressing look, "I'm... heh, I'm..." Tears were slowly coming down Koruru's eyes. Young Tio was also exhausted and depressed and asked, "Now what?" She was also crying. Head Nurse Tio told all the medics, "Everyone, you may return. We're done," but she appears to be crying too. Prince Raiden and the others seen the medics heading out the infirmary room and when one of the nurses seen King Gash Bell, a female nurse reacted, "Oh, Your Excellency. Oh, umm..." Raiden wondered, "What happened?" The nurse replied, "Sorry," and went on her way with the other medics. Head Nurse Tio came out the infirmary afterwards, looking very depressed, closing the door. As soon as she seen the group, her reaction changed, "Oh! Wha-what are you doing... h-here?" Raiden asked, "What happened? Is mother alright? And my arm? And the town folks?" Head Nurse Tio made a deceptive happy expression and lied, "Oh, they're... We're still working on it... Just go back to the other room and..." Raiden impatiently didn't stay to listen, pushing Nurse Tio out of the way and busting into the infirmary with all of the patients. Nurse Tio yelling in slight fear, "No! Don't go in there!"
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After Raiden busted into the infirmary, he found his aunt and young Tio against a wall to the left of him, completely exhausted. All of the patients had the sheets covering their whole body. Raiden asked, "What the heck's going on? Koruru-obasan?" Princess Koruru tried apologizing, "I'm... s..." While Raiden was looking around the room, he noticed an object wrapped in a white towel on a small metal table, opening it up and found his severed left arm nearly decayed with a lot of burnt purple spots. He yelled in confusion, "What is this?!" He doesn't even want to touch it judging by the way it looks. He looked around the room and among everyone that were concealed by a white blanket, he ran up to the bed with the smallest being covered, uncovered it and recognized the corpse. Princess Koruru felt really bad and both Tio did too. Upon seeing the body, Raiden's anger and hatred increased, yelling loudly, "Seriously?! Are you freakin' serious?" Everyone outside the infirmary wondered what's going on, but they had a bad feeling. Nurse Tio was feeling a bit paranoid inside her body, agonizing a bit. Princess Koruru apologized, "I'm... so sorry..." and cried, curling up against the wall. Young Tio did the same. Prince Raiden was about to take his anger on his sweet, kind aunt, but couldn't bare to hurt his lovingly aunt. Rather, he took his anger on Head Nurse Tio, running at her at high speed, choking her against the wall with his right hand. Everyone else jumpscared away and Raiden said, "What the heck Tio?" Tio tried apologizing, "I'm sorry..." Tioga cried out, "Mama?," while Pancho said, "Raiden, what's your deal?! Let go of mom!" Raiden yelled at Tio with hatred building up, "Seriously? Over ten patients, and you couldn't save one of them besides Wonrei?" Captain Kyanchome said, "Let go of my wife!" Commander Zeon entered the hallway and yelled, "Raiden, release her, this instant! She did her best. This is a deadly poison that no medic could have cured. Now, release her!" Raiden released Nurse Tio from his grip. He was thinking about taking his frustration against a nearby wall but controlled his temper a bit by walking away from the hallway to the left, passing by everyone else while saying, "Forget it. I'm going for a walk. Maybe those guys at the Robotics Shop can make me a new arm." He started mumbling in anger while walking away in disappointment and frustration, "I can't believe this..." King Rain was worried, "Brother..." Pancho said, "I'll check on him," and followed Raiden.

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King Gash couldn't stand any longer and ran into the infirmary, yelling, "Patie-chan!" As the King passed the door way, young Tio quietly said, "Gash...," while slightly crying against the wall. King Gash saw Patie uncovered and the second he looked at her decayed corpse, he started crying, shouting loudly, "Patie!!! Ehh... Ehh-he-he...!" Patie's body appeared completely lifeless. Her face and arms were purple and many parts of her skin broke, disintegrated. All of the other patients are like this too, dead. Gash did not want to believe, trying to deny the truth, "No! Please, you can't be dead. You can't be... Patie, please, wake up!" He laid his head on the bed next to Patie's waist, telling her to, "Wake up...," crying and grieving over her corpse for a while. Everyone else came into the infirmary to see Patie's rotten corpse, which really surprised them on how bad her flesh appeared. King Rain cried softly, feeling grief, "Mother..." Having to lose his mother twice must really hurt him. Byonko cried out on the ground, "Patie-sama-gerorororo...!" Head Nurse Tio apologized, "I'm so sorry, Gash-sama. I tried." However, Princess Koruru was feeling more guilty for releasing her spell, but she was already over her limit when she did. Commander Zeon picked her up and said, "Are you alright, Koruru?" Princess Koruru cried in her husband's arms, "I... I killed her... I killed them... I'm so sorry, I'm so sorry..." Commander Zeon said, "You tried you're best. There was no way to cure this." Princess Koruru continued feeling guilty, crying in her husband's arms, "I feel so ashamed." Head Nurse Tio said in guilt, "If only if Dr. Danny was here... I'm sure he could have done something about this." Commander Zeon said, "You should have told me. I would have went back to our time and brought him back here." Nurse Tio said, "Darn, I'm sorry. I didn't think you would... Wait, can you reverse time, giving us another chance to heal them, or better yet, before they were infected in the first place?" Commander Zeon stated, "For the sake of the space-time continuum, it's too dangerous to travel back in the same universe. It could corrupt this universal timeline. You should have asked me sooner." He knows this since Dr. Coral Q and Dr. Kido told them the risks of time travel. Nurse Tio said out of frustration, "Darn it!"

King Gash lifted his head from Patie's bed with lots of tears down his eyes, following up Commander Prince Zeon's words, "Then... then... There's no way to bring her back?" Commander Zeon apologized, "Sorry." King Gash yelled, "Then what should I do? First mom and dad..." He laid his head back on Patie's bed and continued, "... then Patie-chan..." Kiyomaro walked up to him, "Gash. I'm sure they are in a better place." King Gash lifted his head with tears down his eyes, yelling, "Kiyomaro!," crying on his legs instead. Kiyomaro pat the poor King's head with his right hand and said, "They'll always be your heart." King Gash said, "My heart hurts... it hurts really bad." Kiyomaro continued, "Listen, you're not alone, you still got your older twin brother, and your friends. Live, stay determined. The world need you." King Gash asked, "B-but... how?" Young Tio stood up and told Gash, "Before she passed... she told me that... if she were to die, she entrusted me or Koruru to take her place as queen, if that's what you want." Gash cried and wondered, "D-did she... really?" The King kind of doubts it since Patie would never let any girl have him, but this was a circumstance Patie made to young Tio before passing away. In a bed at the top left corner of the infirmary, Wonrei said, "That's what I heard her saying. I'm sorry for what happened, My King." Wonrei was the only survivor since he wasn't poisoned, but only temporarily blinded. Li Yen just now noticed him and ran up to him, crying, "Wonrei!" Wonrei responded, "I'm fine Li, but I'm worried about our King." Young Tio continued, "Patie wants you to live and stay happy. It was her final wish. As much as I would like to be queen... I suggest you should make Koruru your queen. You need someone kind and gentle like her and well... I'm sure she would make a perfect replacement for your needs, better than me." Tio doesn't think that she could satisfy the King's needs herself due her tomboyish, rough personality, even though she can also be tender, and the King really needs someone to love him as much as Patie. Young Prince Zeon said, "I agree. We cannot have our King fallen like this. Want me to call her?" Commander Zeon said, "She may be asleep. We should wait until the morning." Kiyomaro said, "Come on, Gash, I'll take you to bed." King Gash silently followed Kiyomaro, looking back at his deceased girlfriend with tears down his eyes. While passing by, Byonko said in guilt and depression, "I'm sorry Your Majesty-gero. I promised to protect her-gero and..." The King didn't say anything back and Byonko didn't continue his sentence. Kiyomaro said, "Patie protected you with her life." King Gash cried again and said, "I know..."

While walking out the infirmary, they seen Pancho and Prince Raiden in the hallway. Kiyomaro reacted, "Raiden, Pancho," while Raiden calmly said, "Dad..." Raiden finally calmed down after that random outburst. He has a Patie doll and a Gash doll in his right arm, made by his mother. Raiden held them out to his young father, "Here." The first thing that King Gash grabbed was his Patie doll and held it to tightly to his chest, crying over it. He then grabbed the doll of himself and said, "Thank you..." Raiden then grabbed a wet towel rag and wiped his father's tears on his young father's red face, saying, "Here!" While wiping his young father's face, Prince Raiden said, "I'm sorry about mom and I apologize the way I acted. I didn't want to lose mom again. It must be very hard on you." King Gash said while holding his dolls, "Unu... I miss her." Raiden then asked his younger brother, "Rain-sama, are you okay?" King Rain was still feeling a bit depressed, "Not really... I didn't want to see mom die again..." Tioga held her boyfriend and said in sadness, "Poor Rain-kun, poor Gash-kun." Raiden said, "I see. Hope you feel better." Pancho said, "It's a good thing we came from an alternate timeline or you two would have disappeared, theoretically." Raiden said, "Coming to think about it, yeah, since mom's gone." He then crouched then, held his young father's left shoulder with his right arm and said, "I hope you do well, dad. Don't give up. Continue being the tender king you want. If you need any help, make Koruru-obasan your queen. Although it would be strange to see my aunt as my mother, hehe, but she can help you become the kind king you wanted." Gash cried on his son from the future, "O-okay..." Princess Koruru said, "I was almost your step-mother too until..." Raiden said, "I know, until my dad passed away." Princess Koruru said to young Gash, "Gash-sama, if you need someone to love you and hold you at night, I could call my younger self over here." Commander Zeon said to his wife, "Hun, it's already too late." Princess Koruru replied, "It's fine. Knowing my parents, I know they'll be okay about this. Well, I think."

Scene: Royal Bell Family Palace and Koruru's house (midnight)


Young Kyanchome said, "It's getting really late. Let's go home Byonko." Byonko still felt depressed and said, "Geh... okay." Young Tio said, "I'm going home too. Megumi, want to come?" Megumi was worried about Gash but she was interested in seeing Tio's family, "O-okay... I hope you get better." Kyanchome said, "Folgore-san, want to come a long?" Parco Folgore said, "Sure. And-a Gash, don't give up." Li Yen asked, "Tio-san, is Wonrei okay to go home?" Nurse Tio replied, "Well... he would need an escort." Li Yen helped Wonrei out of bed and said, "I'll carry you to your home." Wonrei said, "Um... alright." Li Yen said, "And I'm staying here with you." Wonrei said, "But—" Li Yen interfered, acting a bit tough, "No buts. I know the dangers of Demon World, but I can take care of myself and you need the help you can get until you can see again." While walking next to her, Wonrei said, "I guess I can't talk my way out of this." Li Yen said to Gash, "Gash, if it's okay, we'll pay a visit to you sometime." King Gash said in depression, "Unu..." Kiyomaro said to Gash, "I'll take you to your room. Don't worry, you won't be alone." King Gash held his dolls and said, "Unu..." again, holding Kiyomaro's hand. Princess Koruru and both Zeon were heading to Koruru's house outside the palace. Koruru's family were surprised to see an adult version of her child and couldn't believe it, but after hearing everything adult Koruru had to say, trying persuade them. Young Koruru woke up hearing her younger self and her parents. After hearing the news from her older self, Koruru was glad to volunteer to become a queen candidate. Koruru's parents were shocked and happy seeing that Koruru was chosen as Gash's next future queen and after hearing about the King's sorrowful conundrum, they allowed their child to live at the royal palace.

As King Gash was lying in his grand king-sized bed, holding the Patie and Gash dolls his ex-girlfriend made for him, Kiyomaro was sitting next to him rubbing his head gently. After a knock on the master bedroom door, young Koruru greets herself, "H-hello?" Kiyomaro responded, "Koruru?" King Gash sat up, still feeling depressed. Young Koruru said, "I heard everything that happened. I'm... I'm so sorry." King Gash said in depression, "Koruru-chan..." Koruru looked back and ask herself, "Are you sure this is okay?" Princess Koruru said, "It's fine, make yourself at home." Kiyomaro said, "I'm glad your here. Do you think you can keep Gash company for a while." Koruru shyly said, "I... I guess." She then said with guilt, "I'm... I'm so sorry I didn't stay. Forgive me, I had to go home. I-if I was still here, Pat-Patie-chan would still be alive. Forgive me. I-I don't think I deserve to be your queen." King Gash said in depression, "It's... it's okay." Kiyomaro said, "It's not your fault. I'm sure you were busy. But I know you'll make a great queen. You helped Gash become the king he wanted to be after all, right, Gash?" King Gash said in depression, "Unu..." Kiyomaro said, "Good night, buddy. Koruru, take care of Gash, for Patie." Koruru shyly said, "O-okay. So... I'm sleeping with... the King?" Kiyomaro said, "Have fun you two. Good night!," and exited out of the room. Kiyomaro stayed in a bedroom with Prince Raiden and Pancho. Koruru's older self and her husband Zeon are staying in Zeon's younger self's bedroom, even though young Prince Zeon would feel embarrassed doing so. Even Ninja Captain Kyanchome and Head Nurse Tio had their own room and Nurse Tio was still feeling bad about her biggest failure, feeling guilty about it.

While the King was holding his Gash and Patie dolls while sitting up in his bed, looking depressed, Koruru crawled in bed with him and said, "If... if you need anything, I'm here for you... umm... I'm sorry if I'm not much, but I'll do my best." King Gash said, "T-thank you..." Koruru went under the covers next to Gash and said, "Would it be okay... if I stay next to you." While feeling depressed, King Gash nodded his head vertically slow. King Gash laid his head on Koruru's chest. Koruru blushed and Gash said in sadness, "I miss Patie-chan... so much. But I wonder if Patie will be okay with me... having a new girlfriend." While blushing, Koruru said, "I'm... I'm sure she will... She'll probably be okay with it as long as you never forget her... and love. And I'm okay if you love her more than me. I'm fine with that. T-thanks for for choosing me... as her replacement. I'll do my best to fulfill her wish." As Koruru held Gash onto him, Gash replied, "Thank you... so much..." Gash felt less depressed and thought to himself, Koruru is warm and as soft as Patie, holding Koruru as he also held his Patie doll very close to him. Koruru thought to herself, Gash... feels so nice, but gloomy. I'll do my best, Patie-nēchan, for Gash. Koruru is pretending to have Patie as an older sister just like she treated her former human partner Shiori as an older sister, and continue what Patie left off as King Gash Bell's future Demon Queen.
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During the next morning after everyone woke up and had breakfast at their respectively places. Everyone regrouped outside the palace while bringing their family members to meet each other. Kyanchome's and Tio's parents met their grandchildren for the first time, as well as their kids' older selves, which really surprised. but their grandchildren already knew them from the future and they are still alive in the present timeline. After having a grand feast for lunch with the demons from the future and the humans and demons from the past including the past demons' family members, King Gash made a grave of Patie next to the grave of his parents in the palace's courtyard, mourning over them with Koruru next to him. After paying their respects to the King's first chosen queen candidate, everyone said their goodbyes. The humans were ready to teleport back into the Human World, but Li Yen is staying in Demon World to help her poor boyfriend. Before leaving, Kiyomaro told King Gash to live on again, never forget Patie, and move on, wishing Gash and Koruru good luck for the future. After most of the humans went back to Human World, the demons of the present timeline said their goodbyes and Commander Zeon opened a time portal. Everyone waved goodbye and the demons of the present timeline returned back to their time and universe. Kyanchome's and Tio's parents waved goodbye to their children and grandchildren of the future, but who knows if they will still have them as their grandchildren in this timeline since Kyanchome and Tio of this timeline may have their own lovers in the future rather than dating together since they can choose their own life rather than destiny choosing for them.

Scene: At a mysterious, fortune teller's house (about a few months later)


While King Gash and Koruru were helping some folks in the capital, an old lady's house suddenly collapsed with the old woman saying, "Kaaah! Not again!" King Gash and Koruru decided to help the poor old lady rebuild her house. While Gash was still doing the roofs, Koruru said to the old lady, "So, this is the third time your house broke, Miss Fortune Teller Lady?" The ancient, large female demon with a wrinkly old head, wearing a dark-blue cloak and jewelry, said, "The first time was caused by machines that rampaged our world." She was talking about Dr. Zulu's robots. The fortune teller continued, "Took me a while to fix it until it collapsed again, but a nice young man helped me repair it, although he didn't do a well job as I thought he did, but at least my house lasted longer than when I tried, kiki! And thanks for stopping by to help a poor old lady. I owe you two." Koruru said, "You're welcome." The Fortune Teller Lady asked, "Is there anything you want?" Koruru said, "Not really. It's just nice to help people. We don't really need anything." The fortune teller said, "Is that so? No fortune, money, or anything?" Patie was thinking but said, "Not really, but thanks." However, the fortune teller can read minds knew something's troubling in Koruru's mind, "I know something's bothering you and the King, especially the King." Koruru wondered, "What do you mean?" The fortune teller said, "I can feel loneliness and depression within the King. It's really dark. He seems to have lost a lot of loved ones." Koruru wondered, "Yeah, he lost his first girlfriend a few months ago and before that, his parents. But how do you know?" The old fortune teller said, "Hoho, I can read minds. I am a fortune teller after all. Plus, I also have the power to bring back the dead." Koruru was surprised, "You mean, you can bring people back to life?" The Fortune Teller Lady said, "Yes, I am indeed a necromancer. I see you two have met another necromancer in your life, I could tell. But worry not, not all necromancers are evil. I've rewarded the last person who rebuilt my house one of their loved ones back to life, but sadly, I can only revive one more person until my contract ends." Koruru wonders, "A contract?" The fortune teller said, "A contract to the Spirit World. I'm not allowed to say since it's a secret world."

Koruru was thinking to herself, we could revive Patie-nēchan. Gash would be happy, but... She was thinking to herself that she may no longer be Gash's future queen if she were to request Patie's revival, but she chose that as her decision, it's for the best, and said, "Oh, let me get Gash." She then head out the house and yelled, "Hey Gash!" A minute later, Gash, who was tired from working on the roof, breathed heavily and said, "Heh-heh-heh, huh?" After the explanation, King Gash was really surprised and happy, "Really?! So Patie-chan can come back?" He then wondered, "But, what about you?" Koruru said, "It will be fine. You'll be much happier with Patie-nēchan. You two were meant for each other. I just want you to be happy." Gash said to the fortune teller, "You, you can really bring her back, and... what about my parents?" The ancient Fortune Teller Lady apologized, "I'm so sorry, Your Majesty. I can only revive one more person until I lose my powers. Plus, if I were ever to die—and my lifespan is coming to an end soon; oh, these old bones—everyone that I brought back to life will also die." King Gash was feeling sad upon hearing that, "R-really?" Koruru also felt sad too and apologized, "I'm sorry Gash, but... at least you can see her again. You're choice... but I'm always here for you if she goes away again. Do you think your heart can take it?" Gash said in sadness, "But, doesn't she need Patie's corpse, at least?" The fortune teller responded, "Each necromancer has their own rules according to the contract given to them. I can create new bodies, but I only can do that at a limited quantity. I'll grant your wish as a reward, if you want. It's the least I can do for your help." As much as it would break his heart to lose Patie again, he made his choice, "U-unu... I want to see Patie-chan again, please. This is what she looks like." King Gash reveals the Patie doll he was carrying. He has the doll with him almost everywhere he goes so that he wouldn't feel alone. The Fortune Teller Lady said, "My, my, how lovely. Very well." The Fortune Teller Lady linked her mind to the Spirit World, locating the spirit of Patie and getting the hold of that spirit in her mind, the fortune teller incanted the spell with a following command, "Oruryū: Resurrection!" The fortune teller created a new body for King Gash's ex-girlfriend Patie, reviving her with her spirit and soul while having her body covered in white robes rather than her usual cute dress.

As of right now, Patie's memories of the Spirit World were removed upon being resurrected and she was confused what happened, "Huh? What? Gash-chan? Koruru-chan? What's going on?" She then reacted in jealous, "A-are you two...?" King Gash was so happy to see his Patie alive again and ran up to Patie and hugged her tightly and cried, "Patie-chan, I missed you... I missed you so much. You're finally back! He-hehe...!" Patie wondered and noticed the doll of herself in his hands, "Huh? You have my doll with you? Gash-chan? What happened?" The fortune teller said, "Hohoho, what a sweet little couple. I brought you back to life, young lady." Patie wondered, "Who are you? And what are you doing here Koruru-chan?" Koruru responded, "She's a nice fortune teller... and a necromancer. We help her build her house and she brought you back to life." Patie wondered, "I died? Since when?" She then remembered everything that happened while she was poisoned and Koruru said, "It's been two months since you passed away. I'm sorry for stealing your boyfriend. Gash was feeling very lonely so I took your place, and made him happy for you, but you can have him back." Patie then remembered telling young Tio to have her or Koruru taking care of Gash before passing away with her remaining life force and thanked Koruru, "Oh! Thank you, Koruru-chan, I knew I could count on you." She also remember the amount of pain and suffering she undergo, which caused her to trembled a bit in the King's arms. King Gash wondered, "Are you okay?" Patie responded, "I'm okay. And you still have my doll, Gash?" King Gash cried happily, "Unu! I slept with it everyday with Koruru-chan and played with it all the time. I never forgotten about you. I-I love so much! But... I wish you could stay with us." Patie was happy, then she wondered, "I-I love you too, but what do you mean?" The fortune teller said, "You were going to be the King's queen, right? I must apologize but my own lifespan will be ending sometime this year. When I die, you'll return back to the Spirit World, unfortunately." Patie wondered, "Spirit World?" The Fortune Teller replied, "The world of the dead." Patie said, "Oh..." King Gash was crying and said, "I'm sorry Patie-chan. I wanted to make you my queen... and..." Patie was happy and said, "It's okay Gash," and gave him a kiss on his forehead. She then said, "Don't cry when I go back. Koruru, thank you for taking care of him and when I die again, please keep Gash-chan safe." Koruru cried in happiness, "I will, Patie-nēchan!" Patie wondered, "Sister?" But she smiled. Koruru said, "Until then, I guess... I will be Zeon's... well, if he let's me..." Koruru wonders if Zeon will make her his temporarily girlfriend. Koruru then said, "Well, let's go home. Bye Miss Fortune Teller! Thank you!" The fortune teller said, "You're welcome, and thank you two for fixing my home. Now if it doesn't collapse again." King Gash said, "I'll get some people to make sure it's fixed." The fortune teller thanked him, "Thank you, My King. You are too kind."
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Scene: As time passes...


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Demon King Gash Bell was happy to see his first girlfriend alive again, however, it's only temporarily. Prince Zeon allowed Koruru to be his girlfriend until the day Patie returns back to Spirit World. which would break the King's heart again. After she returned back to the dead sometime this year, Koruru did whatever she could to make King Gash happy again, being his second girlfriend once more and his future queen. Koruru eventually becomes King Gash's official Demon Queen in this timeline and eventually have children of their own. Throughout the entire years, King Gash Bell never forgot his first girlfriend, always loving her, and he still has her doll as a memento and he sleeps with the doll every night with Koruru. In the Spirit World, Patie watched over Gash from above and was happy for them two and their family. As the years go by, Queen Koruru eventually died from a terrifying disease as dangerous as the Angry Devil's Toxin that Patie died from, leaving the old Demon King Gash Bell in depression for a long time, mourning over his lovers' and his parents' graves, but he still had his and Koruru's children, as they too became sad losing them.

Scene: Paradise of Spirit World (1,000+ years later)


Eventually, when Gash's lifespan runs out and dies sometime after the next Demon King was selected, his soul entered the Spirit World and he was placed within Paradise, a realm in the Spirit World for good demons. Upon entering this new world, Ex-king Gash received the white robes of Paradise. In this world, he was finally reunited with his parents and lovers. Ex-king Gash in adult form was happy to see his two lovers in adult forms too, and cried over them, holding both Patie and Koruru to his giant body in the white, holy plains. Patie and Koruru asked the God of Time Saturn, an archangel of Paradise, the Great Angelic Saint of Humility and ex-King of Paradise, to make them including Gash younger again so that they can play together as kids, teens, and as young adults. After meeting his parents again, Gash Bell stayed at Patie's home in Paradise. She also brought her proclaimed sister Koruru to her home and Gash could play and sleep with them together in Patie's bed. King Gash was happy to be sleeping with his two beloveds.

However, some time during Day 1 of Gash's death, Koruru requested that she and Gash should get divorced, which made Gash upset since they have children, but told Gash that she should marry Patie since Patie has been waiting so many centuries just to be with Gash again and Gash already spent enough time with Koruru in his life. A few Demon World days later, the Goddess of Love Venus, another archangel of Paradise and the Great Angelic Saint of Patience and Kindness, performed the divorce and marriage ceremony between the three. Koruru and Gash divorced while Gash married Patie, but they will still hang out together but Gash spent more of his time with Patie. They occasionally looked through Paradise's observatory to see the events of Demon World, seeing Gash's and Koruru's children mourning over their graves. Their children is also Patie's stepchildren but Patie wants to have children of their own in the Spirit World. While Gash thought it wouldn't be possible since they are dead, the Love Goddess Venus has the power to make artificial and spiritual reproductive organs for demon spirits so that they can create offspring in Paradise. Gash and Patie eventually started their own family in the Spirit World. When two demons of pure heart make children within Paradise of Spirit World, due to Paradise's atmospheric properties, their children metamorphosed into angels, human-like creatures with wings, which are native beings of Paradise and there are many angels and kind demons in Paradise with archangels being the gods of Paradise. Since then, while Zeon was also in Paradise after he passed away (Zeon was lucky to be placed in Paradise due to the actions he made throughout his life, having more good deeds than evil deeds), Zeon and Koruru eventually gets married in Paradise and have their own angelic children, making Koruru to have two sets of children of her own, a set of demon children still living in Demon World and a set of angelic children living in Spirit World's Paradise. Since then, Koruru separated herself from Gash and Patie but they all lived happily in the afterlife.
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List of Chapters (remake) on DeviantART

Volume 1: Demon Revolutionary War - The Revolution Begins
Volume 2: Demon Revolutionary War - Climax of Chaos
Volume 3: The Zulu Empire
Volume 4: Revolution from the Dead
Volume 5: The Fallen King - Reign of Chaos
Volume 6: The Fallen King - Battle of the Dead
Volume 7: The Fallen King - For the Nether

List of Chapters (original/obsolete) on DeviantART

Volume 1: The Revolution Begins
Volume 2: Climax of Chaos
Volume 3: The Zulu Empire
Volume 4: Pre-Revolution Army [Chapter 15 extension]
Volume 5: Revolution from the Dead [Chapter 15 extension]
Spin-off Chapters [non-canon chapters]
First written on January 9, 2016. Finished writing on January 13, 2016. Published at DeviantART on January 17, 2016.

List of updates in this chapter
  • Update #1 (December 27, 2016, 12:25 a.m. EST): Fixing a link that didn't close properly and fixed a typing. How did I not notice that earlier?! Sorry everyone and it made the emotional parts look awkward. I'm terribly sorry you had t read those text with unclosed link.

List of characters in this chapter
Ordered from first to last. If a character was mentioned before being seen, I will place that character where he/she was first seen instead of the first time that character was mentioned. I will also list their roles, whether they were a protagonist, supporter, or antagonist of the chapter (or for the entire fan fiction) unless if they were only mentioned (and italicize them). Characters with "†" symbol next to them are deceased/dead or destroyed (multiple "†" indicates that the character died more than one time). I will also make two lists, a list of characters in the present time and a list of character in the past time.

Character roles:
  • Protagonist: Heroes that will commonly appear in each chapter.
  • Protagonist/Supporter: Heroes that won't get much attention but will still appear or at least be mentioned in each chapter somehow.
  • Supporter: Hero/neutral characters that will only appear in a chapter or two.
  • Antagonist: Evil characters. The entire Demon Revolution Army are the antagonists of my fan fiction.
  • Mentioned only: Background characters that are only mentioned that don't have any role in my fan fiction.
Present characters
Past characters
Copyright
This fan fiction and original characters: ©NejiHyuga900/TDPNeji
Konjiki no Gash (Bell)!! / Zatch Bell!: ©Makoto Raiku
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