GG!!: Demon Revolution Army (remake) [Chapter 1 Revision 2.0]

Journal Entry: Fri Mar 27, 2015, 6:51 PM

Golden Gash!!: Demon Revolution Army

Golden Gash!!: Demon Revolution Army (remake)

Golden Gash!!: Demon Revolution Army, also known as "Konjiki no Gash!!: Mamono no Kakumei-gun" and "Zatch Bell!: Mamodo Revolution Army (金色のガッシュ! !：魔物の革命軍)" is a Zatch Bell! / Konjiki no Gash (Bell)!! fan fiction that I created. This fan fiction takes place directly after the manga, more specifically after the one-shot Konjiki no Gash!! Gaiden manga. Ignoring the events of Konjiki no Gash!! 2 (as this fanfic was written years before Konjiki no Gash!! 2's March 14, 2022 release) takes place a whole year after the Demon Battle of the third millennium (200X A.D.) has started, as a separate timeline away from Konjiki no Gash!! 2 (new mention added as of March 16, 2022), this takes place a whole year after the Demon Battle of the third millennium (200X A.D.) has started. 27 years later, an evil organization called the Demon Revolution Army is formed. This Revolution Army plans on overthrowing the kind King Zatch (Gash) Bell and put Demon World into chaos. Heroes, including Raiden Belland Rain Bell, who are the (theoretical) sons of King Zatch (Gash) Bell and Queen Patie (Penny) Bell, as well as Zeon Bell (now a good demon) and his Demon World Military, are trying to put a stop to them. Can these heroes stop this revolution army from overthrowing King Zatch (Gash) Bell and prevent chaos from occurring in the Demon World?

This is a remade version of the original Golden Gash!!: Demon Revolution Army fan fiction. The remake's storyline is similar to the original but written differently with some major changes to the story but still flows along with the original storyline. In this fan fiction remake, I will be using Japanese names and Japanese terms instead of their English counterparts.

Author Note (March 16, 2022, 3:07 p.m. EDT): I learned that two days ago that the first chapter of the new Konjiki no Gash!! 2 manga was released and I have read it but other than that, I'm not really interested in this anime/manga anymore so I don't know if I'll check any more chapters of it. Anyway, I originally wrote this fanfiction series to test my writing skills and to do something for the series since there was no sequel manga at the time other than the "Friend" side story that took place sometime after the original manga. With that said, keep in mind when reading this fanfic to take this fanfic and its world-building as an alternate universe separately different from anything that happens in Konjiki no Gash!! 2.

Chapter 1: A Sad King under the Rain Clouds [Revision 2.0]

NOTE: This chapter is a remade version of the first chapter/prologue "Post-Demon Battle" of the original Golden Gash!!: Demon Revolution Army fan fiction series. In a different way of speaking, this is an alternate version of the first chapter. This remake's storyline will still be similar but there are some major changes but the story will still flow normally alongside the first storyline.

September 6, 2018 Update Notice: After this fan fiction series was ported to Blogger, this chapter is being renamed from "Missing Parents?" to "A Sad King under the Rain Clouds" for the sake of having a better first chapter title.

DISCLAIMERS BEFORE YOU READ THE FANFIC (last updated in 2020):

This fanfiction series will contain violence with some level of gore as the chapters go on and young characters will be exposed to danger. While somewhat viewable to 13+-year-old readers, 16+ years of age is recommended by the author as the level of content may spike at times. There will be bloodshed, character deaths, limb loss, and even child characters will be put into danger. At any point do you feel uncomfortable reading this fanfiction series, stop reading, and do something else to keep your mind off it this series or seek professional help. I care for all of my readers' mental health. Read at your own risk.

Before judging the author, the author does not condone to violence of any kind in real life; only in fiction as a form of entertainment. Stay safe and be nice, everyone; be a pacifist.

While character romances will be presented to a wholesome degree, this fanfiction series does not contain any inappropriate content beyond that. However, there were reports of awkward content(s) that the author removed/altered to make things more appropriate for the general audience.

This fanfiction series does not contain profanity as the author despises profanity with the exceptions of certain skill/technique names having minor words in them.

Thank you for taking the time to read. Please read with caution, stay safe, and enjoy!

Scene: Demon World

It's been a whole year since the Demon Battle of third millennium (200X A.D.) has started and Gash Bell won that battle and became King of the Demon World. At some time right after the events of Konjiki no Gash!! Gaiden: Friend, Gash's parents, the former Demon King (who won the Demon Battle of 100X A.D.) and former Demon Queen, left town for a little bit. It's been a month since Gash was reunited with his parents ever since his and his elder twin brother Zeon Bell's birth. Gash was happy to be with his family and Zeon, who once despised his brother for possessing a power he didn't have, had a change of heart after he was defeated in the Demon Battle and swears he will always protect his brother Gash, the current Demon King. King Gash made his brother second-in-command of Demon World.

Scene: Demon World Elementary No. 7 (a few days after Gash's parents left)

Even though Gash Bell is now King of Demon World, he still goes to school. It was morning and King Gash went to school. But he looked kind of sad, worried that his parents never came home. Before first period started, right before he got into his first class, he got ambushed. "Gash-sama! Good morning!" A beautiful, little girl with short hair jumped on King Gash from the classroom and landed on him outside the doorway. Gash's expression changed from depression to annoyance and screamed in a high-pitch, "Patie-chan, get off of me! I'm Demon King! No touchy!" The girl that glomped on Gash got back up and said, "Oh, come on, Gash-chan! Make me your queen already!" Gash yelled while pushing Patie off of him, "No! Get off! I don't want you!" Patie's expression changed from a lovingly expression to an angry expression in an instant and yelled in a deep, graveling voice, "What did you say?!" Gash got scared and screamed in fear. A little girl in pink that's in the classroom said to Patie while King Gash was trying to push her off of him, "Patie, get off of him. You know Gash doesn't like that." Patie overly misunderstood the girl's statement, letting go of the poor King Gash, and responded the young, pink girl in a serious voice, "Oh, you just want Gash-chan to yourself, don't you?! Well, you can't have him, Tio! Gash-sama is mine!" Tio responded in a serious voice, "Excuse me? I never said that. Anyways, Gash would never choose someone as obnoxious as you to be his queen." Patie yelled back in a deep, graveling voice, "What did you say, Pinky?!" Both girls were having an argument and ended up having a small cat fight. Every other student in the classroom were speechless and did not want to get involved in between two angry girls.

King Gash got back up. Normally, he would be scared and sneak away or sneak to his seat while the girls would fight (usually over him), but he went back into his depression and took his seat normally. The girls that were fighting each other noticed Gash's depression, stopped fighting, and Tio said while grappling Patie, "Gash-sama? What's wrong?" In the classroom, one of their other friends, Kyanchome, a duck-like humanoid demon, said, "What's wrong Gash-sama? Did something happened?" Upon hearing his friend's question, Gash changed his expression and said, "Oh, it's nothing." Gash was depressed that his parents never returned. They were supposed to be home yesterday. Another one of Gash's friends, Schneider—a small horse demon, nicknamed "Umagon"—wondered and said, "Meru?" Schneider is a demon that can't speak normally; all he says is "meru" and "mé." King Gash took his seat normally and Patie said to Tio, "Hmm! We'll settle this later." Tio responded, "Hmm!," while letting go off Patie.

A few hours later, during lunchtime, King Gash's friends Kyanchome, Tio, and Schneider "Umagon" started noticing Gash's depression and they joined Gash. Kyanchome asked, "Is something wrong Gash?" Gash changed his expression again and said, "Nothing. I'm fine." Tio noticed Gash's depression and stated, "I know something is wrong with you. You can tell us, we are your friends after all." Suddenly, "Gash-sama!" Patie sneaked up and held Gash again. Gash was jumpscared and yelled in annoyance, "Patie-chan, stop doing this!" Tio said to Patie, "Patie, leave Gash-sama alone!" Patie overly misunderstood her again and yelled while squeezing the King, "You can't have him! He's mine!" Kyanchome and Schneider was about to get scared, seeing the two girls almost having another fight. While the two girls almost got into another long argument, Gash was feeling down again, while Patie was holding him. Patie wondered, "What's wrong Gash-sama, my darling?" Gash responded to his friends, "My parents never came him last home last night." Tio asked, "How long were they gone?" Gash said while Patie was still holding him, but gently, and listening, "Three days. They were supposed to be back yesterday." Kyanchome said, "Don't worry, I'm sure they'll be back." Patie said while squeezing Gash a bit tighter, "Oh, poor Gash-chan. If you need any love, I'm here for you." Gash was feeling awkward with Patie getting too close. Tio felt jealous and said to Patie, "Patie-chan, let go of him. He doesn't need your love." Patie got angry and yelled at Tio in a deep voice, "What did you say, Pinky?!" She let go of Gash and Patie and Tio got into another fight. Kyanchome and Schneider got scared of the girls and Gash said, "Both of you, please stop fighting." King Gash is trying to be a King Ruler and he doesn't want demons, especially his friends to fight each other. King Gash did get some of his hopes back from his friends' encouragement and Gash said to Kyanchome, "And thank you Kyanchome. I'm sure they'll be back like you said."

Scene: Royal Bell Family Palace (several hours later)

After school ended, King Gash ran back home to his palace with a smile, hoping to see if his parents returned. Gash returned home and Gash yelled, "Hello! I'm home! Mom, Dad, are you back?! Mom? Dad?" He then noticed his brother talking to some guards and King Gash went up to him and Gash asked, "Zeon-nīsan, are mom and dad back?" Zeon stayed home during school hours so that he can take over his place while Gash was in school. Education and ruling was hard for the Demon King so Gash and his brother would take turns going to school and maintaining/helping Demon World (the brother that was at school would usually bring homework for the other brother), ever since that one incident where a poor, orphaned demon child named Mūmu was calling for help to save his elder sister but King Gash Bell never saved the poor orphan boy's sister's in time before she died, which dropped his reputation as a King Ruler but King Gash made up for that incident. The guards that Zeon talked too went out of the palace. Zeon responded back to his brother, "Unfortunately, they're still not back." King Gash was depressed again and Zeon said, "Don't worry Gash-sama, I'm sending scouts to locate them." Gash said with less depression, "Okay, thank you." Then he took off his school backpack, pulled out Zeon's homework and said, "And here is your homework Zeon-nīsan." Zeon and took his school assignments and said, "Thanks. And don't worry, I'm sure they are okay." Gash shook his head, "Unu."

Scene: Royal Bell Family Palace and Demon World Elementary School No. 7 (a month later)

A month has passed since the previous Demon World monarchs; King Gash's and Zeon's parents were missing. They were never found. Most of the scouts Zeon sent suddenly disappeared as well with no traces or evidence. They couldn't be found either and no one knows what happened to them. One of the scouts said to Zeon, "Sorry Zeon-sama. I lost contact with my team and your parents couldn't be found. I hate to say it but...." Zeon understood and said, "Alright, we'll cancel this mission for now. I guess I will have to tell Gash-sama the bad news."

[Insert random sad music]

Sometime during school, when it was Gash's turn to take shift in school, Zeon went to their demon school and gave King Gash the bad news. Each day before that, King Gash would be more worried and depressed each day but now, King Gash's depression significantly increased upon hearing the bad nnews. His heart was pain and his brother tried cheering him up saying, "Don't worry. As a brother, I'm always here for you," then left. Gash only met his parents for a month after the Demon Battle and during since his birth and now his parents were gone, not to be seen again. Gash decided to miss out on his classes and went to the playground, crying all day and it was raining heavily outside. None of Gash's friends seen Gash all day (although Schneider moved out to a different town by now along with his mother and father for some unknown family reasons and Schneider was schooled somewhere else) and were worried but one of his friends Patie, that would usually annoy Gash found him and said in infatuation, "There he is! He's here!" School was almost over but Patie was excused from class to go to the "restroom" but she decided to look for the King instead. After finding him, Patie then yelled from a window a few stories high inside the school, "Gash-sama!" She then realized he was crying and wondered what was wrong with him. She grabbed her umbrella and ran outside the school to the playground. Luckily, she still found Gash crying next to a tree. Patie slowly walked up to the crying King and gently asked while holding an umbrella, "Gash-sama? What's wrong? Have you been here this whole time? Everyone was worried about you. You'll catch a fever being out here in the rain." The King was all wet from the rain. His heart was aching, and he lost the high-spirited optimism that he used to always have. King Gash asked, "Patie... chan?," and wondered if she was going to glomp on him again but Patie didn't this time. Patie sat next to him and said, "Here," and held her umbrella above him. Gash calmed down a little, but still crying, and said, "My parents, they never came back. Zeon-nīsan stopped looking for them." Patie said with sympathy, "I'm sorry." She then gave a gentle hug to Gash." Gash was slightly feeling uncomfortable and asked "Patie-chan, what are you doing?" But at the same time, he didn't mind and Patie said, "I know romance isn't your thing but Gash-chan, right now, you need love more than anything and I'm always here for you if you need it." Gash didn't argue. He paused without saying anything for a second, then said, "Thank you," and held onto Patie. For once, he was slightly enjoying being next the one who always annoyed him.

Patie was happy. She was a little bit shy to asked him something for a few seconds then asked, "Hey Gash-chan. W-will you make me... your queen someday?" Gash was now uncomfortable. He let go of her and wanted to say "no," but didn't want to make her mad or upset again but Patie said a few seconds later, "I'm sorry for asking, but... I don't want to see you suffer like this anymore. Seeing you depressed makes me sad. I'm glad that you're king but your depression will affect your performance as Demon King and I don't want you to get a bad reputation. Ruling over Demon World must be hard for you to do alone. I know you have your brother, who was once a jerk to you, but wouldn't it be nice for you to have a queen by your side, to give you all the help you need?" King Gash responded, "Maybe. I don't know." Patie said, "If you ever feel lonely, need to be loved, or someone to help you or this world, I will always be available if you need me." King Gash said, "Okay. But Patie-chan, I have some questions." Patie responded, "Yes?" King Gash asked, "I wonder, why would you go that far to help me? And why do you love me?"

During the time Gash and Patie were talking in the school's playground, the final class period just ended. As students wondered getting ready to go home, Kyanchome talked to one of his friends Leopardon Papipurio in the hallway, then walked with Tio. They were in the same hallway Patie was in when she found Gash. Kyanchome looked out the window and said, "Hey, there's Gash!" Tio said, "Where?" And looked out the window and Kyanchome said, "And Patie-chan is with him." Tio got jealous and said, "What's SHE doing with him?!" Papipurio looked out the window and said, "The King found himself a girlfriend!," which angered Tio even more and Kyanchome said to Tio, "Looks like someone's jealous!" Tio got enraged and said, "SHUT UP!," while strangling both Kyanchome and Papipurio, then headed to towards outside.

Back at the playground, after King Gash asked Patie his questions, Patie was blushing, a bit shy to answer, but answer his second question first, "Well... when I first saw you, I had this strange feeling in my heart... You looked so majestic. I felt like... I was in-love. I'm sorry for being a creep. But I'm glad you became King." Then she answered his first question with guilt and seriousness, "And the reason why I want you to make me your future queen is because I want to make up for all the damaged I caused to you and everyone else in the Human World. I want to redeem myself and prove to you that I can be a kind queen." A few tears dropped from her eyes and she continued, "I'm sorry Gash-chan. It was a mistake for me and Byonko to join that darned Zophise. We both regret joining him. He's done horrible things and we've done horrible things for him. I hate him! Gash-chan, I'm sorry. I just couldn't control my emotions when you lost your memories and I couldn't take heartbreaks." From a distance, a small figure in silhouette said, "What a brat," and disappeared. Apparently someone was lurking and listening to their conversation around the school. King Gash said to Patie, "It's not your fault—" Patie took the blame on herself and said while crying in guilt, "Yes it it! And until I can do more things to redeem myself, this guilt of mine will never go away; I want to clear my sins. That why I want you to make me your future queen; I want to help others and make them happy—and to make you happy. It's the only way for my guilt to go away—" Gash interfered and said, "Patie-chan, please..." Patie paused, then said with less tears coming out of her eyes, "I know I shouldn't force you... And I'm sorry if I'm forcing you... You have the right to choose your own queen, not me. But your mom and dad are still missing and I don't want you to go through that loneliness." Patie had a worried look him her eyes and the King noticed it. She stood up, then King Gash stood up, still under Patie's umbrella. King Gash then said, "I'll think about it." King Gash started blushing in embarrassment and said, "And... if I were to make you.... my queen... will you give me yellowtail every day?" Yellowtail fish are the King's favorite food and Gash would be happy. Patie became happy said with tears of joy, "Hmm! It's a deal!" The rain was gradually slowing down, then it stopped. Patie took her umbrella then went home.

[/End of random sad music]

After the Demon King waved Patie goodbye, an angry pink girl showed up and yelled, "What was all of that about?! And Gash, where have you been?" Kyanchome, as well as one of their friends Byonko, was trying to hold back Tio and the King got scared and said, "I... I..." King Gash started crying a little. Tio calmed down while seeing Gash crying and said, "What's wrong?" King Gash said, "My parents are... gone." Kyanchome and Tio already knew that but King Gash continued, "For this whole month, Zeon-nīsan's been searching for them. We still can't find them. He called off the search." Kyanchome and Tio were surprised and said, "What?" King Gash continued, "I'm sorry I missed out my classes." And Tio asked in jealousy, "And what was Patie-chan here for?" Byonko wondered, "Patie-chan was here?" Gash didn't answer that, but he did say while blushing in embarrassment, but still with tears of depression, "I'm... I'm thinking about... making her my future queen." Tio got jealous, and she and Kyanchome were surprised that King Gash actually selected a future queen and Tio yelled, "WHAT?! Among all girls, you chose her?" Gash also got scared and he said, "I-I'm sorry Tio. But I've been feeling lonely this whole month... and she is suffering from guilt from the things she did in Human World and wants to make up for it. So I might give her a chance. I'm sorry Tio, if you wanted me." Byonko was awestruck and crying with tears of joy said, "Gerororo! Good for you Gash-sama! I too wish to I could redeem myself-gero!" Tio was still feeling a bit jealous but kind of accepted it and said, "No, it's fine." She then thought about King Gash's situation, as well as Patie's situation according to what King Gash said, and said with acceptance, "It might be better off this way. You've been really depressed about your parents' disappearance, which has really dropped your performance as Demon King." She then placed her hands on his shoulders and said, "You need someone that really loves you. And Gash, there is something I need to tell you." Gash wondered, "What?" Tio confessed, blushing in embarrassment, "I... I need to let you know that... I love you too... that we love you." Then she started crying a little and said, "But as much as I would like to be a queen, you need someone like her that always loved you and will always love you. And if she wants to vindicate herself, then you should... make her your queen. Sure she and I can be very scary sometimes, especially when you do stupid things, but her heart is more lovingly than mine; you won't have to feel this loneliness anymore if you accept her love. I want you to go back to the Gash we once knew, the one who's always full of spirit." King Gash cried with joy and said, "Thank you, Tio!" Kyanchome was surprised and confused about Tio's change of emotion and said, "What?" Byonko was happy and said with tears of joy, "Patie-chan will be queen-gero! Way to go Gash-sama! Gerororo! I'm proud of you and her! Gerororo!" King Gash was embarrassed and said with a smile, "Unu!"

Scene: Around the Capital City of Demon World

A second later after that conversion, some loud explosions occurred around the capital city of Demon World as if bombs were blowing up randomly. "What's going on?" King Gash wondered. Byonko was worried, panicked, and said, "My house was in the direction of that explosion! GERORORO!" "Let's check it out!" King Gash said with confidence. His spirits were restored. The four ran towards the direction of the explosion and Byonko panicked, "Oh no! Oh no! Ohhhh, No, no, no! Gerononono!" His house was destroyed and was in a rubble. Everyone inside it was dead. "How could have this happened? Who did this? Gerorororo!" Another explosion occurred on the other side of town. "Let's check it out!" King Gash said. Byonko was devastated that his home was blown up and he stayed for a few seconds, crying, before following King Gash, Kyanchome, and Tio again.

At the site of the second explosion, "Why? Why would you do this? Zophise?! My home.... my family.... And Byonko's?" Patie cried. She was injured and her home was destroyed through explosions. Zophise said, "Hehe! Because I'm evil. I never really changed my ways. This is just punishment to my former subordinates who betrayed me!" Patie was enraged with hatred and was crying with tears of grief and yelled, "Zophise, I will kill you! Suō Giakuru!" Patie summoned a sea serpent made of water and aimed at Zophise. Zophise said, "Idiot," then incanted, "Digan Teoradomu!," shooting out multiple, explosive purple energy balls at the water dragon, destroying Patie's water dragon, then shot a few more of those purple volatile spheres at Patie's home and at her. Patie was too emotional that she didn't counter it in time and got blasted in the explosion, but luckily, she survived. Zophise said with an evil smile, "Is that all you got? You were a weak subordinate. Time to finish you off. Hmm..." Zophise noticed someone following him, someone with a dark aura, full of anger, but neutral. Zophise got scared and said, "Oh no, not him! You're lucky to be spared this time." Zophise teleported out of the scene and Patie fell unconscious from all the injuries she has, with tears dropping down the right side of her eyes.

While King Gash and his friends were following the second direction, they saw a teenage demon in black heading that way. Kyanchome asked, "Hey, isn't that?" King Gash knew, "Brago!" Byonko wondered, "What's he doing here? Wait, don't tell me it was him. I won't forgive him if he attacked my home." The others wondered. Brago appeared at the crime scene and said, "Darn, where did he go?" King Gash and his friends arrive and King Gash yelled, "Brago, what are you doing?" King Gash was suspicious of Brago and Brago answered, "None of your business," and was walking forward, away from the scene and King Gash said, "Wait, did you do this?" King Gash was getting angry, suspecting Brago to the attacker. Patie got some of her conscious back and said in pain, "Gash... chan?" She couldn't move her body. "Patie-chan!" King Gash was worried and ran up to the severely injured Patie. His friends ran up to her too. Patie became conscious and said, "Z-Zophise... he... Urgh!" Patie reacted in pain. Gash wondered, "Zophise? He did this?!" Tio said, "Hold on! Saifojio!" Tio summoned a large, pink healing sword and healed Patie's wounds with it. Patie said, "Thank you, Tio-chan." Then she started crying, "Zophise destroyed mine and Byonko's homes." Brago said in seriousness, "And that's why I'm after home. I told him if he were to do such a thing again, I would make his life a misery!" Brago started walking away and Byonko was crying and his anger grew and said, "Wait, Brago." Brago stopped and Byonko said with tears of anger, "I will be the one who will defeat Zophise-gero. Patie-chan, I promise you that I will avenge you, your family, and my own-gerororo!" Brago said, "Whatever," and disappeared from the crime scene. Byonko asked, "Gash-sama, when I grow older-gero, will you let me join Demon World Military?" King Gash said, "I guess but Byonko, revenge isn't right." Byonko said, "Please Gash-sama, Zophise has done enough damage to Demon World-gero and I want to do something to redeem myself-gerororo!" Patie smiled and said, "Byonko-kun." Kyanchome said to Byonko, "And I'll help you Byonko. I'll join with you. You can live with me, if you want. We can be like brothers. I'm sure my mother will allow it." Byonko said, "Thank you, Kyanchome! Gerororo!"

Patie started crying again. King Gash asked, "Patie-chan, what's wrong?" Patie said, "I'm alone now. My family... my home... I hate Zophise!" She continued crying more and asked, "I'm sorry Gash-chan, I know I shouldn't ask you this, but... can I..." King Gash understood and said, "Unu! You can stay in my palace." Patie was surprised and said, "Really?" King Gash said, "Unu! I thought about it. We both lost our parents and I don't want you to suffer like me. Because I feel very lonely, even though I have Zeon-nīsan, I really want to be with someone who will always love me. I don't want to feel that loneliness again and I don't want you to go through it too." King Gash started crying. Patie smiled and said with tears of joy, "Thank you Gash-chan," and wrapped her arms around his shoulders, and said, "And I promise, I won't disappoint you; I will become a good kind queen that you would want if you make me your queen." Gash said, "Unu! I will." King Gash's friends were happy for them. Tio felt a little bit jealous but is still happy for King Gash and Patie and knew that this would have been the best for them.

King Gash's friends went home. Kyanchome introduced Byonko to his family and they accepted him and adopted Byonko as one of their children; both Kyanchome and Byonko became adoptive brothers since then and both agree to join Demon World Military when they grow older so that they can keep this world peaceful. King Gash carried some of Patie's belongings, whatever remains in-tact from all of the rubble in her home, and carried it to his palace using his Rauzaruku, an electrical, self-power augmentation spell that gives him a rainbow aura to enhance his speed and strength for 30 seconds.

Scene: Royal Bell Family Palace (about 20 minutes later or so)

[Insert random castle theme]

As they entered the palace, Zeon asked, "Gash-sama? What's going on out there, and what are you doing?" King Gash explained to his brother. A minute after the explanation, Zeon said, "I wonder if this Zophise is also responsible for the missing of our parents, likely not. I'll send some troops to find him and send him to justice for terrorism." King Gash was worried as Byonko was the one that wanted to send Zophise to justice. And Zeon said, "And if you are going to make this girl your queen, I will protect her the same way I protect you." Patie was happy and said to Zeon while hugging Gash, "Thank you Zeon-nīsama [big brother]!" Zeon wondered, "Brother? Anyways, make yourself at home," and Gash was having a hard time breathing and said, "Patie-chan, you are too tight." Patie loosen him a little and said, "Sorry Gash-anata [darling]!" Zeon thought, she'll be quite annoying, but whatever, it is Gash-sama's wish. Patie asked, "Can we get the rest of our things Gash-chan?" Gash said, "Okay." Then he said to his brother, "Zeon-nīsan, I'm sorry I didn't bring homework for you. I've been feeling lonely that I missed my classes." Zeon said, "It's fine; you've been through a lot. Anyways, you should get some rest after everything that happened." King Gash said, "I'll be fine. I'll be bad in a little bit." Zeon said, "Be careful, My Majesty!" Zeon is worried about his younger twin brother, the Demon King.

[/End of random castle music]

Scene: Between the Bell's Palace and Patie's ruined home

[Insert random romantic music]

The Demon King was helping Patie carrying everything else from her home to his palace and he used his Rauzaruku several times to enhance his strength to move them easier but then Gash got tired during the last run for losing too much energy and Patie said, "Gash-chan, please don't overdo it." King Gash said, "D-don't worry, I can—Ugh!" King Gash dropped one of Patie's dressers and got exhausted. Patie grabbed him and carried him from his chest towards a tree. King Gash reacted, "Patie-chan, what are you—" Patie said while lying down with her back against a tree, "Gash-chan, you need to take a break." Patie held King Gash towards the heart garment of her dress. "Patie?" Gash said. Patie gently brushed the back of Gash's hair with her right fingers while holding his back with her left arm, "There, here, Gash-chan". Gash heard Patie's heartbeat and felt a loving warmth in her heart, and thought to himself, this feeling, it reminds me of ... The feeling reminds him of his mother when Gash was a baby; the feeling of his mother taking care of him; that warm feeling. Gash surprisingly felt very relaxed, enjoying this warm moment with his new and first girlfriend Patie as it reminded him of his memories as a baby with his mother. King Gash's heart was having a strange feeling too. Could this be...love?

Patie looked around and said, "Wait here Gash-chan," and got up while laying Gash against the tree. The King wondered, "Patie-chan, what are you doing?" Patie said, "It'll be a surprise. I'll be back in a minute. Wait there for me." King Gash wondered what his new girlfriend was doing. He laid back against the tree, looked forward and upward and was thinking and wondering. Before he got too worried where Patie went, Patie came back sooner than he thought and Patie said, "Gash-chan! I got a present for you." She revealed a large, yellowtail amberjack. The King was happy and said, "For me?!" Patie said, "All for you!" Patie gave King Gash the yellowtail and sat next to him. King Gash chowed down the yellowtail, well most of it. Then Patie's stomach started growling. King Gash stopped eating and wanted to give Patie his leftovers. Patie said, "No, I couldn't, it's for you." King Gash said, "We can share. You're hungry too." Patie was happy and said, "Thank you, so much," and finished King Gash's leftovers. After they ate, King Gash thanked her, "Thank you for the yellowtail." Patie said, "You're welcome, Gash-chan."

A few minutes later after spending time together against a tree, they got back up and King Gash carried the rest of her belongings to his palace and used his Rauzaruku to make it easier.

[/End of random romantic music]

Scene: Royal Bell Family Palace (nighttime)

King Gash and Patie got back to the palace with Patie's latest belongings. King Gash said, "We're back Zeon-nīsan." Zeon said, "About time. I was getting worried. Well, you two look like you need a clean-up." Both Patie and King Gash were kind of dirty going through rubble in Patie's destroyed home. Both King Gash and Patie looked at themselves. After the kids were cleaned, they had dinner in the Great Hall, and later that night, they were preparing to go to bed, arranging a place for Patie to sleep for the night.

Scene: A mysterious cave around Demon World (midnight)

[Insert random spooky music]

Sometime later that night, Zophise was trying to find a place to hide. He thought to himself, I think Brago stopped following me and I hope the town guards aren't after me. I need to find a place to hide... There! Zophise found himself a cave to hide. He looked around and found someone lying on the ground with two swords next to him, looking bored. The mysterious demon asked him, "Who are you?" Zophise said, "Does it really matter?" The mysterious demon then said, "You don't need to tell me. I can already see it in your mind. Your name is Zophise, right? I can also see you have an evil heart like mine." Zophise was shocked. "I can feel fear in your mind. This Brago, does this demon scare you?," the mysterious demon said, reading Zophise' thoughts. Zophise asked him, "Who are you? And what makes you think I fear him?" The mysterious demon replied, "I'm just a nobody. No one cares about me. I'm treated like an outcast because of things I've done. But if you are that curious, I'm Zeil, a sword mage and a prankster. While I may be a swordsman, I have the power to read and feel people's thoughts, as well as their heart. Say, you want to get revenge on this Brago, don't you? I can help you do that." "What makes you think I need your help?" Zophise asked. "Besides that, I don't like this new monarch, Gash Bell, that we have now especially since he placed new laws that makes this world more boring," Zeil said. Zeil then asked, "Would you like to join me in making a more chaotic world?" Zophise said, "Gash Bell, that Lightning Blond, I despise that brat too. I want him dead. I'm interested." Zeil said, "Well, it looks like we both have the same interest." They shook hands.

Somewhere nearby, a mysterious demon said, "Well, looks like we are not the only ones who want to overthrow this boring king, 'eh brother?!" Another mysterious demon said, "Hmm, Zeil and Zophise. Interesting. They could be a great asset to our revolution." That mysterious demon makes an evil smirk. Who are these demons and what are they planning? Could they be responsible for the King's missing parents?

[/End of random spooky music]

List of Chapters (remake)

Volume 1: Demon Revolutionary War - The Revolution Begins

Chapter 1: Missing Parents?
Chapter 2: Prepare for War! A Revolutionary War!
Chapter 3: First Strike!
Chapter 4: Back to the Past!
Chapter 5: Training for War! [Part A / Part B]

Volume 2: Demon Revolutionary War - Climax of Chaos

Chapter 6: The Real Battle Begins! [Part A / Part B]
Chapter 7: Cyber-Colossus and Black Thunder
Chapter 8: Demon Sorcerers and a New King [Part A / Part B]
- Chapter 8b Alternate: Protection from a Brother
Chapter 9: Shinigami of Darkness
Chapter 10: Light and Darkness

Volume 3: The Zulu Empire

Chapter 11: Human World is Under Attack!
Chapter 12: The Dembot Guardians [Part A / Part B / Part C]
Chapter 13: Zulu Imperial Tower [Part A / Part B]
Chapter 14: A Warless Future Begins
Chapter 15: Pre-Revolution Showdown [Part A / Part B]
Chapter 16: Dr. Zulu's Revenge [Part A / Part B]

Chapter 16b Alternate: Tragedy of a Beloved

Volume 4: Revolution from the Dead

Chapter 17: Depths of the Netherworld [Part A / Part B]
Chapter 18: A New God, a New War [Part A / Part B]
Chapter 19: Armageddon is Rising! [Part A / Part B]
Chapter 20: Ragnarök: Archangels vs. Archdevils [Part A / Part B]
Chapter 21: New Dembot Guardians [Part A / Part B]
Chapter 22: Final Battle of the Gods

Volume 5: The Fallen King - Reign of Chaos

Volume 6: The Fallen King - Battle of the Dead

Volume 7: The Fallen King - For the Nether

Chapter 33 (TFK 11): Return from the Nether [Part A / Part B]
Chapter 34 (TFK 12): Wrath of the Nether
Chapter 35 (TFK 13): Spirit World Origins
Chapter 36 (TFK 14): The Truth from Beyond
Chapter 37 (TFK 15): Divine Justice [Part A / Part B]

List of Chapters (original/obsolete)

Volume 1: The Revolution Begins

Volume 2: Climax of Chaos

Volume 3: The Zulu Empire

Volume 4: Pre-Revolution Army [Chapter 15 extension]

Volume 5: Revolution from the Dead [Chapter 15 extension]

Spin-off Chapters [non-canon chapters]

Finished writing on April 27, 2015. Published at DeviantART on March 27, 2015. Last updated on May 9, 2019.

List of updates in this chapter

Update #1 (March 28, 2015, 3:46 a.m. EDT): Fixing grammar errors I haven't fixed yet in my "Conflicts with other chapters" blockquote after the end of this chapter.
Update #2 (March 28, 2015, 1:00 p.m. EDT): Adding extra information in the "conflicts" box for Chapters 4 and 5, relating to Gash's missing/dead parents.
Update #3 (April 15, 2015, 12:10 a.m. EDT): [MAJOR UPDATE] Koruru will be involved in this remake's storyline, not directly in this first chapter, but after this chapter. She would be introduced in Chapter 2+'s remake storyline (as stated in the "Conflicts with other chapters" section), so additional changes were made to this remake's storyline but Koruru would be kept away from the main events just to keep the remake's storyline as close to the original storyline. I haven't stated everything that she would do in this remake's storyline but I stated as much as I could think, especially the more notable ones.
Update #4 (April 15, 2015, 1:23 a.m. EDT): [ACCIDENTAL REVERT] DARN IT! While updating this chapter multiple times, for some reason, everything was erased (there was an error while submitting this my last time). I had to go through my Sta.sh and replacement my mistake with the previously saved revision of this chapter back in March 28.
Update #5 (April 15, 2015, 2:10 a.m. EDT): [RE-FIX UPDATE] Took a while to fix this chapter and re-mention Future Koruru (as Zeon's wife/princess) for my remake's storyline but there is still for me to write. Will update more later.
Update #6 (April 15, 2015, 11:38 a.m. EDT): It seems like there is a character limit when writing literature (I kept getting errors while trying to submit unless if I take away a paragraph or two out) so I moved the "Conflicts with other chapters" section to this description. I also added additional notable changes involving with future Koruru that I haven't made yet or forgot to re-add.
Update #7 (May 21, 2015, 11:10 p.m. EDT): Adding a castle theme song for a palace scene and changing the second romance music.
Update #8 (May 24, 2015, 12:53 p.m. EDT): Because I'm remaking my fan fiction, I'm removing the differences between the remake's storyline and first storyline. I'm also removing the last few paragraphs to add in a bigger cliffhanger.
Update #9 (July 3, 2015, 7:37 p.m. EDT): Changing "Location" to "Scene" in the subheadings.
Update #10 (August 2, 2015, 11:21 p.m. EDT): For speaking spells, I change "casted" to "incanted."
Update #11 (October 4, 2016, 9:17 p.m. EDT): Updated my main journal skin (added a chapter list for this remade storyline in the footer and added my 2nd GG!DRA Updates journal and the link to my remade storyline on FanFiction.NET) and I'll be applying my updated Rai'oh journal skin to all of my remade chapters (I'm not going to post this update in every chapter (as well as my related journals); this one update in this chapter counts for ALL CHAPTERS) and since my updated Rai'oh journal skin now has a chapter list for my remade storyline, I'm removing the chapter list in each chapter from the description box since they aren't needed anymore (I only had a chapter list in those description boxes since I couldn't update my journal skin as a regular DeviantART member). I also removed the notice at the bottom of this chapter, which was telling you to ignore the scrollboxes since I didn't have my remade chapter list in the footer at the time.
Update #12 (September 6, 2018, 11:01 p.m. EDT): Now that I copy/pasted all of my chapters from here to my Blogger, I'm not really digging the original title name of the first chapter anymore. I decided to rename this chapter from "Missing Parents?" to "A Sad King under the Rain Clouds".
Update #13 (November 25, 2018, 11:56 p.m. EST): I added an announcement in the description today and I'll also state something similar in this chapter and this chapter only. Read that before reading this fanfiction series. I also removed the vague bath scene in this channel due to complaints I received the Zatch Bell! community.
Update #14 (November 26, 2018, 2:15 a.m. EDT): Rewriting the disclaimer in the middle of the chapter much better. AHHHHH! I was such an idiot! Ignore anything prior! It never happened! My apologies to everyone who read such filth! It's all good now. The mature filter for minor sexual content in this chapter is also removed.
Update #15 (November 26, 2018, 11:52 p.m. EDT): Rewriting the disclaimer in the beginning and middle of the chapter again further detail. And I also made many more grammar fixes (why am I still finding them!?).
Update #16 (March 7, 2019, 12:53 p.m. EDT): Removing some extra, unnecessary scenes.
Update #17 (March 12, 2019, 5:54 p.m. EDT): Rephrasing a paragraph too. It's very vague but I'm still making it filler-less as possible.
Update #18 (May 9, 2019, 11:19 p.m. EST): [MAJOR UPDATE] Wow, I found some more cringy scenes I missed while removing stuff back in November and March. So much for "revised". Now it's really revised. People, if you find anything cringy within this fanfiction series, PLEASE LET ME KNOW and I'll take care of it. I don't have time to re-inspect everything I previously wrote years ago.
Update #19 (March 12, 2020, 1:00 p.m. EST): Never would have thought I would come back here again but I decided to update the disclaimer, featuring what types of content exist and doesn't exist in this fanfiction series.
Update #20 (March 29, 2020, 12:15 a.m. EDT): HAPPY 5th ANNIVERSARY of this remake! (Sorry, I have no plans to do something for this anniversary.) Added a few more bits of disclaiming information about the level of violence, mentioning that there will be bloodshed, character deaths, and limb loss. I should have done that in my previous update.
Update #21 (March 16, 2020, 3:14 p.m. EDT): Mentioning the release of Konjiki no Gash!! 2 manga in the overview, noting that my fanfic and my fanfic's world-building is completely separate from anything that happens Konjiki no Gash!! 2. I was never expecting the original manga to get a sequel manga until I learned earlier this month but other than reading the first chapter, I'm not really interested in it.

List of characters in this chapter

Ordered from first to last. If a character was mentioned before being seen, I will place that character where he/she was first seen instead of the first time that character was mentioned. I will also list their roles, whether they were a protagonist, supporter, or antagonist of the chapter (or for the entire fan fiction) unless if they were only mentioned. I wonder if there is actually a character limit or if something was wrong with the final paragraph.

Character roles:

Protagonist: Heroes that will commonly appear in each chapter.
Protagonist/Supporter: Heroes that won't get much attention but will still appear or at least be mentioned in each chapter somehow.
Supporter: Hero/neutral characters that will only appear in a chapter or two.
Antagonist: Evil characters. The entire Demon Revolution Army are the antagonists of my fan fiction.
Mentioned only: Background characters that are only mentioned that don't have any role in my fan fiction.

Present (Past) characters

Demon King Zatch (Gash) Bell - Protagonist
Former Demon King Bell - Supporter, Mentioned
Former Demon Queen Bell - Supporter, Mentioned
Demon Prince Zeno (Zeon) Bell - Protagonist(/Supporter)
Penny (Patie) - Protagonist
Tia (Tio) - Protagonist/Supporter
Kanchomé (Kyanchome) - Protagonist(/Supporter)
Schneider "Ponygon (Umagon)" - Supporter(/Protagonist)
Unnamed Demon World Military soldiers - Supporters
Schneider's Mother - Mentioned
Schneider's Father - Mentioned
Purio (Leopardon Papipurio) - Supporter
Byonko - Protagonist(/Supporter)
Zofis (Zophise) - Antagonist
Brago - Supporter
Kanchomé's (Kyanchome's) Mother - Mentioned
OC: Zeil - Antagonist
OC: Zega - Antagonist
OC: Zecross - Antagonist

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