Monday, September 3, 2018

Golden Gash!!: Demon Revolution Army (remake) [Chapter 7]

Golden Gash!!: Demon Revolution Army (remake) [Chapter 7]

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Golden Gash!!: Demon Revolution Army user guide



Golden Gash!!: Demon Revolution Army (remake)


Golden Gash!!: Demon Revolution Army, also known as "Konjiki no Gash!!: Mamono no Kakumei-gun (金色のガッシュ! !：魔物の革命軍)" and "Zatch Bell!: Mamodo Revolution Army" is a Zatch Bell! / Konjiki no Gash (Bell)!! fan fiction that I created. This fan fiction takes place directly after the manga, more specifically after the one-shot Konjiki no Gash!! Gaiden manga. It takes place a whole year after the Demon Battle of the third millennium (200X A.D.) has started. 27 years later, an evil organization called the Demon Revolution Army is formed. This Revolution Army plans on overthrowing the kind King Zatch (Gash) Bell and put Demon World into chaos. Heroes, including Raiden Belland Rain Bell, who are the (theoretical) sons of King Zatch (Gash) Bell and Queen Patie (Penny) Bell, as well as Zeon Bell (now a good demon) and his Demon World Military, are trying to put a stop to them. Can these heroes stop this revolution army from overthrowing King Zatch (Gash) Bell and prevent chaos from occurring in the Demon World?

This is a remade version of the original Golden Gash!!: Demon Revolution Army fan fiction. The remake's storyline is similar to the original but written differently with some major changes to the story but still flows along with the original storyline. In this fan fiction remake, I will be using Japanese names and Japanese terms instead of their English counterparts.

Chapter 7: Cyber-Colossus and Black Thunder


NOTE: This chapter is a remade version of the seventh chapter "The Additional Death Generals" of the original Golden Gash!!: Demon Revolution Army fan fiction series.

Recap


[Insert random recap music]
The second battle of the Demon Revolutionary War began. After the Demon Revolution Army's Death Generals introduced themselves to the public, their co-leaders sent Death Generals #5 Zeferno and #6 Zedusa and their armies into battle against the Demon World Military. It was a heavy-double battle but our heroes managed to defeat the devilish Zeferno and the fear-inducing Zedusa but the other Death Generals fled the battlefield. What could they be planning next?
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Scene: Demon Revolution Army's current hidden base (a few hours past midnight)


A new day has come since the defeat of Death Generals #5 Zeferno and #6 Zedusa (it's now the 4th day since the war was first announced) but it was still night outside before dawn, co-leader Death General #1 Zega woke up his fellow Death Generals and said, "Everyone, time to wake up." Death General #3 Zeil reacted as he awakened, "Heh? Already?" Zega said, "It's time for chaos. Dr. Zulu?" Death General #7 Zulu was already awake and said with a golden capsule ball in hand, "Right here, Zega-sama!" Zeil said with enthusiasm as he got up, "Alright! Dark Zeon, wake up!" Death General #9 Dark Zeon woke up with a grumpy attitude, "Tch! Can't you let me sleep a little bit longer?" Zeil said, "But we're going to have fun. And who knows, maybe we'll run into those guys again." Dark Zeon said as he got up, "Alright, fine." Zeil then tried waking Zophise, "Hey Zophise-kun, wanna' come with us?" Death General #4 Zophise also woke up with a nasty temper, "Shut up! I need my beauty sleep!" Zeil said, "Wow, lighten up! Anyways, I got a mission to do." Zophise said as he went back to sleep, "Screw you! Don't wake me again!" Zeil said, "Wow, you're nastier than Dark Zeon." Dark Zeon complained, "I would like to get some more sleep too." Zega said, "My brother will be tagging along with you guys in the shadows, but I'll stay here watching in the distance." Zeil said, "Alright, see ya' master!" As Death Generals #3 Zeil, #7 Zulu, #9 Dark Zeon were walking outside of their hidden cave in the mountains, before Zophise went back asleep, he said to Zeil, "Zeil, you better come back alive." Zeil stopped and taunted him with a smile, "Ahh, you're worried about me?" Zophise said with embarrassment, "Don't be an idiot." Zeil said as he walked away, "Heh, no need to worry. I won't be as careless as Zeferno, Zedusa, or Zarpi. I'm heading back as soon as I complete my mission if the King and his friends show up."

[Choose a random character theme: #1, #2]
Outside of their base, Death General #7 Dr. Zulu said with his small, golden capsule ball in hand, "Zehehe! It's time to begin, Zetta Faudo, our tenth Death General, my masterpiece." Dr. Zulu opens his capsule ball and summons the mechanical titan Zetta Faudo, the cybernetic-upgraded version of the colossal demon Faudo. As the magitech cyborg Zetta Faudo illuminated itself with its own lights among the night, revealing itself, Zeil whistled and said, "Wheeew! Hehe! Wow, he's huge. My gosh, what a titan! You're such a genius doc!" Dr. Zulu said with a happy, evil smile, "I'm glad that you like it. Isn't he such a beauty?!" Zeil asked Dark Zeon, "What do you think, Dark Zeon?" Dark Zeon was surprisingly happy and said, "Hmm! This feels really nostalgic. Faudo, I once committed chaos in the Human World with him during the Demon Battle." Zeil was surprised and reacted, "Really?! No way? You're not pulling my leg, are you?" Despite being a mind reader, Zeil didn't know this as Dark Zeon has forgotten it until now. Dr. Zulu said while chuckling inside his mouth, "Zehnhn! I figured that the snarky, white boy in Faudo's records was the military commander with your persona. Anyways, it's time to begin! Come inside, everyone! Zehehehe!" Zetta Faudo carried the three by crouching down and carrying them with his giant, mechanical right arm and place them inside the control center inside his head. Then after Zetta Faudo took a few steps, he flew in the air with a jetpack that Dr. Zulu installed on his back. Death General #2 Zecross, who's been outside the base, followed Zetta Faudo to extract any corpses Zetta Faudo creates while staying hidden in the dark shadows.
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Scene: Around Demon World (post-midnight)


[Choose a variation of Sonic the Hedgehog 2's Final Boss as the battle music: #1 (Sonic 2), #2 (Sonic Generations)]
As Zetta Faudo destroyed random villages and towns in Demon World (they haven't struck the capital city of Demon World yet), Zecross has been extracting their corpse for his own purposes. Demons that refused to join the revolution army or resisting the Demon Revolution Army were killed by the giant-robotic titan. Many of King Gash Bell's friends around Demon World who resisted and attempted to fight back to protect their villages were killed. Back at the Bell Family's Palace in the capital city, word got out that a colossal demon is attacking random villages. Commander Zeon was awake at the time and yelled to everyone in the palace with a megaphone, "Everyone! Wake up! Now! This is an emergency!" Everyone in the palace heard it and woke up but adult Demon King Gash Bell was the only one who got up. As he got into the throne room while wiping his eyes, he asked, "What's going on?" Commander Zeon Bell told his brother, "We're under attack. Several villages have been destroyed by some gigantic demon." Adult King Gash reacted, "What?!" Commander Zeon continued, "Wake everyone up, I'll get my troops ready." Adult King Gash said, "I'm on it!," and they both thought while on the move, a gigantic demon? Could it be...?

Scene: A random village in Demon World (post-midnight)


Zetta Faudo kept destroying villages and towns one-by-one and killed anyone that tried resisting and rebelling the Demon Revolution Army. They reached a village where Wonrei and Schneider of this time era were living. Adult Wonrei(age 43) dashed towards it and said, "A giant demon? I hope it's not who I think who it is." He then encountered Schneider (age 32) and said, "Schneider?" Schneider responded, "Meru! Hey... Wonrei!" Schneider eventually learned how to speak in native language but still says "meru" quite often and his voice is deeper but casual. But his vocabulary isn't good and needs some working, but he can now vocally cast spells in addition to using them mentally. Schneider then said, "What... you think... Wonrei-meru?" Adult Wonrei said, "I'm guessing it's Faudo. But he shouldn't have been reactivated." Adult Schneider said, "Meru! Protect... everyone-meru!" As adult Wonrei and adult Schneider got close to Zetta Faudo, Wonrei casted his strongest spell, "Shin Goraiō Diboren!!!," summoning a gargantuan white, spiritual tiger to attack Zetta Faudo while Schneider incanted, "Shin Shudoruku-meru!!!," equipping his strongest spiked armor, which significantly increases his power, defense, and speed, and also gives him the ability to fly. Schneider charged after Zetta Faudo at high speed. From Zetta Faudo's control room in the brain, Dr. Zulu said as he chuckled in his mouth, "Zehunhunhun! These idiots wish to die. Alright Zetta Faudo, let's show these rebels our true power! Zaahehehehe!" Zeil yelled, "Woo hoo! Go number ten! This is so fun to watch! More fun than pranking people, to be honest," while Dark Zeon said with a smile, "This really takes me back in the Human World. Also, it's been a while since I last saw those twerps. But they don't stand a chance against the new-and-improved Faudo."

Scene: Outside the Capital City of Demon World (post-midnight)


Back at the palace, after everyone was awaken, Demon World Military and the main party that are assisting them headed out (even both Koruru joined them this time). Ninja Apprentice Pancho said, "Darn, and I didn't enough sleep," while Demon Prince Raiden Bell asked, "Dad, do you know who's attacking us?" Adult King Gash Bell said, "We suspect it's Faudo, but he's supposed to be in eternal sleep." The humans and demons of the past were shocked and reacted, "Faudo?" Kiyomaro Takamine stated, "If it's him, that's not good." Young Kyanchome said in fear, "Please don't let it be him."" Li Yen said, "Wait, what's that in the distance?" A silhouette of a gargantuan demon was right in front of them in the deep darkness of the night. Kafka Sunbeam reacted, "Is that...?," while Li Yen reacted, "It couldn't be...?" Megumi Ōumi had a camera in hand and said, "Hold on, I'll turn night vision on my video camera." Kiyomaro asked Megumi, "You're still recording these battles?" Megumi has been recording everything in Demon World for memories. She reacted in fear while everyone was still heading towards it, "It... It's him. Faudo!" Zetta Faudo then revealed itself by flashing its lights on its cybernetic body and Zetta Faudo still appears to be in good condition with barely any scratches. Parco Folgore reacted in fear and worrisome, "Oh-a no! We're-a doomed!" Did Wonrei and Schneider of this timeline fail, and what happened to them? 

From the control center of Faudo's brain, Death General #7 Dr. Zulu created a hologram above Zetta Faudo's head showing a live video of the control room, "Ze~~~hehehe! Hello Demon King and the military. Death General #7, Dr. Zulu here! Demon world's greatest scientist with an IQ of 400! And that's right, it's Faudo... or what was Faudo. I gave Faudo a nice cybernetic operation with my new enhancements, thus dubbing him Zetta Faudo! Zehehe! Although, while he's not actually sextillion times stronger, I still gave him decent upgrades and wanted to add a 'Z' to the name in the convenience to the other Death Generals' names. What do you think about our gorgeous tenth Death General of the Demon Revolution Army? Ze~~~hehehe!" Adult Demon King Gash Bell and some of the others said, "I knew it," and Commander Zeon said, "So Faudo was the unknown tenth Death General. Darn it, I should have known." As Dr. Zulu got away from the holographic video feed, Death General #9 Dark Zeon came up and said, "Yo, other me, think you can topple the new Faudo? Hahaha! And I see that you brought your little friends, perfect!" Death General #3 Zeil made a small laugh, "Heh!" Commander Zeon said, "So you two are here too, Dark Zeon... and Zeil." Kiyomaro yelled, "We stopped Faudo once, we'll stop him again." Prince Raiden and Pancho reacted in surprise, "You fought against a giant like this?!" Commander Zeon said, "We'll destroy Faudo and take you all out." Raiden Bell got back into a normal expression and yelled, "That's right! No way is this hunk of junk is going to stop us!" #7 Dr. Zulu reacted in shock and anger, "A hunk of junk?! Why you? Zetta Faudo, attack! Activate your Ten-Finger Gun+ [十指砲＋, Jisshihō Purasu]! Burn them!"

Zetta Faudo put its hands out and used its enhanced Ten-Finger Gun, which Dr. Zulu calls Ten-Finger Gun+, and shot ten, powerful crimson lasers at the group and the military from each of his fingers. These lasers are a bit larger and stronger than when he was just Faudo as his demonic magical powers were converted into magitech powers. Some of the military units were injured but everyone casted their defensive and shield spells to protect themselves or dodged out of the way. From Zetta Faudo's command center, Dark Zeon said, "Oi! Don't you dare kill my targets before I get my new recruits or I'll kill you!" Dr. Zulu apologized with a bow and hands to the forehead, "S-s-sorry!" The lasers damaged some military units and broke through some shield spells but Tioga used her Teo Rifureshirudo spell to create multiple mirror shields to block and reflect the lasers back at Zetta Faudo, damaging him a bit with his own attack, before her mirrors were destroyed. The three villainous Death Generals in Zetta Faudo's command centered reacted, "Whoa!" Pancho yelled out in satisfaction, "Way to go, little sis." Tioga giggled and Prince Raiden, "Alright, now it's our turn! And I'm going all out! Ginisu Zaruku! Rai'oh Zakeruga!" Prince Raiden summoned a glowing, golden aura around him to temporarily enhance and stabilize his electrical spells. He then summoned a gigantic, winged dragon of golden electricity enhanced by Ginisu Zaruku to attack Zetta Faudo. From Zetta Faudo's control center, Dr. Zulu said, "Zehehe! That won't work. Zetta Faudo, activate your new Force Field [力場, Rikiba] ability!" Zetta Faudo summoned a giant, green-energy barrier around him and it was tough enough to block Raiden's enhanced Rai'oh Zakeruga. Raiden was shocked, "What?! No way!," while Dark Zeon in the command center reacted, "Why didn't you activate that sooner?," while Dr. Zulu replied, "It takes time for it for it to recharge and I didn't want to use it at the wrong time."

Kiyomaro said as he activated his Answer Talker psychic ability, "If it was just regular Faudo, we could go all out with everyone's strongest spells to destroy it, but this modified version might be too durable and that Force Field is a problem. He appears to be controlled by the antenna on its head but it's risky to destroy it as Faudo might go berserk so going offensive on him might be too risky. But we can always invade his body and climb up to his brain." Raiden and Pancho reacted in disgust, "Wait, what?" Commander Zeon said, "I was thinking the same thing. Maybe there's something new in his brain that we can do." Dr. Zulu said, "Zehehe! I don't think so. Zetta Faudo, blast them with your Main Gun+ [主砲＋, Shuhō Purasu]!" Zetta Faudo opens its mouth and fires a powerful energy blast towards them. Again, everyone casted their shield spells but this time with their shields next to each other to block Zetta Faudo's signature attack. Surprisingly among the main group on the battlefield, young Koruru's berserk mode hasn't taken over yet but the beast within her is tempted to cast Zeruku but Koruru managing to keep her sanity as much as she can despite all the violence but she cannot use any of her offensive spells without transforming. Dark Zeon said, "Zulu! Hold off your attack until I get my recruits!" Dr. Zulu apologized, "R-right! Sorry!" Dark Zeon said, "Zeil, warp me to the battleground." Zeil said as he touched Dark Zeon shoulder, "Got it!," and teleported outside of Zetta Faudo.
[/End of random battle music]

Scene: Clan of Cat Demons on the Outskirts of the Capital City (post-midnight)


Among Prince Raiden's and Pancho's friend Nekolas' clan, Nekolas woke up from his bed due to all of the war sound effects outside and said, "Whoa! What's going on?" He looks outs out his windows while wiping his eyes and reacted as he saw a ginormous demon, "Whoa! What the heck is that thing? Haria-chan, wake up!" Their ice rabbit friend Haria stayed the night at Nekolas' home and was sleeping on Nekolas' bedroom floor. Haria was mumbling in her sleep, "Oh, ho, Raiden-kun, of course, I will..." Nekolas was jealous and thought to himself, oh come on, Haria-chan. You're my girlfriend, and tried waking her up again, "Hey, Haria-chan!" Haria woke up and said, "Neko-kun? What time is it?" Nekolas said while looking out his bedroom window, "There is big trouble outside." Haria got up and looked outside and reacted, "Huh?!," as she saw the cybernetic titan, "What's... what's that?!" Nekolas said, "It could be the revolution army again. The military is fighting it and I think Raiden-ōji and Pancho-kun are out there. Darn it, let's go, Haria-chan!" Haria said, "Heh? But wouldn't your father—" Nekolas interrupted while holding Haria's arm and running out of his room with her, "Screw my dad and his stupid training. Our friends could be out there."

As soon and Nekolas and Haria got outside of Nekolas' clan, a large flame appeared in front of them to stop them. It was once again Nekolas' father Leo the Red Lion, stopping his son and his proclaimed future daughter-in-law. Leo yelled in an angry voice, "You think you could sneak out at night, assuming I was asleep?" Nekolas yelled, "Out of my way dad, my friends may be in trouble." Leo yelled, "I told you, you are not going out to war until you can surpass me. Now, get back into bed or I'll force you back to sleep." Nekolas was angry with his father but knew that his dad was worried about him, "Darn! But I'm part military too." Leo said in an angry voice, "You are still a knight-in-training. I will not let my only son and his future bride die in vain! Unless if you can beat me before the end of our training, I suggest you head back to room or I'll beat you until you sleep." Nekolas was annoyed by his dad but didn't fight back as he knows he can't win, "Darn! I hate this whole week of training!" Haria said, "Come on Neko-kun. I'm sure Raiden-kun will be alright."

Scene: Main battleground outside the Capital City of Demon World (post-midnight)


[Insert random battle music]
Back at the battle, after an explosion of blocking Zetta Faudo's powerful attack, Zeil and Dark Zeon appeared in front of them, appearing in the light below Zetta Faudo and Zeil said, "Howdy!," while Dark Zeon said, "We meed again, my goody counterpart. And of course, the King himself." Commander Zeon yelled, "Zeil! Dark Zeon! So, you decided to come to us yourselves." Dark Zeon said, "As much as I want to kill you and the King, I'm only here for one thing. Zeil, you have done your training, right?!" Zeil smirked and said, "Yup! I have improved my telekinetic skills in these few days. Ha!" Zeil targeted his arms at young Prince Zeon Bell and young Koruru and telekinetically lifted young Zeon and young Koruru slightly in the air. Young Koruru reacted, "My body. I can't move," while young Zeon said, "Hey, what did you—?" The group was surprised and worried, reacting, "Zeon! Koruru!," while Prince Rain Bell was scared, holding his girlfriend Tioga. Raiden yelled, "Hey, what are you doing to—" Commander Zeon interrupted, blocking Raiden with his right arm, "Wait." Zeil said as he attempted to extract their darker alter egos from their hearts from a distance, "Hahaha! Now they're both ours!" Darkness energy came out of their bodies (at this point, young Koruru no longer has her berserk mode and will be able to cast offensive spells without transforming into a frenzied state). Raiden said, "What are those?" Both Commander Zeon and Dark Zeon said simultaneously, "Perfect..." Raiden wondered, "Uncle?" Zeil formed the two spheres of dark spirit energy into young Dark Zeon and young Dark Koruru, then dropped their original counterparts back on the ground as they reacted, "Umph!" The main group were surprised and reacted, "What?!" Wonrei reacted, "Did he...," while Kiyomaro continued, "... cloned them?" Princess Koruru asked her younger self, "Are you okay?" Young Koruru wondered, "What happened?"

Back on the upper spot, Commander Zeon said, "I figured you would have cloned them. You just did me a favor. Now bring out the other Dark Koruru and we'll destroy them altogether." Dark Zeon said, "Heh, I see." Raiden wondered, "What?" Young Koruru wondered as she saw her darker self in the distance under Zetta Faudo's glowing body, "Is that...?" While Commander Zeon was explaining one of his strategies from the council meeting, Princess Koruru explained the same thing to her younger self in different words, "You are finally free from that curse." Young Koruru said, "You mean..." Zeil then created a sphere of dark energy in his hand, carrying the dark essence of the older Koruru and turned it into Princess Koruru's berserk mode. As both Dark Koruru roared with bloodlust, Zeil said, "Alright, my job is done." Adult Dark Zeon said, "You can head back to the base, we'll take care of them." Zeil responded, "Roger!," and teleported away from the battlefield. Adult Dark Zeon said, "Are you ready to get revenge, little buddy?" Young Dark Zeon said, "I'll be happy to kill my brother and take over as King." Adult Dark Zeon said, "My thoughts exactly. You two, Dark Koruru, you may have fun with the knights and ninjas." Both Dark Koruru laughed maniacally and said, "Hehehehe! Zeruku!," They created sharp, steel claws from their fingers and both Dark Koruru charged after Demon World Military with adult Dark Koruru going after the knights while young Dark Koruru went after the ninjas at high speed, shredding them with their steel claws while hiding in the darkness of the night.

While Dark Koruru's younger counterpart was attacking the Ninja Division with her steel claws via Zeruku, Ninja Vice Captain Byonko said, "Everyone, be careful-gero!" But despite the warning, young Dark Koruru was shredding the Ninjas Infantries with her steel claws while hiding in the shadows of the night. Ninja Captain Kyanchome ordered, "Everyone stay back, I'll deal with this fake! Shin Poruku!" Captain Kyanchome created a small area of complete darkness except for himself and completely disabled young Dark Koruru's senses. Young Dark Koruru wondered, "Ehh?!," but was slashed by Captain Kyanchome's real katana. As the cloud of darkness disappeared from the area, young Dark Koruru's torso fell off from her legs and young Dark Koruru's entire body disappeared in a poof of black smoke. The ninjas cheered for their captain's instant victory.

Meanwhile, among the knights, Knight Infantry Hyde said while guarding with his two swords, "Darn, I can't see her," while Knight Infantry Reycom incanted, "Gisorudo!," creating a sword of ice, putting his guard up. Among the darkness, the older Dark Koruru incanted, "Zerarusen!," firing multiple steel claws from her fingers like a machine gun at the knights. The knights defended against the flurry of flying claws but some were injured. While Knight Reycom was striking the flying claws with his ice sword, he got a cut from a claw on the side of his neck and reacted, "Ehh!" Knight Hyde said while blocking the flying claws with his dual wind-themed swords, "You okay, Reycom?" Knight Reycom responded, "I'll be fine. Let's try to destroy Her Highness' evil copy." After the barrage of claws ended, adult Dark Koruru charged after Knight Reycom with her Zeruku still active. Knight Hyde yelled, "Reycom!," while Knight Reycom put his guard up with his ice sword. Then suddenly, "Zeruku!" Princess Koruru Bell interrupted the fight and blocked Dark Koruru's steel claws with claws of her own and this time, due to her berserk mode being separated, Princess Koruru was completely sane while casting her first spell. Knight Reycom and the other knights reacted, "Your Highness!" Princess Koruru ordered, "Everyone, fall back. I'll handle my dark side. I don't want to hurt anyone else." Aside from at a distance, the Bell family reacted, "Koruru(-obasan)," and adult Dark Zeon said to his counterpart, "Hey, what do you think you're looking at? Your fighting with me! Zakeru!," and shot a bolt of dark-purple lightning at his counterpart from his right hand. Both adult Zeon engaged battle. As Princess Koruru and her dark side were dueling with their claws locked in place against each other, her dark side with an evil smirk, "Heh! What do you think you can do against me? You're weak!" Princess Koruru replied while still at a lock, "I won't let you... hurt anyone... anymore." Adult Dark Koruru stated, "Then you'll die along with everyone else!"

Young Prince Zeon entered the battle with Commander Zeon and both Dark Zeon. After a few electrical spells were conjured, adult Dark Zeon noticed young Dark Koruru was already gone and said, "Heh! She didn't last long," and yelled to Dr. Zulu above, "Oi, Zulu, don't just stand there! Attack with Zetta Faudo!" Dr. Zulu didn't realize and responded, "Oh, sorry! Zetta Faudo, shock them with your Lightning Spikes [雷針, Raishin]!" Zetta Faudo generated electricity on the new spikes on his shoulders and shot bolts of yellow lightning at the military and at the main group but Head Nurse Tio the protected the group with Seushiru. Dr. Zulu then commanded, "Fire your Hole Gun+ [穴砲＋, Anahō Purasu]! Destroy them!" Zetta Faudo created energy balls in the holes of his limbs and released it as large laser beams going through the front and back of him, targeting the military units and the main group but they casted their defensive and shield spells. Along with Head Nurse Tio's Seushiru, her younger self also casted Seushiru to create a second layer to protect them. After putting down the barrier after the attack, Demon Queen Patie Bell said, "It's time I should do something. I'll hold down Faudo. Rioru Suō Gaikuru!" Queen Patie Bell summoned two water dragons in and targeted Zetta Faudo. Dr. Zulu said, "Crud, the Force Field is still recharging! Zetta Faudo, attack those water dragons with your Rocket Punch!" Zetta Faudo made two fists and released his hands to attack the water dragons but the dragons evaded it and constricted Zetta Faudo. Queen Patie then incanted, "Shin Suō Giakuru!" and summoned an even bigger water dragon, binding Zetta Faudo even further. But there's more! Queen Patie then said, "I'm not done yet! As the Queen of Demon World and a member of the Bell family of lightning, I'll give all of my power. Suō Giakuru Zaruku!" The water dragons started generating golden electricity around their body, which disabled Zetta Faudo's movement. It seems that Patie also learned some electric spells. Inside Zetta Faudo's head, electricity was discharging from electronics and Dr. Zulu reacted, "Zaaahh!! Zetta Faudo short-circuited!," and he is trying to fix it. From the ground, Raiden yelled, "Way to go, mom!," while young Patie was awe-stricken with her older self's amazing abilities and so was young King Gash Bell, but the young King was also still worried about his dream. Everyone else was impressed too; Schneider clapped while saying, "Meru, meru!," and young Byonko yelled in excitement, "That's our queen-geroro!"

Adult Dark Zeon thought to himself while battling against his good counterpart and his counterpart's younger self, darn it. For Faudo to be immobilized? We'll have to deal with the queen first, then quietly said to his younger self, "Hey, distract them for me. I'll deal with this one other pest." Young Dark Zeon said, "Got it." Commander Zeon said, "Now that Faudo is bound, we should be able to get inside him," but young Dark Zeon said, "I won't let you get inside Faudo. Face the Dark Lightning God of Destruction. Jigadirasu Uru Zakeruga!" Young Dark Zeon summoned a large, black-winged entity and shot powerful, dark-purple lightning beams everywhere except at the main group. Commander Zeon said, "Watch out, everyone!" The group dodged the powerful, black thunderbolts but Raiden was absorbing ones heading his way to restore his energy with Raiden stating, "Heh! These attacks are nothing," but he and the others lost focus on adult Dark Zeon. Being unnoticed, adult Dark Zeon stayed hidden in the darkness of the night, avoiding light, as well as suppressing his demon energy to prevent from being detected from sensory-type demons such as Prince Rain and Ninja Apprentice Pancho. Around at this time, Dark Koruru was already winning the fight against Princess Koruru Bell. The demon princess' dress was all torn and she was bleeding greatly and was breathing heavily. The knights were worried about the princess. Dark Zeon said to Dark Koruru telepathically, I forgot that we dark clones can speak telepathically. Dark Koruru, finish off your counterpart already. We got a new target to deal with. Dark Koruru understood what Dark Zeon was going for, responding back telepathically, got it!, and casted her final spell, "Jio Ra Zerudo!," thrusting her claws into the ground and creating large spikes from the ground, stabbing the princess a little bit but intending to knock her back. Princess Koruru reacted "Argh!," as the knights reacted, "Your Highness!," while young Koruru was worried about her older self. Dark Koruru then hid in the darkness, circumventing the knights as they wondered, "Where'd she go?"

Adult Dark Koruru aimed at the Demon Queen, who was focused on restraining Zetta Faudo and dodging the wild black thunderbolts, got herself in a vulnerable spot and is currently unprotected by anyone. Prince Rain and Pancho detected Dark Koruru and Pancho yelled, "Her Royal Majesty!," while Prince Rain was shaking in fear while holding his girlfriend Tioga, trying to call his mother, "M-M-M-Mom!!!" But it was too late and no one else noticed. Dark Koruru rushed in-front of the vulnerable Demon Queen at super speed with an evil smile, jumped on her while keeping the queen standing up, and slashed the Demon Queen's face with her long, steel claws via Zeruku, and attached to the queen by impaling her steel claws into the queen's back. Queen Patie screamed in pain, "AAAAHHH!!!," and everyone reacted, "Patie!/Mom!/Her (Royal) Majesty/Her Excellency!" As the injured Demon Queen took a few steps while losing control of her water dragons (they lost their electric aura and Zetta Faudo is now struggling to break free), a black demon with an evil smile appeared behind her, grabbed the queen from behind with Dark Koruru still gripping the queen with her metal claws, placed his right hand on the queen's back and conjured, "Zakeruga!" A black lightning beam pierced through Queen Patie's chest as the dark light revealed adult Dark Zeon's diabolical face as he grins an evil smile. The injured Princess Koruru got back up, covered in blood, and seen her co-sister-in-law being clawed by her dark counterpart and blasted by Dark Zeon. Princess Koruru was feeling anguished. As Dark Zeon's dark Zakeruga penetrated through Queen Patie's chest, the heart garment on Queen Patie's dress, as well as her heart necklace, were destroyed. Dark Zeon's black Zakeruga even pierced through Dark Koruru and Dark Koruru disappeared in a cloud of black smoke. At this point, the queen's water dragons were growing very weak as Zetta Faudo was easily shaking them off.

Adult Demon King Gash reacted by running towards, crying out, "Patie!!!" With blood coming down her chest and mouth, the bleeding queen replied, "G-G-Gash..." Young King Gash was scared and said while holding young Patie while crying in fear, "T-t-this... was... in my nightmare. Heh, heh! Ehhhh!" Young Patie was scared but held her boyfriend. As adult King Gash ran for her, Dark Zeon, still holding the queen, thought to himself, perfect. With his wife dead, the King is vulnerable, and said, "Brother, your reign of Demon King is over. I will become the new King! Hahaha! Zake—" Just as Dark Zeon put his hand over the injured queen's shoulder and targeted the King, planning to strike him with a Zakeruga with dark-purple electricity charged in the palm of his right hand, Commander Zeon charged in and yelled in anger, "How dare you do that to the queen!," while pushing Dark Zeon off of the queen. Dark Zeon was annoyed and said, "Why you?!," then said with an evil smile, "Heh! You would have done the same thing if you haven't changed." He then changed to an angry expression and said, "But I will kill you for meddling into my affairs. I almost had the King. I was almost King!," while Commander Zeon yelled in anger, "I won't let you kill my brother and take his throne!" Both engaged in melee combat. Meanwhile, young Prince Zeon and his dark counterpart are brawling out too.
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[Insert random sad music]
As the deeply-wounded queen started to fall on the ground after being released from Dark Zeon, adult King Gash Bell grabs her dying wife in the midst of the night and said, crying in agony, "Patie-chan, what..." He placed his hand on Patie's open wound on her chest, got her blood on him and said, crying in agony, "No! You can't die! Tio, someone, help!" Head Nurse Tio said while standing for a second before running towards them, "I'm... I'm on my way." As she came by, she reacted as she saw a big hole in Queen Patie's chest, "Oh... oh, my! I... I'll try my best... but half of.... her heart... And her spine's gone..." The queen's breast was nearly revealed but her cleavage was destroyed and can be seen through behind her; half of the queen's heart was destroyed and the middle of her spine was destroyed, disabling and paralyzing the queen completely except for her mouth. Her heart was unable to beep but she was barely able to keep herself alive due to her willpower, but Nurse Tio is going to try to heal her with her Healing Touch medic ability. Would it be enough? Queen Patie said, "It... it's... too late..." Prince Raiden stood still in agony, saying, "Mom...," but Prince Rain ran towards her dying mother, crying out, "Mommy!" The dying queen said, "Gash... Rain-chan..." Young King Gash and young Patie came to them, crying in grief too and young King Gash wondered, crying, "Why... did my nightmare... came true?" Adult King Gash said, crying in despair, "You... dreamt... about this? Why didn't you tell me sooner? No! I don't want to lose Patie! Ehh-hehehe! Patie, you meant so much to me. You gave me love when I needed it... and you helped me support this world... I don't want to lose you like I lost my parents! Eh-heheheh..." The main group was crying for her and Megumi was having trouble keeping her video camera steady and forgot she had it on, as it was recording the queen's death. As Prince Rain was crying for his dying mother, her mother said (while still trying to healed by Tio) in her last will, "D-don't cry... Rain-chan... Gash-chan... I'll... always... love you... and Raiden..... And... I'll... always... be in your hearts..... Please... save this world... " Adult King Gash said, "Oh, Patie..." and gave her a kiss on her lips that are covered in blood as Queen Patie tried kissing back, but she was already losing consciousness as her will reached its limit, shutting down her brain and dead heart. Nurse Tio failed to heal her and cried out, "Nooo!," and Queen Patie's body disappeared into spiritual particles with those spiritual particles traveling towards a mysterious, cloaked demon from the mountains as he gave a smile. Death General #2 Zecross extracted the Demon Queen's corpse. Adult King Gash tried reaching for Queen Patie's soul in the air but it flew away with her orange-colored Demon Crown falling to the ground. He yelled, crying in grief, "Patie!!!!," as everyone—including the main party, the knights, and the ninjas were crying, mourning to their beloved, deceased queen. Princess Koruru cried in grief and guilt, "This... this was my fault! Heh... I killed our beloved queen... Eheheheh...," while the knight were worried about her too, "Your Highness!" Among the ninjas, Ninja Vice Captain Byonko also cried in grief and said, "Patie-sama... Noooo-gero! I failed to protect you-gero. I promise I'll avenge you-gero... and our parents-gero..."

Queen Patie Bell's water dragons disappeared and Zetta Faudo was free with Dr. Zulu cheering, "Zehehehe! Yes! We finally killed the queen! Ugh, don't fret Demon King. Zehehehe! Speaking of killing one of your friends, she isn't the only one we killed. Behold!" Dr. Zulu displayed a holographic vision above Zetta Faudo's head showing the adult versions of Wonrei and Schneider being killed by Zetta Faudo. Young Wonrei wondered, "Are those... older versions of me and Schneider," while young Schneider said in sadness, "Meru..." Dr. Zulu said, "And I see you brought their younger versions from the past. I'll have to kill them too! Zehehehe!" Everyone cried in grief even further, especially Li Yen and Kafka Sunbeam, seeing their former demon partners' future selves dead. Li Yen reacted in grief and sorrow, "Noooo!!," and held young Wonrei while Kakfa Sunbeam shouted in sadness and anger, "That was not cool, you... monster!" King Gash's sorrow became even deeper and yelled with tears flying out of his face, "Noooo! Wonrei! Schneider! Not you too!"
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Among the main party, Prince Raiden went from crying in grief to crying in anger and hatred. He made an angry, shaken fist, and said, "That blasted Dark Zeon... and Dark Koruru... and this sadistic scientist." As anger went through his eyes and squeezes his right fist, making his palm to bleed, Raiden said in agony, "I swear... I'll avenge you, mother... and father's friends. I'll kill Dark Zeon... kill that demon sorcerer... and destroy this titan along with that mad scientist! I swear! Zaruku! Ginisu Zaruku!" Raiden summoned a raging, electrical aura, discharging his body as his body glowed. He then releases all of his anger, "AAAAAAAARGH!!!," and his angry eyes became draconic for a second. A thunderous roar was sent into his mind and Raiden wondered, what... what's this? I can hear the anger of Rai'oh? A new spell? This better let me get my revenge!, then yelled greatly in the air, "Rai'oh... Zaruku!!!" Both Zaruku and Ginisu Zaruku ended as the electricity was infusing with Raiden's body. Raiden's body started transforming. His teeth became sharper. His finger nails were turning into claws. The Rai'oh logo on his shirt glowed as his clothes were fusing with his body and Raiden was receiving dragon scales. He grew massive in size and even grew dragon wings and a tail and his face morphed into a beast. Raiden transformed into the beast within him, Rai'oh the Thunder King (雷王, Raiō), King of the Thunder Dragons.

The newly transformed Raiden roared thunderously in the air and everyone was surprised and worried with Raiden's younger brother Rain also crying in fear. Gash turned his head around with tears still coming down his eyes, holding his deceased wife's dress, and said in worrisome, "Raiden...? Rai'oh...?" Dr. Zulu from Zetta Faudo's command center, wondered, "What's going on? Who this brat... monster?" Raiden said in a deep, dark voice, "Za-uruku!," and his dragon body de-materialized into electricity and traveled towards adult Dark Zeon, re-materialized and caught him in his dragon mouth. Adult Dark Zeon and Commander Zeon reacted, "What?!," while pushing against Raiden's dragon teeth. He then flew towards young Dark Zeon at high speed while young Dark Zeon was battling against his counterpart and captured young Dark Zeon into his mouth too. Young Prince Zeon reacted as he blocked his eyes from the wind of Raiden's speed, "What's going on?" The transformed Raiden bought them in the air and said in a deep voice, "You killed my mother! Dark Zeon, your dead! Gigano Zakeruga!" As Raiden has both Dark Zeon trapped into his mouth, Raiden shot a gigantic beam of electricity from his mouth and as both Dark Zeon reacted, "Aaaaargh!," as they evaporated into black smoke. Then Raiden aimed his dragon eyes at Zetta Faudo. Dr. Zulu reacted, "Eek! What is this monster? Zetta Faudo, destroy him!" As Zetta Faudo was charging his Main Gun+ from his mouth, the transformed Raiden said in a graveling voice, "I'll destroy you too! Zaruku! Ginisu Zaruku!" The transformed Raiden created an aura of gold, shining electricity to increase his power significantly and yelled, "Rai'oh Zakeruga!" Rai'oh Zaruku Raiden turned himself into shining, golden electricity and dashed towards Zetta Faudo's head at super speed. Dr. Zulu reacted, crying in fear, "Zaaahahaha!!!" Zetta Faudo couldn't activate his Force Field while using a different attack and Zetta Faudo's head was destroyed when Raiden dashed through it with his shining-electrical, dragon body. Dr. Zulu fell out of Zetta Faudo's head, screaming as he has launched away from the battlefield, "Aaaargh!," and landed painfully on the ground. But Dr. Zulu miraculously survived, but at a brink of death. His Zulu Bots followed him and carried Dr. Zulu to one of his secret laboratories for recovery and repairs for his damaged cybernetic parts. Zetta Faudo then fell apart into pieces, dead.
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From the mountains, co-leader Death General #2 Zecross said with a bit of dissatisfaction, "Heh! What a waste! At least I collected something of value. Too bad I can't take something... artificial..." He then left to his secret base to give the results to his elder twin brother Zega (Zeil was already back at the base). He can't extract the corpses of artificial demons like Faudo or Zeil's dark clones and he didn't bother putting Dr. Zulu out of his misery and take his remains. Among Nekolas' clan, as Nekolas and Haria watched the battle from his bedroom, Nekolas reacted, "What the heck just happened out there! A dragon just destroyed that giant." Haria wondered, "Was that Raiden-kun?" Nekolas said, "I hope not! Darn it! I'm slacking off on my training and Raiden-ōji is already this powerful?! No way! That can't be him." The battle was too far away for them to clearly see their friends.

Back at the battlefield, Raiden flew back towards the ground and dropped slowly, reverting back to his humanoid self. Everyone was shocked that Demon Prince Raiden was able to take down both Dark Zeon and Zetta Faudo at once and Pancho said in wide-eyed and jaw-dropped, but no longer crying in sadness, "I... I guess we don't need to enter the giant after all... Wow... that was... so overpowered," and thought to himself, since when could Raiden do that? I don't think I should mess with him anymore. That's the scariest I seen of him... and that was scarier than our moms. But his mom... Poor Raiden and Rain. Those bad guys did deserve it though. Commander Zeon reacted, "Raiden... That power..." As Raiden approached the main group with dried tears and a mean-looking face but looking down to the ground, his brother was scared with sadness and fear in his eyes. Everyone was speechless and were worried other than being sad about Queen Patie's death. As Prince Raiden approached his brother, Rain closed his eyes—shaking in fear—as Raiden petted his head and Raiden said, "Did I scare you, little buddy? I'm sorry." Rain stopped shaking and looked back up and Raiden said as he started crying in guilt, "I'm sorry. I was too weak. I could have protected our mother... and yet... I stood still... doing nothing." Raiden was crying that he couldn't protect his mother and said, "I promise... I'll... always protect you... I'll make sure I will always protect you. You mean a lot to me and the rest of us. I'm sorry for the way I acted. I wanted... to avenge mother... as well as... our parents' friends." Then, from out of nowhere, Raiden's emotions immediately went from guilt to excitement and said, "But I was cool, right? I finally became a dragon! Woohoo! I always wanted to be a dragon!" Everyone else dropped in surprise from Raiden's change in emotion, forgetting their emotion about Queen Patie's death, except for adult King Gash—who was still holding Queen Patie's ruined dress—and the young king and his girlfriend. The young king was still traumatized about his nightmare being real and doesn't want to lose his beloved Patie. Raiden quickly changing his emotions again back into guilt and sadness and everyone wonders about Raiden's quick change in emotions (he got that from his mother), and Raiden said to his father, "Dad... I'm sorry about mom. As much as she yelled at me when I get in trouble, hehe, she was a great mom to us, and I loved her so much. I'm sure she'll be in our hearts, watching us from above, wherever she may be." Adult King Gash was surprised and remembered his wife saying that a minute ago and Raiden continued, "And I'm sorry about your friends, but don't cry, dad. You still have us; we're family. And don't forget your younger selves; we still need to protect them; let them live a good life when this war is over."

Adult King Gash said, "You're right. But it's really painful losing loved ones. My heart... it really hurts... It's aching so badly. I never felt being this traumatized." He then said to his younger self and young Patie, "But, I'll make sure... I'll protect you two... and everyone else. Don't worry, younger me... I promise that you won't lose Patie or your friends as I did. I'll make sure you won't go through that experience. I'll protect you all... no matter what." Young King Gash said while crying and holding his girlfriend Patie, "Unu..." Young Patie said, "Don't worry Gash-chan, I'm always here for you. But I wonder... what is death like?" Adult King Gash said, "Some say that there is another world out there; a world where the deceased ones could live happily. That's what I want to believe. If the afterlife really exists... I hope our parents and friends... are doing alright." Kiyomaro said, wiping his tears, "And I'm sure Patie-san is watching over you. You had it rough, really rough. But I'm here for you too. We are a family; you were a brother to me." Adult Gash said, "Unu. Your right. Thank you... Kiyomaro." Commander Zeon and Princess Koruru came up and the injured Princess Koruru said, "I'm sorry, Gash-sama... for what my wicked side did to your wife." Head Nurse Tio just realized her injuries and said, "Oh, Koruru-sama! Let me heal you," and used her Healing Touch medic ability to heal Princess Koruru's scratches and Princess Koruru said, "Thank you, Tio," while Commander Zeon said to her, "I'm glad your okay, Koruru." He then apologized to his brother, "Gash-sama, I apologize too. If only if I wasn't a fool back then, the Queen would have been living... and perhaps our friends wouldn't have died in vain. We'll accept any punishment you give us." Adult King Gash said, "It's okay, I won't blame you both," while Prince Raiden said, "I won't blame you guys either. It's that sorcerer Zeil fault. He was the one that created those fakes and I promise dad, we'll get that guy and avenge mother and your buddies." Adult King Gash said, "Revenge is wrong. It will bring you down to a path you wouldn't want to go." Raiden said, not giving an actual response, "Hmm...," then said, "Anyways, let's go home. You need a rest." Megumi said while turning off her camera, "We all do." Commander Zeon said, "And prepare what the revolution army will do next."

Scene: Royal Bell Family Palace (before dawn)


[Insert random romance music or sad music]
The main party went back to the Demon King's Palace but the Knight and Ninja Divisions of Demon World Military went home for the night with the exception of the injured knights and ninjas, who are under the care of the Medic Division for the rest of the night. The main party hasn't gone back to sleep yet, but are in a living room inside the palace, thinking about the former queen's death even though they were tired. They made some graves outside of the palace featuring the King's and Military Commander's deceased ex-sovereign parents, former Queen Patie Bell, Wonrei, and Schneider (Umagon) of this time era. The King was mourning over their graves and inside the palace, Commander Zeon said to his wife, "Koruru, we need to have a talk." Princess Koruru wondered, "What is it, darling?" Commander Zeon said, "I think we should get a divorce." The others were shocked and Princess Koruru reacted, "A divorce, but why?" Commander Zeon stated, "You helped my brother to become the Demon King he desired, which was the second reason why I brought to our family. We cannot have my brother grieving in despair all the time after all that we lost. You need to take Patie-sama's place as Queen of Demon World. That's the third reason why I kept you with us; in case if something were to happen to Patie-sama." Princess Koruru stated, "You want me to divorce you... and marry Gash-sama? Well umm... I don't know if Patie-sama would allow this." Young Patie stated in a harsh tone, "I would never let any girl have my Gash-sama!," but then said in a gentle voice, "But I don't want to see Gash-chan sad all the time. I want Gash-chan to stay happy. Older Gash needs someone to love him and I'm sure my older self would be fine if you took over her place. If I'm not here, then I would want someone to take care of Gash-chan for me." Princess Koruru said, "Really? Thank you, Patie-chan. But Zeno-anata, are you sure this is alright?" Commander Zeon said, "This is for the best. I'm sorry that I haven't been a good husband. Anyways, I preferred staying solo, no offense." Princess said in disappointment, "Now he tells me." Young Koruru asked, "So, I'm going to be a queen now?" Before her older self could answer, young Patie quickly interrupted, taking it the wrong way, "No! As long as I'm still alive, no one gets my Gash-sama!," and hugs the young King tightly and young King Gash had a hard time breathing, reacting, "Patie-chan, your too tight again!" Princess Koruru said, "She means me." Patie realized and said, "Oh, oops. That's okay."

Adult King Gash came back in and Kiyomaro said, "Are you feeling okay Gash?" Adult King Gash responded, "Not really." Commander Zeon said, "Gash-sama. We need to talk." Adult King Gash wondered while still depressed, "What?" After the explanation, the elder King Gash said, "Really? You'll do that for me? But wouldn't Patie get mad me? I feel like I would cheat on her." Young Patie stated, "While I normally wouldn't let any girl be my beloved Gash-sama, I'm sure my older self wouldn't mind. I want you to stay happy and be loved, especially after losing so many friends and family." Commander Zeon said, "Just take my wife to bed with you. I need you to control your emotions and focus on the remaining of the war. I'll make arrangements for our divorce and your new marriage later. Get a long rest. You'll really need it." Adult King Gash said, "Umm... thanks, brother," while Princess Koruru said, "Are you really okay with this Zeon? I feel like would be cheating on—" Commander Zeon interrupted, "It's fine..." Prince Raiden stated, "So, does that mean Koruru-obasan will be our new mother now? That's a bit—" Princess Koruru said, "Will you boys be okay if I, as your aunt, will be your stepmother?" Raiden wasn't sure and said, "I guess, but it would feel awkward calling our aunt 'Mom'," then wondered, "What do you think Rain?" Prince Rain said, "I miss Mom... but... I might be okay with Koruru-obasan being our mom." Tioga said, "And I'm here for you Rain-kun." Prince Rain replied, "Uru..." The Demon World sun was about to rise but everyone went back to bed.

Scenes: Demon Princes' Bedrooms (dawn)


All the humans and teen demons stayed in Raiden's bedroom but they all went to sleep immediately (Pancho stayed the night again). Prince Raiden wasn't in a playful mood this time and just went to bed, thinking badly of himself that he didn't protect his mother. In Prince Rain's bedroom, Prince Rain is still mourning for his mother as Tioga tried comforting him. Poor Rain Bell... It's his first time losing a dear family member. His younger parents are not sleeping yet as they are in the King's bedroom, checking memories that they would have.

Young Prince Zeon stayed in the same room with his older self, sleeping against a wall while adult Zeon's wife is staying with the elder King Gash. Nurse Tio and Ninja Captain Kyanchome went back to their own homes after Nurse Tio and the rest of the Medic Division checked on the injured soldiers in a medical room of the palace.

Scene: Demon King Gash's Bedroom (dawn)


Before going to sleep, adult King Gash was looking over photos that he and Patie have taken over the years, showing them their photo album to Princess Koruru, young Gash, and young Patie on his grand king-sized bed. Young Patie said, "Wow, I look so pretty in that pink tiara. And Gash-chan is so handsome." Adult King Gash said, "I gave you that on your 11th or 12th birthday after you lost that golden one at school because of bullies. That was us when we were at a fun park when I was 15. We had great times." After a few page flips in his photo album, adult King Gash said, "And here is a family picture at the same park we've been to 7 years ago. Our boy Raiden was very hyper and wild when he was around your guys' age but he became a bit calmer after Rain was born. Hehe! He really kept us busy. And that's our newborn Rain, just a year old. When he was first born, his birth caused a rainstorm, which is why we called him Rain, and after one of our friends Rein. I hope he didn't die in this war too." Young King Gash said, "I don't want anyone else to die." Adult King Gash said, "I hope so too, but we are war and people die during wars. When I wanted to become King, I wanted to end all battles. I never got that wish and I used my wish to restore all demon souls that weren't in their bodies." He then puts his photo album away and said, "I miss Mom, Dad, and Patie so much." Princess Koruru said, "I miss her too. She was like a sister to me." Young Patie said, "I'm still here." King Gash said, "I know. And seeing you is making me feel better, even though your not my Patie. Let's get some rest." The three said, "Okay/Unu."

As the rest were ready for bed, the young King and his girlfriend returned to Rain's bedroom for the rest of the dawn before the golden star shines.
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While they were sleeping and dreaming in Rain's bedroom, young Demon King Gash Bell was shaking. He was having another nightmare and woke up, screaming in fear and breathing heavily while sitting up. His scream wakes up his girlfriend but surprisingly, everyone else was still asleep. Young Patie sat up and wondered, "Are you okay? Did you have another bad dream?" Young King Gash said quietly, "I don't want to say. I don't want this one to come true too." Young Patie begged, "Is it something bad again?" Young King Gash said quietly while crying slowly in paranoia, "I... I don't want to..." Young Patie said quietly, "You can tell me." Young King Gash was still paranoid, "I... don't want to..."

Meanwhile, back in the King's bedroom, the elder King Gash was having a similar nightmare... While they were sharing a similar nightmare, the younger Gash was thinking in his sleep, I don't want to die!
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List of Chapters (remake) on DeviantART

Volume 1: Demon Revolutionary War - The Revolution Begins
Volume 2: Demon Revolutionary War - Climax of Chaos
Volume 3: The Zulu Empire
Volume 4: Revolution from the Dead
Volume 5: The Fallen King - Reign of Chaos
Volume 6: The Fallen King - Battle of the Dead
Volume 7: The Fallen King - For the Nether

List of Chapters (original/obsolete) on DeviantART

Volume 1: The Revolution Begins
Volume 2: Climax of Chaos
Volume 3: The Zulu Empire
Volume 4: Pre-Revolution Army [Chapter 15 extension]
Volume 5: Revolution from the Dead [Chapter 15 extension]
Spin-off Chapters [non-canon chapters]
First written on June 13, 2015. Finished writing on June 25, 2015 (I think). Published at DeviantART on August 25, 2015.

List of updates in this chapter
  • Update #1 (November 8, 2015, 11:05 p.m. EST): [MAJOR UPDATE] Adding the term "magitech" in a few parts in this chapter and indicating that Faudo's demonic powers were converted into magitech powers.
  • Update #2 (May 12, 2019, 5:49 p.m. EST): [MAJOR UPDATE] Made a lot of grammar fixes (but there are possibilities some exist) as well as changing/altering the story towards the end, not only to remove some questionable scenes (that I don't enjoy keeping) but to add a new small twist in the story. I haven't re-read it afterward so I don't know what new errors I may have left (I'm trying to save some time while I'm inspecting more chapters as this chapter's inspection has gone long enough). To adapt to my new change(s), I may also have to make some tweaks in Chapter 8.

List of characters in this chapter
Ordered from first to last. If a character was mentioned before being seen, I will place that character where he/she was first seen instead of the first time that character was mentioned. I will also list their roles, whether they were a protagonist, supporter, or antagonist of the chapter (or for the entire fan fiction) unless if they were only mentioned (and italicize them). Characters with "†" symbol next to them are deceased/dead. I will also make two lists, a list of characters in the present time and a list of character in the past time.
Character roles:
  • Protagonist: Heroes that will commonly appear in each chapter.
  • Protagonist/Supporter: Heroes that won't get much attention but will still appear or at least be mentioned in each chapter somehow.
  • Supporter: Hero/neutral characters that will only appear in a chapter or two.
  • Antagonist: Evil characters. The entire Demon Revolution Army are the antagonists of my fan fiction.
  • Mentioned only: Background characters that are only mentioned that don't have any role in my fan fiction.
Present characters
Past characters

Copyright
This fan fiction and original characters: ©NejiHyuga900/TDPNeji
Konjiki no Gash (Bell)!! / Zatch Bell!: ©Makoto Raiku
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