Monday, September 3, 2018

Golden Gash!!: Demon Revolution Army (remake) [Chapter 10]

Golden Gash!!: Demon Revolution Army (remake) [Chapter 10]

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Golden Gash!!: Demon Revolution Army user guide



Golden Gash!!: Demon Revolution Army (remake)


Golden Gash!!: Demon Revolution Army, also known as "Konjiki no Gash!!: Mamono no Kakumei-gun (金色のガッシュ! !：魔物の革命軍)" and "Zatch Bell!: Mamodo Revolution Army" is a Zatch Bell! / Konjiki no Gash (Bell)!! fan fiction that I created. This fan fiction takes place directly after the manga, more specifically after the one-shot Konjiki no Gash!! Gaiden manga. It takes place a whole year after the Demon Battle of the third millennium (200X A.D.) has started. 27 years later, an evil organization called the Demon Revolution Army is formed. This Revolution Army plans on overthrowing the kind King Zatch (Gash) Bell and put Demon World into chaos. Heroes, including Raiden Bell and Rain Bell, who are the (theoretical) sons of King Zatch (Gash) Bell and Queen Patie (Penny) Bell, as well as Zeon Bell (now a good demon) and his Demon World Military, are trying to put a stop to them. Can these heroes stop this revolution army from overthrowing King Zatch (Gash) Bell and prevent chaos from occurring in the Demon World?

This is a remade version of the original Golden Gash!!: Demon Revolution Army fan fiction. The remake's storyline is similar to the original but written differently with some major changes to the story but still flows along with the original storyline. In this fan fiction remake, I will be using Japanese names and Japanese terms instead of their English counterparts.

Chapter 10: Light and Darkness


NOTE: This chapter is a remade version of the tenth chapter "Master of Chaos" of the original Golden Gash!!: Demon Revolution Army fan fiction series.

Recap


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The fourth major battle of the Demon Revolutionary War began. The Demon Revolution Army's co-leading Shinigami [死神, Death God] and second Death General Zecross, declared battle on Demon World with his own legion of undead demons. Demon World Military was outnumbered by Zecross' legion of the undead. However, Prince Raiden used his newest and strongest that he recently learned to destroy the entire undead legion and temporarily became unconscious afterwards from exhaustion and stress. Zecross was about to take advantage of this to make Raiden part of his undead army but Raiden was saved by his Aunt Koruru just in time. Zecross then called fourth his "royal" zombies, which were the deceased members of the Bell family. Commander Zeon and his military fought against his undead parents while Raiden and King Rain fought against their own undead parents. Suddenly, a phenomenon happened in which the spirits of Gash Bell and Patie Bell appeared and told their children to destroy their reanimated corpses. Raiden and Rain successfully destroyed their parents' corpse by combining their draconic spells, but it was no match for their Thunder Giant King grandfather. Zecross then suddenly summoned the rest of his undead legion. All hope was lost and Demon World Military was at a complete disadvantage. Zecross nearly won the war until an unknown entity from another world interrupted the battle and took Zecross' spirit and soul for breaking certain rules. No one knows what going on, but soon, the other mastermind of the Demon Revolution Army, Zega, is about to make his move.
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Scene: Outside the Capital City of Demon World (evening to sunset)


At least 17 hours has passed since the defeat of the second Death General Zecross. It's now the fifth day since the war was first announced. Everyone was lucky that the last battle was mysteriously interrupted otherwise the revolution army would have won the war. Two Death Generals remain although but today may be the final day of the revolutionary war. Back at the Bell Palace, the main party was wondering when the mastermind of the revolution army will strike so Demon World Military Commander Zeon sent some of his ninjas to scout for the remaining Death Generals including Ninja Captain Kyanchome, Vice Captain Byonko, two randomly selected Ninja Infantries, and Ninja Apprentice Pancho, only because Pancho asked and persuaded his father and military commander to join in the scout.

While the ninjas were searching for the remaining Death Generals, more specifically the revolution army's co-leader Zega as he appears as the bigger threat, Pancho thanked his father, "Thanks dad for letting me join you." Captain Kyanchome said while they were continuing their search in the wastelands of Demon World, "We only brought you with us since you're the only one that can to sense demon energy and see hidden objects." Pancho said, "I know." Vice Captain Byonko said, "The sooner we find these bad guys, the sooner Rain-sama can rule without worry-gero." As minutes went by, inside a hidden cave in a mountain, Zega detected demons outside the cave and reacted, "Hmm?! They're already here? It's still a bit too soon, but I guess I can play with these guys till then." Zega then went out of hiding and Pancho detected his evil, demonic presence, felt overwhelmed by the power of his energy, and said, "This energy I'm feeling? It's him!" Captain Kyanchome said, "Really? Who?" Pancho said, "That leader. His heart energy is so overwhelming, it's making me sweat." The ninja scouts stood and still and Captain Kyanchome said while taking out a communicator, "Alright, let's contact Zeon-sama and let him know."

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Before Captain Kyanchome could contact him, Zega teleported in-front of them from a far distance and quickly incanted, "Shirairuga!," shooting a beam of mixed light and darkness energy (known as twilight), aiming at the communicator, destroying it while injuring Captain Kyanchome's hand and Kyanchome held his hand in pain. Vice Captain Byonko reacted, "Kyanchome-senpai!," while Pancho reacted, "Dad?! Are you okay?" One of the Ninja Infantries said with kunai in both hand, "Why you?!," while the other subordinate held many shuriken in-between his fingers and said, "For attacking our captain and committing treason, we'll take you out now!" Captain Kyanchome said while holding his injured hand, "Wait!," but his ignorant subordinates ignored him and proceeded to attack Zega blindly with their ninja weapons. They threw their kunai and shuriken, targeting Zega,but Zega aimed the palms of his hands at the offensive ninjas and incanted, "Birakeru! Shidokeru!," creating a blast of light energy [Birakeru] from his left hand and attacked the ninja that threw shuriken and a blast of darkness energy [Shidokeru] from his right hand at the ninja with kunai, destroying their weapons along damaging the shinobi.

As his ninjas were knocked back and knocked out, Captain Kyanchome said, "This is bad. And that was our only communicator. Alright, guess we have no other choice; I'll one-shot him! Dima Buruku! Shin Poruku!" Captain Kyanchome unsheathed his katana, creating eight clones, and put Zega in a world of complete darkness and silence via disabling his senses of sight, touch, hearing, smelling. Zega casually wondered without any reactions, "Heh? What's this?," but Zega couldn't hear himself. Each Kyanchome clone proceeded to run around Zega and attempted to slash him on all sides one-by-one but Zega was managing to dodge all of Kyanchome clone's sword strikes and said, "Heh! Even if you were to disable all of my primary senses, I can still sense your demon energy." The Kyanchome clones and the real one then simulataneously attacked Zega on all sides but Zega countered with, "Shiraishirubao!," creating a spherical shield of light and darkness energies that blocked the Kyanchome clones' vertical jump slashes. The twilight barrier expanded, pushing away all of the Kyanchome clones and Kyanchome himself. Kyanchome's clones disappeared and his Shin Poruku ended and Kyanchome ordered his son with a loud voice, "Pancho! Get out of here! Warn everyone!" Pancho argued, "But father—" Captain Kyanchome strictly yelled, "NOW!," while Vice Captain Byonko said, "We'll hold him off-gero! Go tell Zeon-sama that we found him-gero! Nyusorudo!" Byonko created a sword of sharp, green slime and readied in combat. Captain Kyanchome said, "We're counting no you, son!" As Pancho was about to cast Inbisuruku to turn himself invisible while he was fleeing from the battle, Zega aimed his hand at him and said, "Oh no, you don't! Shirairuga!," and shot a beam of twilight energy at Pancho's direction but the ninja subordinates got back up and took the hit for him. The beam of twilight penetrated through their bodies and the Ninja Captain and Vice Captain reacted, "NO!!!" Vice Captain Byonko charged after Zega with his slime sword and Zega incanted, "Birasorudo!," summoning a sword of light energy in his right hand, warped in-front of Byonko and quickly slashed Byonko downwards from Byonko's left shoulder to his right hip. Byonko reacted in pain for a second before becoming unconscious. Captain Kyanchome cried out, "Byonko-kun!," then charged after Zega with his katana and clashed with Zega's Birasorudo. While both weapons were locked, Zega, with his left hand still opened, incanted, "Shidosorudo", summoning a sword of darkness inside of Captain Kyanchome, stabbing him immediately from the inside. Captain Kyanchome's katana dropped and reacted in pain. While the invisible Pancho was escaping, he cried out with sad tears, "Dad! Byonko-senpai!" Pancho wanted to return back to the field but he had a mission to report back to base so he cried while fleeing away from battle. Zega then slashed Kyanchome diagonally with his Birasorudo. Captain Kyanchome falls down, unable to say anything, and starts to bleed out. Zega deactivates his swords, senses Pancho's aura, and aimed his hand at the direction the invisibile Pancho may be at, preparing to strike him with another Shirairuga, while saying, "I may not be able to see you, but that doesn't mean I don't know where you are," then thought about it and said as he put his hand down, "On second thought, bring in reinforcements. By the time you come back with your friends, I'll be ready to have our final battle." Zega then fled away from the battle scene without confirming any of the ninjas' deaths.
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Scene: Royal Bell Family Palace (sunset)


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Everyone in the palace were doing their normal lives while they were in the palace: Prince Raiden was outside training his fighting skills, King Rain Bell was playing with his toys with the other youngsters including his girlfriend Tioga, his young parents King Gash Bell and Patie, and their friends Kyanchome, Tio, Schneider, Byonko and Koruru (earlier, King Rain was very depressed about having to destroy his parents' bodies, mourning over their graves under his own rain spell, but he's now alright), Commander Zeon was thinking about the revolutionary war and the opposing army at conference and his younger self was there with him leaning against a wall. Everyone else were relaxing in the living rooms.

Then all of a sudden, the great entrance door of the palace opened up with a great bang and came in was Pancho yelling, "Everyone!" Pancho was deeply sweating and breathing heavily with his tears dried and the first two that seen him in the throne room were Commander/Prince Zeon's wife Princess Koruru and Pancho's mother Tio, Head Nurse of the Military's Medic Division. Princess Koruru wondered, "Pancho-kun? You're back?," while Pancho's mother Tio asked, "What happened to you and where's your father?!" Pancho said while crying and shivering, "Father... he... he and the other ninjas sacrificed themselves to get me home. We lost communication and... they... they died fighting against the army's leader." Hearing that shocked Princess Koruru and Head Nurse Tio and Head Nurse Tio cried out in agony with her hands on her face, "What?! No, tell me that's not true!" Pancho prayed, "I hope it isn't but... I saw them we're slashed down. Darn it, I shouldn't have been a coward." Commander Zeon heard everything and said, "I thought so, no wonder why I lost communication with them a while ago." Princess Koruru said, "Zeon-anata..." Commander Zeon said, "If I would have known that this would have been a suicide mission, I wouldn't have sent you. But if you remember where they were last located, bring us there." Nurse Tio was upset and cried out, "Zeon-sama! How could you say such a thing to him when his father—my husband could be dead?" Commander Zeon yelled, "That's why I want him to take us there. We'll avenge them if they are dead. Pancho, can you take us?" Pancho yelled out, "Yes, Commander, sir!" Commander Zeon said, "I'll get everyone else!"
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Scene: Inside the Capital City of Demon World (sunset to second twilight)


Commander Zeon brought his remaining, active soldiers as well as some medics as backup, as well as the main group and they followed Pancho as Pancho guided them to where he and the other shinobi fought Death General #1 Zega. The other ninjas were worried about their fallen comrades. After Pancho told everyone what happened while they were rushing towards the scene, everyone were shocked and Tioga, who was on her mother's shoulders, cried out, "No! Not daddy! Ehhhehehe!," while young Kyanchome reacted while running, "Did... did I really die?!" Young Byonko reacted in worrisome, "Geroro-No!!!" Parco Folgore cried out dramatically, "At least they-a died like-a hero... right?!" Pancho cried out, "It happened right before my eyes. And yet... I was a coward. I didn't stay to fight back. I've done almost nothing this war." Commander Zeon said, "Well, that 'cowardice' of yours have given us information," while Prince Raiden said, "And you saved me when I went berserk. You're not useless, buddy; you've done a lot more for the world than you think." While having her crying daughter on her shoulders, Head Nurse Tio prayed while she and the other medics were rushing, please be alright, dear!

Scene: Outside the Capital City of Demon World (second twilight) and Battle vs. Death General #1 Zega


Before Pancho and the others were able to get into sight of the fallen ninjas, a demon, who was sitting on a rock pillar in a wasteland, said with a smile, "You're here. Just in time for the final battle." Everyone stopped and seen the mastermind behind the war: Zega. Commander Zeon yelled, "Zega! You son-of-a—Where's my comrades?!" As Tioga got off of her mother's shoulders, Nurse Tio begged, "Give me back my husband!" Tioga cried out, "My daddy! Where is he?!" Young Byonko asked, "And my cool-looking older self-gero!" Zega smiled said, "Drifting away into the Spirit World. Didn't that ninja-in-training tell you that?" Nurse TIo and Tioga deeply cried out, "No! That can't be true!" Commander Zeon yelled in anger, "Why you?! For all the crimes you've committed, you are hereby sentenced to death!" Prince Raiden punched the palm of his left hand and said with a fierce look in his eyes, "Yeah! We'll pulverize you until you're no more!"

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Zega said with a smile, "Heh! Fine by me! I wouldn't have preferred it any other way. Let the final game begin! Ginisu Burudon! Shidona Burudon!" Zega summoned about several hundred white entities made of light energy [Ginisu Burudon] and black entities made of dark energy [Shidona Burudon] and they fought against the remaining ninjas and knights of Demon World Military and the main group. Raiden stated, "Heh! More of these chumps?!" Among the knights, Knight Hyde wielded his two wind-themed swords and made his first move, "Heh! Let's slice 'em down!" A shadow creature appeared below him but Hyde slashed it. While the others were fighting, Hyde then proceeded to slash down a creature of light, "Take this!" Upon destroying a light entity, it created a flashing explosion and Hyde reacted, "Eh! I can't see." While the shadow creatures [Shidona Burudon] can hide within shadows and the dark to ambush their opponent, the light creatures explodes upon destruction and releases blinding light to blow away and possibly blind adjacent targets. As a shadow creature was appearing from Hyde's shadow, his comrade Reycom warned his partner, "Hyde, look out!," but Reycom saved his knight partner Hyde by slashing the shadow creature behind Hyde. Hyde thanked him, "Thanks pal!" The ninjas were having trouble, especially since they didn't have their upper-ranked superiors with them (but the Knight Division are still missing their superiors too but the Knight Division is stronger than the Ninja Division in combat as the Ninja Division was primarily meant for stealth and spying). Light creatures from Zega's Ginisu Burudon were exploding on the ninjas, blinding them while darkness creatures sneak attacked them but the demons from the main group saved them.

King Gash Bell and young Zeon incanted, "Zakeru!," launching out yellow and blue lightning bolts respectively to destroy some light entities while Wonrei came in to save some ninjas by incanting, "Gō Redoruku!," increasing his leg power and dive kicked a shadow creature that was about to attack some injured ninjas and said, "Are you okay?!" The injured ninjas said while grabbing some shuriken, "I'm alright."/"Thanks!"/"I'm not doing so well." A doctor and nurse of the Medic Division said, "We're on our way," and proceeded to heal some casualties and the Head Nurse [Tio] was healing some injured knights. Li Yen joins Wonrei and fights off against the shadow creatures together, back-to-back. King Rain and Tioga hasn't done much as Rain doesn't like to fight and Tioga is still feeling down and worried about her father. Parco Folgore, Kafka Sunbeam, Megumi Ōumi (who's been video recording the whole battle for "Demon World memories"), and Kiyomaro Takamine don't really do anything much as they aren't fighters, but tries if they are attacked, but Kiyomaro does have his Answer Talker psychic ability to predict attacks and counter. Even both the past and present Koruru were fighting the light and dark creatures with their Zeruku claw spell and because their berserk forms were extracted and destroyed a while ago, they were able to fight in their sane, normal forms. From a distance, Zega said, "Let's make this more interesting, shall we?," and his light and darkness creatures began fusing together, mixing their light and dark energies into twilight and combining their abilities and increasing their power. Everyone was having a much harder time and were getting attacked randomly on multiple sides. Raiden said while being attacked, "Okay, I just had enough of it. Ouch-a! Zakeru! Zakeru!" After being annoyed, Raiden shot two Zakeru, one from each hand, around him to get the twilight entities off of him.

Prince Raiden then said to his injured friend Pancho, whose been doubting himself, "Pancho, get it together!" Pancho said while fighting, "I'm trying," but he is having a hard time. He's genuinely smart and strategic, but for once he couldn't think straight, mainly because he's worried about his father. Raiden said to him while fighting off the twilight creatures, "Try harder. Aren't you supposed to be smarter than me? Listen, I know you are going through the same phase me and Rain went through but you shouldn't give up just because your dad is gone. Never give up and make him proud! You once saved me and you can save everyone." Pancho wondered, "I can?," then thought about it, that's right! Pancho regained focus and controlled his emotions and yelled loudly, "Hey dummies, over here!," while retreating in a direction away from the others. As the twilight beings heard Pancho, Pancho said, then incanted while clapping and bending his fingers over his hands, "Everyone, stay still! Rājia Inbishirudon!" Pancho created an obscure and abnormal invisible maze to trap all of the twilight entities while avoiding anyone else to get caught in his maze and incanted, "Oru Inbishirudo!," lifting his invisible maze while adding invisible floor and roofs to prevent the summoned creatures from going anywhere and performed a technique, "Invisibile Wall Technique: Labyrinth Crush [不可視の壁の術：迷宮圧潰, Fukashi no Kabe no Jutsu: Meikyū Akkai]!" Pancho folded his maze inwards while bringing every artificial being together, crushing them all until they disappeared.
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Everyone was surprised and Tioga said in happiness, "You did it, big brother! Now get that meany who took away our daddy!" Pancho said, "Got it!" Commander Zeon thought to himself with a smile, impressive. I might have to bring him into the real ranks. Zega smirked and said, "Heh! Impressive. You're not as a big of a coward as I thought you were." Pancho yelled, "I was never a coward!," while Prince Raiden stepped up and yelled, "Zega! You're next. We'll take you down and tear you apart!" Demon World Military readied their weapons for Zega. Zega said while chuckling, "Hehe! So you want to challenge the Destruction God of Twilight [黄昏の破壊神, Tasogare no Hakaishin]? Alright, I accept your challenge. Āgasu Amishirai!" While Pancho and Raiden were in the front row, Zega summoned a large spherical barrier of light and darkness, surrounding everyone else including the other main party members and Demon World Military. The others reacted, "What's this?"/"What's going on?" Raiden asked angrily, "Why you—! What did you do to them?!" Zega replied, "I don't want interference while we fight. Be sure not to touch my spell at a time like this." Inside the barrier of swirling light and darkness, young Kyanchome said, "W-what is this? Oh, looking at it making me dizzy." Kyanchome and some other people including the soldiers felt nauseous from looking at the swirling white and black barrier and Parco Folgore wondered, "Are you-a okay, Kyanchome?" A few knights and ninjas started taking action and a knight said, "You think this will stop us?! Everyone, attack!" Commander Zeon yelled, "Wait!," while Ninja Captain Kyanchome yelled, "Everyone, stay back!" They didn't listen. As soon as those few soldiers tried bashing through the barrier with their weapons, they suddenly disappeared completely and some wondered, "Where'd they go?!" Some demons tried casted offensive spells on the twilight barrier but their spells didn't activate. They wondered, "What?!"/"What's going on?!"/"My spell isn't working!"

Kiyomaro Takamine was worried, activated his Answer Talker psychic ability, analyzing this spell, and said, "Apparently this spell will warp you to another world or dimension if you touch it." Zega listened to Kiyomaro with his four ears and said loudly, "That human over there is correct. My spell is not only just a shield or trap, but it's also a gate to the Twilight World [黄昏界, Tasogarekai]." Pancho wondered, "Twilight World?" Everyone was confused. Another world that almost no one knows about? Zega continued, "You could say it's a colorless and distorted version of our Demon World; a parallel world. The reason why I decided to attack at a time and place like this is because, during dawn or dusk, Demon World and Twilight World are linked. This spell normally acts like a dome to trap enemies but when exposed to the twilight of time in either dawn or dusk, this spell functions as the Gateway to the Twilight World [黄昏界への玄関口, Tasogarekai e no Genkan Kuchi] and demon magic that aren't light or dark-affinity don't work in Twilight World or even inside its Gateway, like this spell." Prince Raiden got an idea and said, "In that case since, I'm out here, Zakeruga!" Prince Raiden quickly turned around 180°, crossed the fingers over his hands, and launched an electrical beam at the twilight barrier. However, the barrier of light and darkness apparently absorbed Raiden's Zakeruga and the barrier wasn't damaged at all. Raiden reacted, "What?!" Pancho wondered, "Raiden's attack did nothing?" Zega chuckled and said, "Heh! The Gateway to the Twilight World cannot be destroyed when its active. Even if your friends were to have spells of light or darkness, they cannot destroy it, and they can't warp outside the barrier; it's a whole new dimension. You'll all have to wait until after sunset passes..." After Zega said that, Kiyomaro, still having his Answer Talker psychic ability active, stated, "He's right. Besides knocking this guy out or unless if decides he frees us, there's nothing we can do but wait until nightfall." Zega continues, "...So in the meantime, let's have some fun, shall we?! Mwahahaha!" Raiden said, "Oh, we're going to have some fun alright! We'll kick your butt until your nothing" Let's go Pancho!" Pancho readied in combat and said, "I'll avenge my dad, Byonko-senpai, and my fellow shinobi!"

[Choose a variation of One-Winged Angel as the battle theme: #1 (FFVII), #2 (FFVII:AC), #3 (CC:FFVII), #4 (D:FF), #5 (KH1), #6 (KH1.5), #7 (KH2), #8 (KH2.5)]
Death General #1 Zega made his first move, "Alright! Take this! Birakeru! Shidokeru!" Zega shot a blast of light energy [Birakeru] from his right hand towards Raiden and a blast of dark energy [Shidokeru] from his left hand towards Pancho. Pancho countered Shidokeru by incanting, "Inbishirudo!," blocking it with an invisible shield, while Raiden evaded Birakeru by jumping away to his left side. Prince Raiden makes his move, "You'll be the first to face against my newly upgraded armor. Zakeru!" Raiden placed his right hand on the dragon logo of his yellow tanktop, electrocuting it, and shouted out as the Rai'oh logo glows, "Rai'oh Armor Level 2... activate!" Raiden summoned an upgraded version of his Rai'oh Armor. It looks similar to his Level 1 version except the golden dragon helmet has two lightning emblems instead of one, his golden armguards extended to being gauntlets, his golden body armor now covers his entire torso, and his golden boots covered his knees. Many demons were surprised to this new form and Pancho said, "Cool! I didn't know your armor got upgraded too." Raiden replied, "Thanks to dad, my armor grew stronger and I came up with some new techniques when I did some training. Double Thunderbolt! Helix Lightning!" Raiden charged electricity into his hands and created electrical spheres, then launched them as electrical beams towards Zega as they spun around in a spiraling, electrical beam. Zega countered with, "Shirairuga!," shooting a beam of twilight to battle against it and both attacks were evenly matched. Pancho was astounded and said, "Amazing!," but maintains his focus and says, "Now it's my turn! Inbishiruga!" Pancho launched an invisible wall at Zega but Zega anticipated it by teleporting away several feet away as Raiden's spiral lightning and Pancho's invisible shield collided and exploded.

Zega said, "Your invisibility spells won't fool me, young shinobi. I could have taken you out earlier if I wanted to, but that wouldn't have been much fun. Anyways, my Āgasu Amishirai would have functioned as a normal barrier by then. Anyways, now it's my turn to attack! Shidona Burudon!" Zega summoned shadow beings behind Raiden and Pancho and grabbed them, holding them down. Raiden and Pancho said, "Let go!" Zega said, "Ya' know what. As a self-proclaimed Destruction God, I need to cause more chaos and destruction during this battle. Might as well as least do that. Shin Shiraikeru!" Zega created a gigantic sphere of mixed light and darkness energies. Raiden, still in his Rai'oh Armor Level 2, reacted while held down, "Whoa! That is one huge ball!" Inside the Āgasu Amishirai, Commander Zeon thought to himself, is that the technique he used to destroy the school? This is bad! Zega threw the enormous ball of twilight, but he didn't throw it at Raiden and Pancho. As Raiden destroyed the black entity by generating electricity and Pancho shaking off the other one, Raiden said with a smile, "Ha, you missed! Where are you aiming that at?" As Pancho looked above, he said, "Uhh... Raiden..." Zega said, "Who said I was aiming that at you guys?" Instead, his powerful attack hit the Capital City of Demon World. Almost half of the Capital City of Demon World was destroyed and many innocent demons were killed as some citizens to trying to block it with magic but weren't strong enough. However, the Bell family's royal palace was still intact.

Raiden yelled in shock and anger, "You attacked our city?! What the heck?! Why did you do that for? That's it, I'm going to kill you!" Pancho said, "Raiden, allow me. I'll crush this guy until he's no more! I'll avenge father and everyone else! Giga Ra Inbishiru!" Pancho traps Zega in an invisible box. Zega thought, what now? Pancho then incanted, "Oru Inbishirudo! Invisible Wall Technique: Invisible Compactor!" Pancho started shrinking his invisible box down to size to crush Zega to death. Zega wouldn't be able to teleport outside in time and said as he pushed against the invisible walls surrounding him, "I see what you're trying to do. But it will take a lot more than that to crush me to death! Shiraishirubao!" Zega created a spherical shield of light and darkness around him inside the invisible box, which expanded, battling against Pancho's Giga Rai Inbishiru, destroying it.

Pancho thought, that shield is tougher than it appears. He defeated father's Shin Poruku with it. Raiden, still in his upgraded Rai'oh Armor, rushes towards Zega at a speed than he normally runs at and yells out in anger, "Lightning Fury!" Zega didn't have time to react but thought, he's fast! Raiden charges electricity into his arms and legs and repeatedly punched and kicked Zega at high speed. Zega tries blocking when possible. Raiden then shouts, "Lightning Kick!" and lands a quick electrical left kick on Zega. Raiden then spins his body in 180° and yells, "Thunder Kick!" and lands a hard electrical right kick on Zega's face, sending him flying. Pancho was astonished and said, "Holy crud, Raiden! You're fast!" Raiden's anger turned to excitement and he said, "Awesome! I'm really loving this new Rai'oh Armor upgrade. Time to use another new technique I came up with. Lightning Blades!" Raiden charged electricity into his arms and sharpens them to form electrical blades across the side of his arms. Raiden jumped straight forward at high speed and begins to slash while battle crying, "Argh!" Zega quickly incanted, "Birasorudo! Shidosorudo!" and summons a light sword and a dark sword to counter Raiden's Lightning Blades. Zega thinks to himself while holding off Raiden's Lightning Blades, this boy is a lot stronger than I imagined him to be. I need to stop going easy on these brats. Zega then de-summons high Birasorudo and Shidosorudo and incants, "Shiraisorudo!," to summon a wide greatsword of twilight energy, then made a heavy strike on Raiden's Lightning Blades to make Raiden to drop his guard for a second, then horizontally slashed Raiden across his golden armor. Raiden slightly reacted in pain, "Ahh!," as he was sent back to the ground. However, his armor was still fine but damaged. When Raiden landed on the ground, he changed the electricity on his arms into his fists and feet and he pushed himself off the ground at high speed after Zega again. Zega said, "What?" and Raiden shouted, "Thunder Fury!," and gave two strong electrical punches and a vertical downward electrical kick at Zega, knocking and slamming him to the ground. Pancho, still surprised, rubbed his eyes and said, "Wow, Raiden was holding back this much? The power-up his dad gave him is amazing!"

Raiden lands on the ground and Zega stands up and said, while breathing heavily, "Darn it, I really should stop going easy on you guys, especially you, golden brat! Wanna fight in battle armors, you got it! Shiraidoruku!" Zega summons a full armor made of rune material that glows in white and dims in darkness around him, which increases his physical attributes and resistance against light and darkness. Pancho stated, "This guy does not give up!" Raiden replied back, "Of course he wouldn't quit!" Zega yelled, "Not only my armor makes me stronger but it gives me immunity to light and dark-affinity spells so be blinded by my chaotic light! Rājia Biradon!" Zega created a field of bright light in the area, blinding everyone but himself (his twilight armor prevents him from being blinded by his own light). Everyone reacted, "My eyes!"/"I can't see!"/"I'm blinded!"/"That light!"/"It's so bright!" In the shining light, as Raiden couldn't see Zega or anyone else, he was suddenly being punched and kicked brutally and rapidly in close-range combat by Zega in his twilight armor. Raiden was sent flying, spitting out blood, and Raiden's Rai'oh Armor took a lot of damage. Zega said with a smirk, "Heh! You're a tough one. I'll destroy that armor of yours!" After everyone could see again, Zega incanted, "Shirairuga!" and shot a beam of light and darkness towards Raiden. As Pancho was able to see again, he jumped in front of the attack and incanted, "Inbishirudo! Oru Inbishirudo! Fortification!," and summoned an invisible wall, increasing its defense against Shirairuga. While blocking the attack, Pancho said to Raiden, "Raiden, attack now!" Raiden replied, "Alright, I'm preparing my strongest armor technique! Charge! Ahhh!" Raiden stores up potential electricity energy in his armor. "Ahhh!" Raiden kept shouting as he transfers the stored up electricity to his dragon helmet. Raiden then shouts, "Dragon Thunder!," and shot out a large dragon-shaped electrical blast at Zega from his dragon helmet. Zega responded to the attack, "Do you think that will work? Gigano Shirairuga!" Zega he shot a larger beam of twilight, destroying Pancho's Inbisuruga, but Pancho dodge rolled to his left to evade it and the attack left a crater in the ground. Zega then incanted, "Gigano Shirairuga!," again, shooting a large twilight beam towards the electrical dragon blast. While Zega wasn't watching, Raiden quickly moved to the side of Zega and yelled, "You shouldn't take your eyes of me! Rairyūken!" (雷龍拳, Thunder Dragon Fist, a parody of Shōryūken/Rising Dragon Fist) and gave Zega a hard rising electrical uppercut to Zega's chin, lifting him up in the air. Raiden then followed up with, "Lightning Fury!," dealing quick electrical punches and kicks to Zega and followed up with, "Thunder Kick!," and dealt a powerful, electrical kick to Zega's torso, sending him to the ground. Raiden dropped on the ground, heavily breathing and sweating, and his Rai'oh Armor broke from all of the beating and his armor will 12 hours to auto-repair.

Scene: Battlefield outside the Capital City of Demon World (night) and Battle vs. Death General #1 Zega


The sun fell all the way down. Nighttime began and Zega's Āgasu Amishirai spell expired. Zega said on the ground with his damaged twilight armor still attached, "No! Not now!" Everyone that were trapped inside the twilight force field yelled in relief, "We're free!" and Commander Zeon ordered his army, "Everyone, seize Zega! Do not let him to retaliate!" His Knight and Ninja Divisions replied, "Yes, sir!," and proceeded to chase after Zega to surround him. As Zega was getting up while breathing heavily, he was getting very irritated and said, "Darn it! I will not let it end like this! Ahhh." As Zega yelled, he deactivated his Shiraidoruku and as his twilight armor was disappearing; all the amount of fighting energy that was used for the armor restored Zega's health and heart energy. Commander Zeon ordered his army, "Arrest him, now!" As Demon World Military was about to strike from all directions, Zega incanted and yelled angrily, "Shiraidoruku! Be swallowed by my darkness! Rājia Shidodon!" Zega re-summons his twilight rune armor—now completely repaired—and created a void of complete darkness in the area, surrounding Demon World Military and everyone else. Suddenly, everyone's voices were completed muted, unable to perform spells and some of the military was about to strike with spells too. Zega flew into the pitch-black air. Even in complete darkness, everyone could still somewhat see each other but weren't able to speak with each other. While Zega was in his Shiraidoruku armor, he was still able to talk due to the armor's immunity to light and dark spells, and said to everyone, "I wish I didn't have to do this. I really wish I didn't have to do this and hate doing this, but you gave me no choice. I won't take anymore chances to continue playing, so I'll perish and obliterate you all right here, right now, along with half of Demon World with my most destructive and powerful spell, Shin Shirairadisu!" Zega charged up a colossal sphere of mixed light and darkness energies, appearing similar to Shin Shiraikeru but appearing more larger and with a bluish color. As the others wondered why Zega could speak while they can't, Commander Zeon having a dreadful feeling, I knew it! He too possesses an Unforgivable-Forbidden spell; one that requires the mastery of light and darkness affinities . This is bad! Really bad! Unless if we can somehow stop him, Demon World will be completely destroyed with everyone on it! Like Zeon said, this forbidden spell requires the demon to master both light and darkness magic and be in balance with light and darkness; if one were to try to cast this spell unbalanced, this spell would backfire and destroy the user instead, but Zega is capable of using and mastering this spell but it's his first time actually using it and this spell can completely destroy Demon World when charged at maximum power but Zega will only charge up by less than half the amount as he doesn't want to completely destroy this world. As everyone prepared to somehow strike back without magic, someone outside the black void incanted loudly, "Fō Supuporuku!," forcefully telling Zega's brain to cancel his Shiraidoruku, Rājia Shidodon, and Shin Shirairadisu. Zega was greatly shocked as to why his spells disappeared and wondered, "What's going on? What just happened? Why did I suddenly hold back? I know I wanted to avoid destroying this world as much as possible, but I didn't held back that much."
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Everyone wondered what happened and were confused. Zega then noticed a man in a black ninja gi crawling on the ground and said with irritation, "You! Darn, I knew I should have finished you off back then!" Everyone wondered, "Who?," then looked in the direction Zega was looking and seen Ninja Captain Kyanchome on the ground, alive but exhausted, and said, "Heh! That was your biggest mistake... I don't die that easily!" Pancho reacted in surprise, "Dad?!," while Tioga wondered and cried out, "Is... is that... Papa?!" Captain Kyanchome while laying on the ground, "Heh!" Commander smiled and said, "Heh!," then thought to himself while making a concerned face, at least my Ninja Captain survived, but what about his lieutenant and infantries? Head Nurse Tio, Pancho, and Tioga ran towards their fallen beloved and Head Nurse Tio cried out, "Darling, you're alive! I was so worried, I thought we lost you. Let me heal you." While Head Nurse Tio cried and used her Healing Touch ability to restore Captain Kyanchome's health, Tioga cried out, "Papa! You're alright!" Captain Kyanchome said, "I'm sorry to make you worry, Tioga-chan, and everyone." Pancho cried out, "I... I thought you died. I seen you slashed down." As everyone else came over, young Kyanchome too was crying in tears and said happily, "Looks like I am invincible! The invincible-iron Kyanchome!" And young Kyanchome and Parco Folgore started singing while raising their arms, "♪ Tetsu no Kyanchome [Iron Kyanchome]! Muteki Kyanchome [Invincible Kyanchome]! Tetsu no Kyanchome! Muteki Kyanchomeeeee! ♪" Adult Captain Kyanchome laughed and said, "Hehe, I haven't heard song that in a long time. Brings back old memories."
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Pancho said, "I'm glad you are alive dad, but what about Byonko-senpai?" Pancho said. Kyanchome looked depressed and said, "About that..." Zega was irritated, got impatient and yelled, "That's it. Next time I won't hesitate to unleash my forbidden spell! Shin Shirairadisu!" Zega was creating another colossal ball of twilight again, capable of destroying Demon World. The others reacted, "Not again!" Captain Kyanchome said, "Darn, I don't have enough energy to cancel it again! Wait, younger me, cancel his attack!" Young Kyanchome said, "O-oh, right!," but Prince Raiden interrupted and said, "Wait, let us to deal with this attack ourselves!" Commander Zeon thought his nephew was crazy and yelled, "Are you insane?! That spell will blow up this entire world! Everyone will be dead!"

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Prince Raiden said with a serious look, "Have faith in us. I want to do this as a family. Are you with me, Rain-sama, young dad, and young mother? We will protect this world from creeps like him!" Upon saying those words, young King Gash said, "Unu! We'll protect this world no matter what and bring peace back where it belongs!" Raiden said, "And after that that, we'll save the past from a horrible future!" King Rain gain confidence from those words and said, "And... as the new King of Demon World, I will make this world into a peaceful world with no bad demons like him." Young Patie wanted to join in and said, "And as future Demon Queen, I too want to help protect this time too, with my family of the future! I want to become Demon World's greatest and kindest queen!" Gash smiled and said, "Unu!" The four focused all of their power to each other's hearts, as well as synchronizing their minds. Young King Gash's body glowed red and gold, Raiden's body glowed yellow, King Rain' body glowed turquoise, and young Patie' body glowed orange. The main party reacted, "This power...?!" Raiden incanted, "Rai'oh Zakeruga!," and summoned a giant, electrical-winged dragon. Young King Gash incanted, "Shin Beruwan Baō Zakeruga!," and summoned a ginormous thunder dragon; his most powerful spell that he unlocked from the golden spellbook during the second-to-last fight of the Demon Battle. King Rain incanted, "Baō Zakeruga!," summoning a full-powered Baō Zakeruga immediately. And young Patie incanted, "Shin Suō Giakuru!," summoning a ginormous water dragon that she once received from Gash's golden spellbook in Gash's second-to-last battle during the Demon Battle.

As Demon Prince Raiden Bell, Demon King Rain Bell, young Demon King Gash Bell, and Queen Candidate Patie summoned their most powerful dragons, they synchronized their hearts, bonds, and strengths and fused their dragons into one powerful hydroelectric dragon. It was extraordinary enormous (bigger than King Gash's strongest spell Shin Beruwan Baō Zakeruga) and it was mostly made out of golden electricity with some water flowing through it from Patie's Shin Suō Giakuru. Everyone was extremely astonished on how powerful this fusion dragon appears to be. As the gigantic dragon gave an enormous roar, Demon World started raining and storming. Zega said in surprise while building up his Shin Shirairadisu, "What... what is that spell? No matter! I'll obliterate it with only half of Demon World!" From in mid-air, Zega threw his colossal twilight sphere of absolute destruction towards the colossal hydroelectric dragon. Commander Zeon prayed, please, don't let his forbidden spell hit the surface of Demon World or we're doomed! We're putting our faith in your hands, but we do have back-up plans if you shall fail. We'll make sure to protect everyone if this plan doesn't work. Everyone else was praying too, hoping that the fused dragon spells will be able to stop it. As Zega threw his Shin Shirairadisu, the ultra-hydroelectric dragon shot larges stream of super-highly-pressured water blasts with golden electricity in its currents at Shin Shirairadisu from each of its dragon mouths and both attacks were evenly matched. The four young demon casters gave a loud battle shout, "Arrrrrgh!," and gave all of their energy to their fused dragons and the fused dragon increased its power and pushed Zega's Shin Shirairadisu back at him. Zega reacted in surprise and fear, "IMPOSSIBLE! For my ultimate spell to be defeated?! Noooo!!!" As his own spell was returning back to him, Zega calmed down and decided to accept his faith and chuckled, "Heh! I guess this is it. To be killed by my most powerful spell. Impressive! Ha! It was really fun while it lasted! Alright, I'll accept my death. You win Demon World." Zega let his own spell kill him as the giant dragon pushed Zega's spell out of Demon World's atmosphere. Then the dragon disappeared.
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After a few seconds of silence, everyone was relieved and congratulated the four youngsters who defeated the co-leader and first Death General of the Demon Revolution Army. Everyone was happy that Demon World of this time era was saved! The four young demons waved back in excitement and felt victorious. After the loud cheers from everyone, Raiden said to Pancho, "We got him! Sorry buddy, I know you wanted defeat him." Pancho said, "It's fine. Now that I know my dad is alive, I have no dire for revenge anymore." Pancho then realized and said, "Wait, dad! What about Byonko-senpai and our comrades?" Young Byonko was worried and said, "Yeah, what about my older self-gero?" After Captain Kyanchome was healed by his wife, he sat back up, felt depressed and said as he closed his eyes, "I'm sorry. They're gone." Everyone was surprised, but figured. Captain Kyanchome said, "Byonko-kun, you were like a brother to me. While I was on a brink of death, you sacrificed your life to save mine..." Ninja Captain Kyanchome explains what happens as he remembers...

[Flashback] Scene: Near Zega's latest base after the first battle with Zega


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After Zega assumingly killed all the ninjas that were still nearby his secret base among the mountains and left, Captain Kyanchome was left at a brink of death—unconscious—waiting to die from bleeding out, but Ninja Vice Captain Byonko was a little bit more alive and conscious. Vice Captain Byonko crawled up to Captain Kyanchome in pain and said to him while Captain Kyanchome was unconscious, "K-Kyanchome-senpai, I-I won't let you die l-like this. Gero... Y-you have done s-so much f-for me ever since I-I lost my f-family-gero. Y-you've been a b-brother to me-gero. I p-promised the f-former queen... that I w-would get r-revenge and I s-somehow accomp-plished that-gero. A-and you s-still... have a f-family to r-raise. T-this will be m-my last s-spell... gero." Vice Captain Byonko coughed out blood, then incanted, "Nyujio!," covering light-green slime on Captain Kyanchome's wounded body so he can heal him. Byonko tries turning around to save his other comrades but dies from blood lost before reaching his fellow shinobi.

A minute later, Captain Kyanchome wakes up and sees the healing slime disappearing on his body. Kyanchome was only slightly healed so he's still extremely injured. "Ahh-chachacha!" Kyanchome reacted in pain as he tried to move his body. He turns his head around and looks at Vice Captain Byonko's body on the ground and said, "B-Byonko-kun?" He crawled up to his lieutenant, hoping he was still alive. "Byonko-kun? Tell me... your still alive..." Captain Kyanchome came up to his partner's corpse and after confirming Byonko's death, he cries and said, "No! Why did you heal me instead of yourself? Byonko-kun!" Captain Kyanchome cried at loss of a close friend and adoptive brother. He closed his buddy's eyes, then checked on the deaths of his infantries. After starting to lose hope, grieving in despair, Captain Kyanchome looks to the left and notices that a battle between Raiden, Pancho, and Zega was about to begin and crawls towards the battle.
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Scene: Outside the Capital City of Demon World (night)


Patie felt heart-hurted hearing the story and said, "Poor Byonko-san." Young Byonko cried in sadness and said, "Gyahehehe! At... at least... gero... I died protecting a friend... a brother! I was a really cool guy." Captain Kyanchome said while being healed by his wife, "Yeah, you were a great friend... and a great adoptive brother when you used to live with me." While Captain Kyanchome was sitting back up while his wife was still healing him, his wife Tio was worried and said, "Kyanchome, you need to lie down. I'm not done yet." As Captain Kyanchome said, "It's okay. I am Iron Kyancho—" he reacted in pain on his torso, "Ahh-chachacha!" Head Nurse Tio teased and said, "Iron-what now?" Everyone laughed.

Scene: Inside the Capital City of Demon World (night)


After a long talk, everyone walked back to the ruined city and Raiden said as sighed, "Ehh... all of this damage. It will take forever to repair all of this." Pancho said, "More importantly, I wonder about our friends." Raiden said, "Let's hope that they are all right. I'm sure at least Nekolas-kun is okay as he lives too far away from here, but I wonder if the others survived the blast." Pancho said, "Sucks for him. He wanted to fight in this war and now it's over." Raiden said, "Hehe! I'm sure he wanted to but because of his strict dad... that's gotta suck! Anyways, I'm glad this war is over." Pancho wondered, "But what about that crazy scientist? Is he still alive?" Raiden, not caring, replied, "Who knows? Who cares?" Speaking of that crazy scientist...

Scene: One of Dr. Zulu's Secret Laboratory (night)


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Somewhere below the surface of Demon World lies some sort of laboratory, filled with electronics, experiments, and other scientific things. Inside a medical room of this laboratory appears to have what appears to be a man inside a medical machine with some kind of healing liquid. A bronze-colored robot came into the room and said to the man in the healing chamber with a robotic voice, "Zulu-sama...," then it makes beeping sounds but the man, revealed to be Dr. Zulu, said, "I see." His voice was amplified outside the chamber and he continued, "So Zega-sama was killed too. I guess that's it for the revolution army, but I no longer care about the revolution army anymore." Dr. Zulu appears to be different from before. For one thing, He's not wearing anything but underwear inside the healing tank and his mouth is covered by an oxygen mask on a cord. Also, his bionic eye was modified and the trims of his bionic eye were re-colored to gold and his gray hair were covered with some machinery that's the size of his hair. Dr. Zulu finally converted himself from a pure demon cyborg into a magitech demon cyborg with the help of his Zulu Bots. Dr. Zulu says to the Zulu Bot standing in-front of him, "So, Unit ZB-079, what's the status on my new generation of robots: My Dembots?" Zulu Bot #079 replied, "89% completed, sir," and gave a few beeps.

The healing tank then buzzed, indicating that Dr. Zulu is completely healed and rejuvenated. The healing water that was in it, which originated from Faudo, drained away. The healing chamber's glass door opened and as Dr. Zulu walked out a few steps, he said, "I see." He then put on his ruined lab coat, ruined jeans, and boots that were outside the chamber. He then gave a small, evil laugh, "Zehehe!," and said, "It's almost time. Once my Dembot army is assembled, we'll initiate Operation: World Domination. Don't worry, my previous gen Zulu Bots, you're still my babies but I need a stronger army for this mission. You'll stay here and protect my labs." As he exited the medical room and walked into a lab with some kind of transporter and many other equipment and scientific things, he equipped a cyan-color wristband with Demon World's logo on his right arm and said, "I, the great evil genius Dr. Zulu, will build an empire—the Zulu Empire—and conquer the Human World and dominate all of mankind. Normally, demon magic doesn't work outside of Demon World but with this magical wristband I constructed—my limiter removal wristband—I should be able to cast spells in the Human World on my own without a spellbook and a filthy human. It's a good thing I studied Faudo before he was destroyed. It's interesting how he possessed a power to warp between worlds. Time to open the barrier between Demon World and Human World!" Dr. Zulu walks towards a black transportation device and pulls down a level, activating it, which discharged electricity from its tesla coils, creating a dimensional portal to the Human World. Dr. Zulu said, "It works! I have gained access to the Human World! Thank you, my Zulu Construction Bots for finishing my transporter! I'll be sure to create a second one to return to Demon World. Once I take over Human World as its new emperor, I'll conquer Demon World and become the new Demon King... no, wait... Demon Emperor! Zehehehe! Just you wait Human World, your new emperor will be arriving soon enough with an army of Dembots once they are completed! Zaaahahahahaaa~~~!"

The Demon Revolution War may be over but a new threat appears. Former Death General #7 Dr. Zulu of the Demon Revolution Army disbanded the revolution army after the death of the other Death Generals and plans on conquering the Human World as an emperor. So, this was the "other project" that Zega once mentioned. It seems that the Demon Revolution Army not only wanted to conquer and drive Demon World into pandemonium, but it seems that they also wanted to conquer the Human World too. And about Dr. Zulu's new generation of robots, what are these Dembots (デムボット, Demubotto, short for "Demon Bot" [魔ボット, Mabotto])? How much stronger are they compared to his first gen Zulu Bots? Right now in one of Zulu's robotic factories, his Zulu Construction Bots are currently constructing and developing four larger and stronger Dembots that could possibly rival the powers of a Demon Revolution Army's Death General. These four large robots appeared in animal-like forms and after being completely built, their eyes opened and started glowing sinistrously.
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List of Chapters (remake) on DeviantART

Volume 1: Demon Revolutionary War - The Revolution Begins
Volume 2: Demon Revolutionary War - Climax of Chaos
Volume 3: The Zulu Empire
Volume 4: Revolution from the Dead
Volume 5: The Fallen King - Reign of Chaos
Volume 6: The Fallen King - Battle of the Dead
Volume 7: The Fallen King - For the Nether

List of Chapters (original/obsolete) on DeviantART

Volume 1: The Revolution Begins
Volume 2: Climax of Chaos
Volume 3: The Zulu Empire
Volume 4: Pre-Revolution Army [Chapter 15 extension]
Volume 5: Revolution from the Dead [Chapter 15 extension]
Spin-off Chapters [non-canon chapters]
First written on August 6, 2015. Finished writing on August 16, 2015. Published at DeviantART on September 3, 2015.
List of updates in this chapter
  • Update #1 (November 8, 2015, 11:15 p.m. EST): [MAJOR UPDATE] Adding the term "magitech" in the final section, telling that as of the end of this chapter, Dr. Zulu has converted himself from a regular cyborg into a magitech cyborg.
  • Update #2 (August 12, 2015, 11:48 p.m. EST): Added some drawing links to some random military units that disappeared into the Twilight World via Zega's Āgasu Amishirai (will also add links to the other chapters featuring them but without notice). I also fixed some grammar that I noticed as I was trying to find the part where Zega sealed everyone in his Twilight World barrier spell (but not all of them; just the ones that were in the way).
List of characters in this chapter
Ordered from first to last. If a character was mentioned before being seen, I will place that character where he/she was first seen instead of the first time that character was mentioned. I will also list their roles, whether they were a protagonist, supporter, or antagonist of the chapter (or for the entire fan fiction) unless if they were only mentioned (and italicize them). Characters with "†" symbol next to them are deceased/dead (multiple "†" incidates that the character died more than one time). I will also make two lists, a list of characters in the present time and a list of character in the past time.
Character roles:
  • Protagonist: Heroes that will commonly appear in each chapter.
  • Protagonist/Supporter: Heroes that won't get much attention but will still appear or at least be mentioned in each chapter somehow.
  • Supporter: Hero/neutral characters that will only appear in a chapter or two.
  • Antagonist: Evil characters. The entire Demon Revolution Army are the antagonists of my fan fiction.
  • Mentioned only: Background characters that are only mentioned that don't have any role in my fan fiction.
Present characters
Past characters
Copyright
This fan fiction and original characters: ©NejiHyuga900/TDPNeji
Konjiki no Gash (Bell)!! / Zatch Bell!: ©Makoto Raiku
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